My Rental Girlfriend Is Too Cute

After reading more than 10 chapters, I must read this book.

It was so frustrating to watch. In less than 7 chapters, the male protagonist was thrown over her shoulder by the female protagonist twice. It was too exaggerated. If the male protagonist resisted even a little bit, he would be able to break free. No matter how difficult it was, he would be able to pull the female protagonist down. The author is not suitable for writing workplace articles or has not checked the information. The female protagonist said that their company only hires people from key universities, so it's amazing that your company can have so many people. The female protagonist also said in public that the male protagonist's education is too low (or the university is not good, forget it) Then the female protagonist said that she has a master's degree in economics from Harvard. To be honest, this academic qualification is quite good, but the author went a bit too far. What does it mean to say that being a CEO with a master's degree in economics from Harvard is a humiliation? ? The gap between a bachelor's degree and a master's degree is not particularly big, but the gap between a master's degree and a doctorate is big. According to the author's boast, wouldn't a doctorate in economics be the chairman of Microsoft or Apple? Recruiting people from key universities, but the boss is 'just' a Harvard master's degree. It's outrageous I saw someone in the post explaining that the author meant that the heroine is the daughter of a consortium and has a master's degree. But I read it many times, and there was no mention of the daughter of a consortium at all, only a master's degree. (Look at the picture ) Sometimes the male protagonist is too weak. For example, in the first chapter, the male protagonist's classmates asked him to go to a party, but the male protagonist said he was not free. What his classmates said was just for the sake of his brother or something. Are you familiar with me? No time, no time. But the male protagonist really went. Although I also saw that the author's introduction said that this is a slow-burning novel, but if I can't even get past 7 chapters, then I'm not in the mood to see the sweet part. If you have anything to say, you are welcome, but please don't spray nonsense. Thank you.

There are more than 350 chapters. I didn't see any of the high sugar and diabetes in the introduction. It's not because the writing is poor, but because of the character portrayal of You Hong. From the moment this character appeared in front of the hero and heroine, congratulations to the author for successfully portraying a villain. It was so successful that I wanted to kill someone to relieve my hatred. I gritted my teeth every time after chasing it. I don't have much ability. Is it okay to offer a reward of 5,000 points to kill You Hong?

After reading it all, this ending is really unnecessary. I can feel what the author seems to want to write. But I can't feel what you want to write. It makes me sad to read it.

Complete the order and tell me your own opinion. Liu Yi's image is perfectly created. The previous story is very sweet and step-by-step. Has the author changed the author since Ma Qing was kidnapped? The writing is too deliberate, I don't understand that Ma Qing and Liu Yi's father faked his death just to become a beggar? I was just a character before and couldn't plan anything? What about the pattern? I said from the beginning that Ma Qing is not a simple person, but when Liu Yi disappeared, she knew that crying would only make her sad? Is this able to express my love for Liu Yi, but can't I use my own strength to find Liu Yi? Even if the plot needs something that can be understood, doing it and not being able to do it are two different things! A man who loses the woman he loves the most is still crazy! It's hard to calm down! Goodbye, author

I have some thoughts on why book friends have mixed reviews about this book: I feel the flavor of Japanese love light novels from this book. If you watch anime and watch a lot of anime, you can easily accept this "style of painting" and this way of description. The reason why this book is not accepted by many people First is because the types of book friends in Qidian are extremely wide, and not everyone likes this daily funny style; Secondly, most of the similar sweet articles in Qidian are in a realistic style, and everyone imagines them according to It comes from the realistic style, and it is easy to think of the corresponding "animation" scenes when reading this book. One of the big differences between animation and realism is animation. Animation works will have many exaggerated plots, actions, etc.; The third problem is the book itself. The author did not give the book a good positioning. From the second point, it can be seen that the author wrote the article according to the feeling of anime, but actually there is an awkward feeling in the novel. Why does it feel like this? Because the author puts a realistic coating on an animation work, just like a live-action drama of an animation work, giving people an awkward and strange look; Finally, there are plot and character creation issues. There are some plot bugs, but this is not the most affecting reader's perception. A big complaint among readers is the portrayal of the character You Hong, which is really "disgusting". Because she has ignored her bottom line and personal dignity countless times, she is extremely annoying. Originally, it was okay to have such a character. Just let her go offline as soon as possible. Although I don't have much social experience, I also feel that such a person will not always go smoothly. However, the author has given her a big background, which makes people uncomfortable. You said that this opponent will always do some disgusting tricks for you, and he always relies on this. When it comes to turning the tables, you can use the same disgusting method once or twice, but it is always the same. It makes people feel that the author has an obsession with this "superior way", and then the work conveys the author's feelings to the readers. While creating a sense of unreality, it also inevitably creates a bad feeling for the work itself. In addition, there are also descriptions of characters such as Mi Lu, fiancé, and Wang Lei's girlfriend. Either the character's personality is abrupt due to the lack of foreshadowing when he appears, or he feels like an important character when he first sees it, but he only appears a few times to act as a tool to promote the plot. To sum it up: the layout is too small. The description has always revolved around a few fixed people, and other characters have more or less become foils. Let's just say this. I dare not say how accurate my views and opinions are. I just wrote some of my intuitive feelings. In fact, I also like the style and writing style of this novel. I write this to help the author do better. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

