Keeper of the Lord of Mysteries

Amushia: No one knows what it's like to be a witch better than me! (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

A very good mysterious fanfic! I thought that mysterious fan fiction can only be written well by readers, but I didn't expect to find another one today. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I have a certain idea about this, but I don't have a specific plot arrangement. I hope you can give me some suggestions. The idea is as follows: Lawyer ability settings: 1. Ability to detect imbalances and incongruities, which vary according to one's common sense and viewpoints 2. It is easy to convince others with words, and it is easy for others to tell them the information they want. 3. It is easy to detect contradictions in the other party's words and deeds through body language and tone changes. 4. Ability to distort or even confuse the other party's thinking to a certain extent The idea of role-playing method: 1. The arbitration tribunal within the Church of the Goddess of the Night is mostly for listening and learning and communication, and does not directly affect important decisions. 2. Various aspects of daily work as a night watcher 3. Find a law firm to become an assistant or directly become a lawyer 4. Join a legal club to get to know your peers and gain experience by debating with them. 5. Familiarize yourself with grammar books and compare them with modern laws, and deduce ways to improve them to a certain extent. The idea of role-playing code: 1. Even if you constantly look for loopholes in the law and distort the principles of the law, you are still essentially a defender of the law. 2. Everyone has the right to receive defense. No matter how heinous he is, he must receive a fair verdict. Noteworthy settings: 1. Xiaomu is still a student, even if he joins the Nighthawks, he will still be a student 2. Xiaomu has a certain foundation in fighting skills but lacks actual combat experience. To adventure in the East District, he needs at least Sequence 8 or someone to accompany him. 3. If you really have no other choice, it's best not to trouble Sonard. This involves Xiaomu's face. Everyone is free to imagine what Xiaomu should do, what he should be associated with, and what he would gain from it. I hope you can actively give suggestions and opinions. Every suggestion will make this novel one step closer to completion. Everyone is welcome to make free suggestions (๑＞ڡ＜)☆ It's mind-boggling, but it's fun, isn't it?

Gentlemen, can you?

The first person is actually not suitable for mystery. If something happens, it will be difficult to handle it if I am not at the scene in the first person. Mystery has many behind-the-scenes arrangements, and it is difficult to control it in the first person. The third person is suitable for complex plots, and the first person is suitable for making the story profound. The depth of mystery lies in the arrangement of the plot, not in the psychological description. My personal opinion is that it is more appropriate to write secrets in the third person rather than the first person 😐 You can consider my suggestions for the remake. Thanks

I feel like the writing is very problematic, and the author simply didn't grasp the core of the mystery. Squid mentioned when summarizing this book that the existence of the acting method is to allow those superior extraordinary people to integrate into the world of ordinary people, instead of being completely disconnected from ordinary people like immortals. As for Xiao Ke, when he was a fortune teller, he followed the Nighthawks and went to the club to tell people, thus experiencing the "own!!!" Acting principle. "Dying" once in the clown stage also allowed Xiao Ke to grasp the key point of digesting the clown potion. The protagonists of this book are completely separate. They went to the court and walked around. Others told you to play the central role. They are also people who have been gifted by fate. Before Sequence 5, Xiaoke developed with peace of mind and did not make a big sacrifice to build a bunch of high-level things. Your protagonist is good. He is an Outer God at the beginning, and then he builds a lot of other things. Although the sheep next door are also doing their jobs, someone else is really acting as a detective, digesting the potion honestly, and playing the role seriously. As for your protagonist's behavior, she is not crazy but you are playing a cheat.

How to say it? Since the soul is a man and the body is a woman, why not be a witch?

