Take Your Copy System with You

It's too pretentious to give advice to others during a fight. The author doesn't know how to fight. His movements during a fight are all instantaneous. He may make several false and true movements in one second. Even if you see the opponent's flaws, you don't have time to say them out.

When I read Chapter 11 and Chapter 10 about other people showing affection, I vomited while watching it. It's none of your business to show affection to other people. They always say it sucks.

I won't talk about anything else about you. I can put aside what you said. You just said that the main character's mental age was confusing to me. I guess it's only 15. Up to 16

The city lord's daughter It's awkward to persuade her to quit with four words

The disser master is here to bubble up, come on

Already invested, continuing to pay attention, come on (ง •̀_•́)งOli to

To be honest, the book is just an ordinary article about the Demon Suppressor with a golden finger. The pace is very slow, there is no urge to follow, and the plot is as bland as water. If there is no cool Golden Finger text, I really can't stand it compared to the Martial Saint of the Ten Directions. But it might get better later, if you are patient, you can wait.

The creativity is okay, but the writing skills need to be improved.

This book focuses on the male protagonist from the beginning. If it's too awesome, there's no need to keep writing. Directly invincible. Life is hard. What people see is a mixture of ordinary passions.

This golden finger also suppresses the development of the protagonist, which makes it impossible to watch

The new book is very creative. Storytelling needs to be strengthened

Behind the legend should be the king 🙂

When the assassin comes, why are the assassins all sparring partners? If you don't pierce the heart and neck with the assassin's dagger, what's the point of piercing both legs?