The Young Master of the Ancient Clan of Dou Po

I think if the male protagonist replaces Xiao Xun'er and goes undercover at Xiao Yan's house, and then Xiao Yan falls in love with the male protagonist, the data will definitely be better than this 🤫🤫

Don't you think the protagonists are too talkative? Whether it's Nalan Yanran or Yafei. Maybe everyone else is too kind. A nine-star fighting saint. The reincarnation of a strong man. Don't you have any pride at all?

Many readers are raising some loopholes and flaws, which will be corrected this week. 1: The reason why the protagonist is a one-star fighter at the beginning. After all, I have eaten the meat of a fighting saint-level monster for ten years. I know that this flaw will be solved. 2: Xiao Yan pretended to be cool in front of the protagonist and lacked feedback. This is a fatal mistake and will be emphatically corrected. 3: The characters of Xun'er and the protagonist are reflected in the previous, but not obvious, but they will be very clear in the second volume, and of course they will not be brainless. I also try my best to repair the front and try my best to be better. 4: Why not kill Xiao Yan directly? Xiao Yan is the son of luck. Relying on Yao Lao, these places will be dealt with in a smooth manner. That's all for now, I'll revise it this week. If there are still flaws, just point them out below! Writing a book means working hard to write it well! No replenishment, no hydrology! It's a small fan fiction, I'm working on accumulating writing power for the next fantasy book. It's normal to revise and revise it, just fix it.

Just like the Dou Qi Continent, the Small Thousand or Middle Thousand worlds are still the way of heaven? The great master is the Great Thousand World. The protagonist traveled from the Great Thousand World. Will he be afraid of the heavenly ways of Dou Qi Continent? With a Nine-Star Fighting Saint, he is still timid in doing things, saying that life is worse than death, it is all nonsense, and it is unpleasant to watch. And that Xun'er, how can he become good friends with Xiao Yan? In the original work, does Xun'er show any good attitude towards men other than Xiao Yan? He is also in trouble for Xiao Yan, and he only respects Gu Qingyang. He is not writing a fan just for fun. Who cares about you? The plot is too bad, the character description is too bad, and the pretense is even worse.

I thought the author would kill him in order to reduce inflammation and achieve Emperor Yan, but I didn't expect that he had no patience at all.

I bet on the eunuch! ! ! It's written with so much effort, how can a simple eunuch be so accomplished? I bet on being an eunuch, if you dare to be an eunuch on me... Ooxx

Can there be a way of heaven in such a small world? ? The fetus of the plane in Wu Dong Qian Kun is just a baby.

No, no, no, yesterday I vowed that I would not be a supervisor, but today I stopped updating.

Just from reading the introduction, you can tell that this novel is not good, it can be said to be brainless.

Some poisonous points have been modified. Comments and corrections are welcome! Writing good works is the original intention! Thank you all

The road to writing is long, and I'm searching from top to bottom. Whether your writing is good or not, your comments are the most intuitive. Every day I will read what I have written to correct, study, and compare. But it's not clear whether it satisfies everyone's tastes, and we need feedback to make corrections. Not for anything else, just to write well! Thank you!

In fan fiction, the characters must not be broken, and the fun must be in place. I have been working hard to pursue these two points, and I am bald... When a new book sets sail, it will definitely not be perfect. There are some toxic points and shortcomings. You are welcome to discuss them. I will take time to revise them every night and try my best to do my best. After all, this book was a labor of love.

It's the 9th day of the update break. I haven't read it before and I'm still watching. (The author has entered the palace or not. He said he would update every day but there was no update every day.)

It's a rubbish book, it drives high and low, it's pretentious and stiff, it's just disgusting.

Get your liver up, get your liver up, three updates a day is no longer a dream

Halfway through writing, I feel sleepy and out of shape. Xiudou has been working hard to pursue it, hoping to bring you interesting plots and a good reading experience. There will be two updates today, so I won't write anymore. I'll finish it when I wake up in the middle of the night.

Come on, can you update it tomorrow?

I think the authors who write about Dou Po fandoms have some mental problems. They insist on degrading Xiaoyan to the point where he has no merit at all. Although he is indeed a bit sentimental, he also made great contributions to resisting extraterrestrial evil spirits during the period of the Great Overlord, so it is not all shortcomings.

See you in a few days, happy thirty 😁

I don't understand why Xun'er is so good, so many people like it.

Came here because of the reputation, and sure enough...

Updated, call me,,,