Voyage to the Heavens

Does the protagonist travel through time to be the protagonist's nanny? Do you even have to worry about Zhang Wuji's harem and disharmony? It's okay if you don't accept the heroine, but you still go to great lengths to help Zhang Wuji convince Zhao Min and Zhou Zhiruo to serve the same husband?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good, and it feels like a running account. The most important thing is that the characteristics of each world are not written out. You are proud of the world in this world, you are killing demons and defending the law in that world, and you are fighting for the world in another world. What I wanted to see was the battle competition between geniuses from different worlds, not the protagonists fighting and fighting. I was disappointed!

The writing is too messy, like a running account

The pig's feet licked the dog in the early stage was so awesome! Poison

I won't write it after it's on the shelves. You are truly a talent.

It's too perfect, all plots have to be involved, and it's completely mixed into the plot line. It feels fake at first glance, like playing a game. Personally, I think time travelers still have to have their own pursuits, and just partially participate in the plot.

The subject matter is very good, you need to have a big imagination, make good use of your golden fingers, and don't write too funny or too cold, because the readers are ordinary people, and that's the end of being impersonal...

GOD is a god, but below the pill in his eyes is a monkey. God listens to monkeys' orders, which is very unreasonable. The author chose the wrong person. He could choose Di Yun, the jade in the stone. It feels like he has forcibly depraved GOD.

What's going on? I need to abandon the book.