Give up the Power of Telepathy at the Beginning of the Apocalypse

I'm a little speechless. This is the person who has been struggling to survive for three years in the apocalypse? He hasn't left the dormitory yet, and he is already thinking about recruiting women. Even if you don't want to force the female teacher to get triple the attributes. But you can definitely get twice the attributes and sacrifice your own strength for a familiar stranger in the early stage of development. . Poisonous

It's the end of the world and I'm still thinking about women. I don't have the attitude of the end of the world at all.

Instead of choosing a national goddess who is completely loyal and capable of resisting and fighting as an H-class evolver, choose a beautiful college teacher who will betray you at the first sign of a threat and still be in a coma in the boys' dormitory for a month? , The system will not betray you, even a fool knows how to choose, what are you writing here?

The subject matter is okay, but every time I choose it, I will be left speechless. He always finds various reasons to downgrade his wits. You treat readers as novices, and the selection system must be invincible. This is a love novel, which is really embarrassing.

After seeing the Select Gun, I didn't want to watch it. If I hadn't been reborn, I would have understood it. But I have lived in the apocalypse for three years and still can't deal with three newly awakened zombies?

The subject matter and routines are relatively old-fashioned. If the protagonist is a reborn person, the description of the details of the battle is too rough and does not make readers feel that the protagonist is a reborn person. The abilities and items rewarded by the system are not rigorous enough. The character description is very average. These aspects are relatively new, but the author's writing style is actually okay. Generally speaking, the outline, branches and data are not rigorous enough. If you are writing a system article, you should pay attention to these (Manual dog head to save life)

The options are poorly designed. You are challenging the reader's IQ. Regardless of whether it is reasonable or not, you should have a main line to design things and rewards, such as dividing them into groups, bases, individuals or teams. Now this is too messy and seems mentally retarded.

It's so well written, especially the beginning!

The first few pictures don't have anything to say about it. The first few pictures are about S guidance. The next few pictures jump to being surrounded or rescuing people, and then what about the guidance technique?

Teacher, a normal person would be strong enough to have 15 attribute points. Are you kidding me? I chose 5 attribute points and then said something about how a person is always exhausted when the teacher clearly has 15 points. Isn't it bad to keep adding 5 points to increase physical strength? There is also a school with hundreds of people. The protagonist's current attributes can easily reach hundreds of attributes. It's fun to suppress and create such system rewards that conflict with each other👿👿👿👿When you kill your classmates, don't you decide to die just to survive?

It's a classic. If I didn't look at the time, I would have thought it was a book written in 2010. It's 2021. I wrote some bad plots ten years ago and still came up with it.

What I wrote before is okay, but why do we need to form such a large team later? Don't you understand that soldiers are always good? Can you train so many people? If there are too many people, it will only hinder the protagonist and forcibly reduce his intelligence.

Another novel that dwells on past lives?

Another piece of writing about a saint in the last days. It feels like the main character has lived like a dog for three years after the end of the world, which is not the least bit spicy.

I wipe it! This book review section! What happened? Did it offend someone? I feel like the writing is pretty good! Talk about novice! Aren't you talking nonsense? This is Xiaobai Shuangwen! ... The full score of 100 pictures in the Doomsday Book can be 85 points!

The appearance of the white woman immediately persuaded him to retreat.

There are reasons for bad reviews and lack of popularity.

Brainless white text, is this the end of the world? Isn't this romance? It makes me sick

You have been reborn and you still want the system? Is the profile true?

If you don't understand what you're writing, don't write. Change the subject quickly.

The author must have a certain IQ for the protagonist in his novel. It would be boring not to mention more than that.

I wrote about how the system became smart? I can't accept it and say goodbye!

The beginning was good, but it felt like it was getting worse as it went on. . . . . .

Is it impossible to write apocalyptic stories without evolvers? This routine has been used for many years, and you still use it. You are a backward-thinking guy.