My Wife Is a National Sister

Generally speaking, there is no problem, but judging from the current situation, it feels like the author is still struggling with who the first heroine is? While writing a strategy for school girls, I have to constantly increase the emotional drama of my ex-wife, which makes people look weird. Especially the recent chapters about the ex-wife's depression, but I also found it strange and a bit hard to read.

I actually really don't understand why writing a dog food article should be set in the setting of divorce... There must be a reason for divorce, either it's green, there's a secret, or the relationship has dissipated. If it is the ex-wife who cheats on the male protagonist, this is inconsistent with the tone of the dog food novel, just like chocolate with a layer of s on the outside, and you don't want to touch it. If there is a secret, then the existence of the ex-wife is just adding to the trouble. I originally read the dog food article just to eat dog food in a simple and comfortable way, but in the end, I kept thinking about the ex-wife when I was watching the love story. There are many tools to promote the development of the plot, but it is the ex-wife who is naturally at odds with Gou Jiangwen. What is the purpose? If the relationship is gone, there is nothing wrong with it, but what is the point of having an ex-wife? Just to have a daughter? ? Of course, this is not to criticize the author or anything, I just simply wonder why divorce ➕ex-wife is set in the dog food article...

The ex-wife is so pitiful, so let the current protagonist save her! After all, if the protagonist lets the protagonist's former wife suffer so much, if the protagonist knows the reason why his ex-wife did this and ignores her even though they have no marital relationship, then there is something wrong with his character. After all, she is the wife of the original owner of the hero's body, so she will try to do something to repay her predecessor for giving him the right to use his body.

School Girls

I personally feel that... The author's focus is a bit off? The title of this book, when I first read it, I thought it was about Jian Meiyu. At the same time, until the main text volume, too much text is devoted to the past with Jian Meiyu. From the beginning to the main text, except for the occasional mention of Zhou Wanyue's genius, I have not seen much description of the national sister in the title of the book. The unreasonable arrangement of words and ink also caused Jian Meiyu to be too deep in the reader's impression, and it was difficult to arrange a dull ending. I hope it can be improved. Anyway, for new readers, I hope they won't be deceived and don't get hurt because of it.

Chapter 5 is too much. I advise you to reconsider. Don't be so disgusting.

Why are all the comments gone, and the author suddenly changed the plot, which is a bit embarrassing.

Now that the author has changed, I personally feel that it is not good to hold on to it like this, but I still hope that the role of the ex-wife can be reduced, and the sweetness between the male and female protagonists can be increased. Also, this book is actually a really good book. I think the author may not want his book to be a hit on the street. I hope the author can present a really good-looking book for us and himself! (I also apologize for my previous words, and will always support the author, come on!)

The author's writing is very attractive, but I always feel uncomfortable while reading it. Maybe it's because the protagonist is ruthless and ruthless. He can treat his daughter well while being indifferent to his ex-wife. Isn't it very awkward?

When I first started reading it, when I saw the male protagonist buying a house, I felt there was something wrong with the book, so I stopped reading it. After reading the book review, it seems that the heroine has been replaced? So what's the name of this book? My wife is a national sister...

Why are there so many entertainment articles about celebrity wives? Is this routine popular now?😥

Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit, what a magical thing

Thank you to the author for changing the messy plot of the ex-wife. It is much better after the change. In addition, I hope that the early exit can give a good ending, such as both parties knowing their faults. After all, the ex-wife still loves the hero and the family. It is not too late to arrange the ex-wife's exit. Please continue to work hard, the author.

Just leave her and return her ex-wife to heaven. She is not a human being inside and out. It's okay if she likes such a young sister. Either the ex-wife is completely bad, or she just hangs up and ends up looking pitiful and helpless, which is very heartbreaking.

There are so many narrations and not many lines. I don't know what the author wants to express. The ex-wife is portrayed very well. She loves the male protagonist so much that it doesn't matter who supports the family. For the man's poor self-esteem,

Sorry, I originally had the mentality of quitting if I don't like reading it, but I still can't help but complain about this book. The setting of the characters and the story in this book really made me look down a bit. I'll just practice writing as an author. I hope you stick to it and finish it. Anyway, I can't stand it any more, so I'm quitting!

I can't quite get the author's brain circuit. Reading an online article, I can see the stomachache I feel when reading realist literature. I'm really speechless. Why would you want to read such a good online article and write about those things that are not there? An ex-wife is inserted into the story of two people. The key is that the ex-wife has nothing to do with the protagonist (I skipped to read it. I don't know if I missed it, but in my opinion, the ex-wife is very white). It can even be said that she loves the protagonist, making the protagonist not a human inside and outside. I think the heroine can see the mistress's sense of déjà vu (although the heroine is not). This book feels like that, an online article doesn't look like an online article, it's just a literary work, but it doesn't have much connotation.

Very good work The theme should be, in fact, there is already a consensus on how to write this kind of theme, that is, the heroine is the main clue, and her joys, sorrows, and joys are all driving the development of the storyline. The portrayal of the male protagonist does not need to be so much foil (such as the early stage, of course, the role of the daughter is very good). For example, the early issues that everyone is struggling with now can be solved by the female protagonist after a few chapters. Talk to the ex-wife directly and solve it early. You can give the heroine skills such as psychology, or directly check the ex-wife's medical records. After this paragraph is written, the heroine will be very important in the hero's mind. At this time, let the ex-wife leave for a while, and leave for a while with the help of the protagonist. (Just a small suggestion, I hope the author can see it and laugh)

I haven't read it yet. Friends in the reading circle found that this doesn't seem to be to my liking.

The protagonist is somewhat older. . Thirty is almost there,

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I would like to give some suggestions to the author, and try to write as little as possible. The WeChat interaction between the heroine and the hero particularly affects the viewing experience. Sometimes it is inexplicable, you know! 🤔

Tauren,,,,,,,,

Have a child. If you don't want to be a baby daddy, why don't you feed me tender grass?