Fake Son-In-Law

Domineering declarations of various dynasties in China Zhou Dynasty: In the whole world, is it the king's land, and on the shore of the land, is it the king's ministers. (This sentence comes from "The Book of Songs·Xiaoya·Beishan Zhishi·Beishan".) Qin Dynasty: The brave and brave old Qin fought against the national calamity together, vowing not to truce until blood is shed. Han Dynasty: Anyone who offends the power of our great Han Dynasty will be punished no matter how far away he is. (Chen Tang said this after killing someone, not the slogan he yelled before killing. Remember! Remember!) Emperor Xuan of the Han Dynasty: "Everywhere the sun and moon shine, and wherever rivers go, are Han lands." Tang Dynasty: All barbarians inside and outside who dared to call themselves soldiers were killed. Song Dynasty: Every inch of mountains and rivers, every inch of blood, I will destroy my country and destroy my species, and I swear not to stand together with thieves. Ming Dynasty: The Ming Dynasty lasted for 276 years. No marriage, no indemnity, no land cession, no tribute. The emperor guarded the country, and the king died in the country. Emperor Wanli's "Edict to Ping the Japanese": "Those who jump from the beams will be killed no matter how strong they are!" (Manual dog head saves life.)

After reading five chapters, I discovered one thing. This author likes women who are outgoing, unruly, and heartless. . (It can be seen by the two women on the scene) I don't know what is good about this type.

Another collection dropped, and the author's heart was broken. (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)

The plot is well written and worth watching.

This Lin Xin is really a failure in portraying him. He can still be so cheerful after his family was destroyed.

Being persuaded to quit by Lin Xin, the portrayal of this character is really disgusting -_-||.

Lin Xin is really disgusting and has such a confusing personality

It's not like we're in the desert. How can we be thirsty and drink human blood? It's too poisonous.

There are a few suggestions that the author can refer to. First of all, I feel that the character's personality has not been determined. The character's behavior determines the character. Wang Ze's character is a bit inconsistent. The inconsistent personality makes the character look particularly strange. Other characters are also a bit flat. To solve this problem, you can try to write a biography of the character. Also, I feel that the relationship between the characters is a bit simplistic. Although the author tried to write the simplicity on the surface and the complexity in the secret, it still feels a bit unwritten. In addition, the protagonist negotiates with various high-level officials and is promoted by the emperor. Although the father-in-law is very powerful, it still feels a bit abrupt. Maybe the author can try to lower the level of the people he meets. Finally, the plot... Is a bit too forced. It feels like the development of the story is not determined by the choice of the protagonist, but an arrangement to create suspense and cater to the outline of the protagonist. The relationship between the heroine and the hero is quite attractive and will make people want to watch it. Actually, rhythm is not a big issue, it's just how to make the characters stand out and your novel will be successful. The above is my personal opinion, I hope the author doesn't mind. The book is still good, please come on, author!

Ing is good, why is there no one 😐

Stop voting, stop subscribing, it's not worth it. 530,000 Words, 3,000 words, and 100 collections are all set. Now even the only perfect person is gone. To be honest, the author has no motivation at all.

The heroine is really unappetizing

The author's writing style is not very good. Not to mention the disgusting core, even the character of Xi'er is not perfect. Give up, give up

Withdrawal of something, women are speechless

Forcibly arranging the identity of an illegitimate prince would be completely different. . .

The writing is too nonsensical and incomprehensible, and it forcibly creates a sense of mystery.

To be honest, I don't know if it's the author's subconscious or other factors. For example, it's easier to write this way, simple and compound the plot, but it's a bit too much to have three women around him who are all only children.

Going to Liangzhou to be a censor can be poisonous, but it is also extremely poisonous. An inexplicable position as chief official. Even if you become an adjutant for something first, I will admit it. But to just become a supervisor handling a big thing is such a piece of cake.

I just want to relax when I read the novel. There are dozens of them. As a time traveler, I feel like a dog. I really don't know what the author is thinking. The writing is good, but I don't agree with the plot. Even if I die, I won't be a monkey!

The pinnacle of historical literature, not to be missed

I think this book is actually quite good. I feel like I can't survive more than a few chapters. The author feels that there are quite a lot of foreshadowings.

I have a guess that Wang Ze is not a prince, but a commoner. I still remember that when Wang Ze was walking with Lin Zhuangyuan, a homeless man suddenly came out and said that he was Cheng Ergou and was killed by Lin Zhuangyuan.

It's fully booked. If the author really doesn't have much motivation, he can rest first. Although the beginning of this book is a bit discouraging, you can still see the author's progress later on.

He drank human blood from the beginning and apparently ate human flesh as well and slipped away.

You have changed the history of the Qin Dynasty, so please change the Qiang people. Now that the nationalities are united, I am afraid that you will cause conflicts, to be honest.

It's a disgusting book no matter how you read it.

It's pretty good. How did the author finish it?

It's important to ask if there are multiple female protagonists.

There is too much foreshadowing in the early stages, and the more exciting it becomes in the later stages.

I actually finished the book, but there is no way that no one will read it 😰