The Sword Breaks into Heaven

Is this a fellow Yitian? Let's not talk about the second scenario. If you don't practice Jiu Yang in Kunlun, why should you steal a teacher and learn Yi Yang Finger for a year and a half? I'm thinking that you can practice Jiuyang after you learn it, why don't you go? Are you a time traveler? ? ? When I got to Guangmingding, I became even more awesome. I hung up and played soy sauce. Instead of learning the Great Shift of the Universe, I strengthened Zhang Wuji. Just to see Zhang Wuji pretending to compete? I vomited, is this a time travel fanfic? ? ?

It felt like a mainstream novel about abuse. I read about forty or fifty chapters, and basically I was either being chased or on the way to being killed. I was being killed by Extinction and being tortured by Zhang Sanfeng for no reason at all. I couldn't save this one, and I couldn't save that one. The author tried every means to suppress the growth of the protagonist. It was very frustrating to read. I didn't understand at all why the protagonist was hunted down every day? It's refreshing to see the pictures in the novel. This kind of novel about a sadistic protagonist may only be liked by those who have a shadow in their hearts. Maybe the author is a masochist, so he likes to torture the protagonist every day.

Is it because the author's writing is too good, or what happened? A few teenage beggars secretly learned some residual martial arts, and the first fight gave me the feeling of a peerless master. They have all become elders of a big sect, with master-level strength. How bad are the talents of those big sects? Also, in a world of low martial arts, the power of the stars and the power of the sky are all coming, and they all become fantasy novels.

I really don't know what the author is writing? The protagonist travels to the world of Yi Tian Slaying the Dragon. In Kunlun Mountain, if he doesn't go to find the Nine Yang Divine Art, what kind of things are he practicing? If you are covering up Yitian, you are writing about people who don't know anything about it. If you don't write about Yitian, it might be better!

Without the heavenly frame, the whole book would not seem strange.

After reading more than 150 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. One Yang Finger, Innate Skills, Skulls, Four Symbol Swords, Star Medical Skills, Demon Fetus, Sword Fetus, none of them are the ceiling of martial arts. Zhang Wuji didn't have such luck. In the end, he couldn't handle a thousand households. It was really written like a pig's horn.

A flying sword? No, no, no Have deep internal strength? No, no, no My martial arts is for immortality. I want to live to modern times just to take a look at them. I know clearly that they are not the same people, but I still can't help but just to take a look at them, even if they are different flowers. Introduction😁

Do you want to read it from the beginning yourself and what did you write? I rarely complain about what other people write. You are boring and messy.

Although the writing is very good, why does it feel like the protagonist is 50/50 different from everyone else? There are a bunch of big guys who are fighting back and forth, all of them are more powerful than the heads of the six major sects, and they are all hiding in some corner. But since they are so powerful, what is the meaning of the so-called six major sects?

I have read about 100 chapters, and the more I read, the less I know what to write. I just rely on heaven, and so many passers-by appear in every chapter.

What kind of thing is written? It is one of the worst Yitian fanfics I have ever read.

It started well, but things have changed since going to the ghost market? What does a good martial artist do?

The author thinks this is martial arts turned into fantasy, hahaha, I feel the writing is very enjoyable, can you reply to me?

I think the best thing written by Yitian fan is "The Fall of Beauty: Tears of Yitian"

Author, I suggest you change your introduction. I have read a few chapters, and you are indeed very good at writing, and your writing style is also very good, but the introduction is too discouraging.

This smells like a Hong Kong comic novel.

What's going on with this book review section? There are more than 500 chapters, why are there so few people?

I thought it was the story of Yitian Slaying the Dragon, hanging sheep heads and selling dog meat.

The author's writing is very beautiful, but no one reads it. I have a way to get more people to read your book, Weiyaayaa335

Internal skills are not like moves. You can clearly imitate and practice them. You can't imagine the wisdom of the ancients. In ancient times, the disciples had to keep a secret. You can imagine how to prevent theft. I can't practice it directly by giving you the secret book. I can't do it by giving you the first chapter.

Personally, I think it's a good book, but not a good martial arts novel. Starting from the ghost market, martial arts turns into fantasy, and later fantasy turns into fighting for hegemony, and finally there are some weird aliens. Overall, it's just chaos, with less martial arts and chivalry and more other nondescript things. If you can read it, it will still be a piece of hay during the book shortage period. In the later period, it gave me a sense of déjà vu as if I were watching the bright moon in the Qin Dynasty. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard!

After being discovered by the dog, when he came out from under the snow, the other party asked him what his relationship was with the Duan family? What brain circuit? It would be okay if you just walked up to him and sent him a positive finger. The key is to hide under the snow. The character's behavior feels very awkward, and the traces of carving are too obvious.

If the author wrote it as you did, you wouldn't have written it as Wang Chongyang's version of Nine Suns Magic, right?

Why isn't it popular? Isn't this much better than many types of books? Although there are flaws