Solar Douluo

The plot advances too slowly and is too long-winded! Your martial spirit completely restrains Tang San, and Tang San can't even avoid fire. He can only be immune to a certain temperature. As the sun in fantasy, your temperature should be higher than that of the earth. Tang San's blue silver grass spontaneously combusted before it grew. The concealed weapon will melt before it touches you. Everything under the sun is gray. He has not become a god and does not even have the strength to touch it. When you reach Soul Saint, you can burn a hole in Douluo. In the later stage, when you stand in the Tiandou Army and the martial arts are released and fully integrated, who will be your opponent? So the author can go to other planes to kill monsters. Just arrange for the author to pick up a plane traveling artifact. The combat power in Douluo is not very high, and Shen Zi is just a person who knows a little bit. The Godhead is the carrier of laws. The sun... Includes the law of fire. The law of harmony and life. Law of destruction. The starting point of life is like Blue Silver Grass. I can't live without you. So you have an absolutely overwhelming effect on him. It's like killing Tang San with ease.

This book is really bad. It is very slow to upgrade. You can upgrade according to the sun and moon, which means it will not stop and keep rising. It is still so slow. The protagonist is a waste. Tang San has been banned as Douluo, and the protagonist is only over level 70. Especially the part where the protagonist is dreaming poisoned me to death. I have no desire to read further.

In fact, as long as Tang San, Tang Hao and his son are killed, there will be no conflicts, and there will be no talk of grabbing the fairy grass. After all, the dead have no say.

Those things are just a bunch of false gods. After becoming a god, he was fucking trapped in the divine world. A true god has thousands of followers. The more believers there are, the stronger the strength. People have the Kingdom of God. Not like this bunch of false gods.

The core of Douluo Daluyi's story is that feudal imperialism, which had mastered the power of theocracy, destroyed another power group that had theocratic beliefs but fundamentally supported civilians to engage in the people's fundamentals and uphold justice. And it was in the form of personal vendetta. After Tang San accomplished this, he controlled the Douluo Continent with his personal monopoly for tens of thousands of years, and suppressed the spirit beasts from becoming gods. The disadvantages are also obvious. Because of Tang San's actions, evil spirit masters appeared in large numbers. Wuhun Palace does not allow unjust acts. There are no demons and monsters in Wuhun Palace. There are even people who slaughter the village directly after seeing the civilians take a breath (see Douluo II for details) And the main characters of Dou Yi have extremely poor personal ethics... They are all actions like a real villain gaining power.

Author, you have to understand that when you were born in Wuhun Palace, you had a grudge against Tangshan. If you don't seize the opportunity, you will die.

I guess Douluo didn't even understand that Wuhun Palace killed Tang San's mother, and he wouldn't stop fighting from the beginning, and he was still at peace with Tang San. Don't write about Douluo, the settings are all conflicting, it feels mindless

It's very silly to do this. As the protagonist, he will definitely be one of the leaders of Wuhun Palace in the future. He needs to have enough prestige, rather than getting along with each other in an equal way, and hiding. In the future, it is destined to be a superior-subordinate relationship. If it is a world where everyone is equal , it may not be a big deal, but in this world where everyone is unequal, this kind of friendship will put people with lower strength and status in a very embarrassing place. And I can also see that the author obviously wants the protagonist to forcefully pretend to be a slap in the face.

When I saw the chapters about thinking about Wuhun, I suddenly wanted to say something (PS: Who told me that I haven't recovered from my postgraduate entrance examination just now) First of all, we have to clarify a question: Whether Wuhun is materialistic or idealistic; this is a discussion about the essence of Wuhun, which determines the way we will explore Wuhun next. Next we need to determine a point of view: the relationship between "I" and Wuhun is the unity of opposites. Now we can bring into consideration the contradictory unity of opposites relationship to think about Wuhun: The first is the identity principle of contradiction, that is, the two sides of the contradiction are interconnected and interconnected unity. In other words, the change of the martial soul will cause the change of "I", and the change of "I" will also cause the change of the martial soul; this has been confirmed. Examples include the enhancement of "I" after the martial soul absorbs the soul ring, and the enhancement of the martial soul caused by Ning Rongrong taking medicine. The former is the martial soul changing "I", and the latter is "I" changing the martial soul. The second is the principle of struggle, that is, the conflicting parties are in a confrontational and mutually restrictive relationship, that is, the upper limit of "I" and the upper limit of the martial spirit are mutually restrictive. This has also been proven. Examples include the upper limit of "I" determining whether the martial spirit can absorb better soul rings, and the strength of the martial spirit affects whether "I" can break through. Then we have to study the quantitative and qualitative relationship between "I" and the growth of martial souls. It explains how martial souls grow and the necessity of cultivation and soul rings. (PS: There is too much content. If you want to know more, you can read the second section of the first chapter of Marxism, Materialist Dialectics (if I remember correctly)) Finally, we have to study the negation principle of the negation of Wuhun. It explains the direction of the growth of Wuhun, that is, the possible relationship between the unity of opposites and reality and the objective The relationship between regularity and subjective initiative (Section 3) simply means that the direction of the martial spirit's growth is uncertain but affected by human will, that is, possible and subjective initiative; but if you want the martial spirit to grow stably in the direction "I" want, then you need to consider the conditions of the martial spirit itself, that is, reality and the ability to follow objective laws.