Although I can accept it, I still feel that it is not good to openly write about sexual transformation in Qidian, because elementary and junior high school students will also read it. (I read a gay article when I was in elementary school, and I felt uncomfortable for a long time)

I read Chapter 88 before, but then I didn't have much time to read it. Now I was looking through the bookshelf and found Entering the Palace 😰

Detective Susie and her assistant

Emmm

First person, still a transformation story, the author is tough enough

Let's put it this way: 1. First person. 2. Gender change. Author, what you write clearly makes readers uncomfortable. The appeal immediately drops. You make readers uncomfortable. Do you think the appeal of this book can be enough to make readers ignore the discomfort and continue to follow up? A mature author should consider more comprehensively, and the results will be good.

After being reborn as a woman, she accepts it without any sense of disobedience. She becomes like a little girl and the plot is draggy.

It feels more like a detective than a lawyer. After becoming a lawyer and knowing how to act, you don't have to work hard to digest the potion. Audrey became a self-directed actor for the audience later than her. Instead of becoming a lawyer or joining a law firm, she would become a nightwalker and join a club to act like a family member to digest the potion. Isn't it enough to understand the world through your brother? Xiao Ke didn't understand as much through the Nighthawks at the beginning as you did through your brother.

Artist: Haori

Is it a common problem in mysterious fan fiction? The digestion of role-playing is the same as jokes. The speed of promotion is not basically normal. Regardless of the starting sequence, the ones with higher sequences are better. Although they are basically still in the same place with more than 200 cards, the promotions from ordinary people are not as fast as other people in the Tarot Club. If you are okay at the same time, you have seen the basics. , The protagonist starts the plot a few months in advance, and the plot starts with the protagonist sequence 7 or 8, but the upgrade speed is overtaken, or the difference is not much different by force. The key is that there are many others who are overacting and not forcing enough. I have always felt that the mystery sequence fandom is best before the 6 sequence. It should be faster. At least there are 200 chapters in each sequence. The one I looked at was the first few dozen scenes of Sequence 7. After a few of the 200 scenes that matched the role, it was said that only half of it had been digested. After 400 chapters were digested, it was said that the main material was just one short, and several other main materials. There are two or three copies, but the other one has never been available, or almost got it. I have seen almost 500 copies, and I am still talking about it. In short, no one is selling it, so I will not chase after it. It is too delayed. One after another, the leapfrog battles have touched demigods, and they are still wandering around. I hope this ability will be better.

I thought I was dying, but then I found out that I had actually ordered all the chapters of this book... (What is this for?) 😐

The author's writing is very good and attracted me to read it. I have one or two small thoughts, just talk about it 😁 I feel that the protagonist's acting behavior in this article appears too little, and it has little relationship with the main plot. In the original text, Klein plays the soothsayer who connects almost all the main plots of Tingen, and plays the magician who vividly participates in various events in Bay City. For example, the so-called magician's unprepared performance also runs through all events. In the original work, Klein always thinks about how to act under the premise of acting, but the role of the protagonist in this article is briefly mentioned in daily life. There is no acting-related behavior in the main line, and it feels more like using extraordinary abilities to fight. Moreover, the original work vividly displays the special abilities of diviners and magicians, making people feel that these extraordinary abilities are very interesting and that Klein can use them to perform various miraculous effects. However, the description of extraordinary abilities in this article is somewhat lacking. The protagonist feels like a real barbarian, lacking a bit of the weird flavor of an extraordinary person.

The author has opened a new book... And it's still mysterious

Why is it first person? I really can't bear it

Two months, basically cut off, maybe still disconnected.

The first person version feels so awkward. Reading the comments, I thought it was pretty good. I also thought it was pretty good after reading two chapters, but I really can't stand the first person version. I'm used to the third person version and I can't stand it anymore!

It's rare to see someone write in the first person like me, and then be like me. The interactive writing is very good, much better than this scumbag like me.

I think the protagonist is more suitable to spy on the mysterious person

Split, a man travels through time and becomes a girl, from a first-person perspective, and the rest has the feel of a romance novel! Split! ! !

Is it because the author can no longer write or pass the review?

The first-person perspective in the front is quite discouraging, but there are often endless plots in the back, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.