It lacks defensive and therapeutic properties, so why not just bring in Hu Yanli and Ye Lingling?

After reading so many comments, I feel that the author is quite active. Let me share my personal opinions First of all, you can adopt some readers' suggestions, but don't adopt them all. You can adopt some that fit the plot, are interesting, etc. When writing an article, you must have your own outline and main line. I have seen many people who overly listened to the suggestions of book friends and revised the article, but basically never wrote it down. Secondly, this is a fanfic. The basic framework is the system of the original book. You can innovate some things that are not in the original book or mentioned, but once the power system exceeds this framework, it is basically over, or the map needs to be changed. For example, the time span between the first and second parts of the original book seems to be calculated in ten thousand years. You can insert your own original characters or plots in between. (I guess so, I've been reading for a long time) Another thing is, fan fiction should not follow the original book without changing the text. For example, the plot of the original book remains the same, but you are the only one, and the result is still the same. They also use the excuse that they don't want to change the plot to gain the advantage of being familiar with the plot. Fan fiction readers see something different, and what they see is the chaos caused by the collision of different ideas. If the plot does not change, it is better to read the original work. There are many Douluo fan writers. How your book stands out among so many books depends on the good points of your ideas. Another factor is the personal character of each character in the original book. Many books I have read do not depict the character of the original book. It feels like a different person, and what they say does not sound like what I said. The above is purely my personal thoughts after reading so many fanfics. I also like to read some fanfics. When I was short of books, I also thought about writing it myself, but I really don't have the writing style, so no matter how good the author's writing style is, at least write it out. Take your time, come on💪💪💪💪 …… …… ... ... Finally, I still want to say, don't let readers influence your thoughts. You are the author. You can't write to suit everyone's ideas. Some people like it and some don't. There is no need to cater to everyone. Just write according to your own ideas. People who don't want to read it will leave.

Don't brag, don't be slanderous, do some scientific calculations on Douluo Dalu

It is easy to match the strength of a mortal to a god. With his illusory Sun Martial Spirit. Absorb and replace the person of the sun. If you exist in the sun forever, if you die, the sun will perish. Substituting human power for heavenly power, he is not a god but is far stronger than a god. If you transcend the entire Douluo plane. Then replace the concept of stars with your own solar martial soul. If you die, the universe will remain silent forever.

Let you see how poisonous it is One centimeter thin slice, you can't imagine it

Retired, Tang San came from an ancient environment, and ancient times were more about filial piety. Looking at the experience before he came here, you know that even if Tang Hao is not his biological father, and his mother is not his biological mother, he will definitely find trouble in the Spirit Hall in the end. In addition, Xiao Wu's mother also died at the hands of Wuhun Palace, and it is impossible not to take revenge. So pig's feet were born in Wuhun Palace, and I can't think of any way to avoid confrontation with Tang San.

Solar rays, solar bombings, purification beams, solar winds, supernovas, helium flashes, class bombings, the largest disaster in the known history of Douluo Continent

So the protagonist's ultimate move is: pulling the sun? The effect is: pull the sun over and play with everyone and God directly?

Is your sun a bit watery? Alas, the sun is just a type of star. If you control the star directly, your energy will be almost endless. It has the ability to blow up the entire galaxy directly. Little do they know that in the super-god universe next door, Tirena, who is in her 20s, can directly intimidate the entire universe (note... This is still a little wet, it's not that I don't dare to mess with it, there is no need). You are a little wet, it is really solar energy. Not that high-end. The sun is a force beyond your imagination. Ah, there is no need to say that a supernova has erupted. It is as simple as that. Where should I stop? Who dares to mess with it when the sun shines? The gods in Douluo Continent are just like that. When writing about the sun, you can still refer to the blazing sun in Super Seminary. You can refer to it. After all, people have been playing with stars for hundreds of thousands of years.

Are you sick? Can your butt determine your thoughts? An heir to the Spirit Palace actually has a fondness for spirit beasts, and even spreads some stories that are obviously leaning toward spirit beasts to influence his sister. Fortunately, now the gods are selected from among the people, and there are gods above them, so the intelligent soul beasts dare not come out to cause trouble. Otherwise, it is still uncertain whether humans are the masters or the food now. If the Dragon God had defeated the God Realm back then, you would be food now. This is something Tang San did very well, whether it was the spirit beast or the Silver Dragon King. Obviously they are all designed to weaken the soul beast.

I am the moon chef, so the sun wheel, obey death, burn the sky and destroy the earth

There is only one question, who is the heroine?

Uh-huh

Will we vigorously develop civilian productivity in the future?