How should I put it, this book is actually pretty good, but sometimes it makes people a little anxious. The author uses an exaggerated way to write about two male and female protagonists with unique personalities, as well as a large group of supporting characters with unique personalities. It is precisely because of these unique personalities that readers who click in feel that "this book is so poisonous, it is too poisonous to bear." In fact, emotionally, the male protagonist is a piece of white paper that has been crumpled into a ball, and the female protagonist is a piece of white paper wrapped in packaging. As long as you calmly watch these two simple people move forward slowly at their own pace (dbq, I did not do it). (After all, reality is more illogical than fiction, but there is no rhetorical modification) ps: The author knows how to give a sweet date with a slap, although he often slaps several times and stuffs a few grains of sugar into his mouth. If you can read this book, you will naturally read it, and if you can't, you will hold back.

Personally I think this book is great, very sweet, but it starts a little slow. Like some impatient people, they may give up after reading the first two chapters, so I think they have no connection with this work. It doesn't matter, as long as there are a few people; of course there will be trolls, don't be afraid, everyone has different tastes, and you can't change it because of one person. It's difficult to adjust to everyone's opinions. In daily life, the ordinary life of the male protagonist, the female protagonist and the dog is (at least for now) very much in line with my taste. Come on, author, I support you! (♡˙˙♡) Jiadan: Thank you to this reader for your support, your support is my biggest motivation (⑉°з°)-♡ Hehehehe (smirking)

In fact, I also pirated it, but I would like to say that it was very slow in the early stage, which made me almost abandon it, but the chapter about Ma Qing getting into trouble really pulled me into it, and it suddenly reminded me of my definition of love in high school, which is pure, clean, and hazy. I also love to bully the girls I like, but I'm not as mean as Ma Qing. I get into trouble just the same, and I apologize later, but I'm not as lucky as Ma Qing. The author's writing style of writing about emotions is really good, the writing is delicate and sweet enough, but there are still some aspects that need to be strengthened. I feel that the outline and the plot that I want to drive are not well organized. If you don't know how to do it, don't force it into it. It would be much better to treat it as daily dog ​​food writing, and it would be better to change it to some daily trivial things like business war. And for people like me who love free sex, I will give it to you for the first time, with 600 points.

I watched the pirated version and I was really overwhelmed with emotion after watching it. I immediately ran to Qidian and made up a full subscription. This is also my first full subscription at Qidian. I hope the author will work hard.

Will the heroine throw You Hong over her shoulder?

I really vomited after reading this book🤮🤮🤮, You Hong was really disgusted by what you wrote. I don't look forward to the plot at all. I have read so many novels and yours is the most disgusting...

Does the author have any idea about money? 300 Billion black card? I calculated it in RMB. If I remember correctly, the protagonist earned it in just one vacation. According to the searchable Forbes rankings, Jack Ma ranks first in China with an asset of about 270 billion. Are you really just writing it as a number? 300 Billion black cards are given away? According to this description, the assets of the protagonist's family business are at least a thousand times more than the black card funds. However, the first two stories are circumstantial and describe the troubles the protagonist's father encountered. Apart from being suppressed by powerful people in the world of cultivating immortals, I can't think of any other troubles the family could encounter. I suggest skipping directly to cultivating immortals.

Especially beautiful. Different flavor. Although it has a flavor of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and a feeling of the King of Soldiers and the God of God. But what I find interesting is the storyline between the male and female protagonists, which is very interesting. I hope there won't be any bloody drama in the future. Just bickering and dog food are pretty good. I'm just worried that there will be a bloody plot, please come on, author.

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I was very tired today. After a nap, I had a dream about being beaten. A woman... Cried and was woken up by fright. My hand is twisted, and it still hurts a little... I'm gone. Will the author pay for it? (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡) Happy! Want a hug!

I want to apologize here. In fact, I came here from pirated books. This book gave me a lot of feelings and gains, and I couldn't bear to leave nothing behind after my free prostitution. So I came to the starting point to repay the author. As for the full subscription, I don't know, but 3,000 points are given away. I hope it can appease the author, I'm sorry > people <

The book is a good book, but I still find it difficult to calm down. Firstly, there are so many sweet plots in the early stage, but why did it end up being like this for the first time? You might as well not write these. Secondly, the ability to pave the way for the protagonist in the early stage and the connections looked very mysterious and strong. I thought the protagonist could settle everything with his own wisdom, but he ended up lying flat? What did he do at the end? Because Liu Yi lost his memory and went crazy, he was kidnapped and Wang Qiang went to rescue him. Once the other person died, it was gone? Is it over? Why did you feel that You Hong became the protagonist at the end of the writing? What's the use of all the foreshadowing for this ending? I read a book to relax, and you just made me depressed In the early stage, it can be written in any way, whether it is depressing because of the villain, or for various reasons, but at the end or fast forward to the end, let the protagonist do something to express the reader's depressed mood! This is normal. The character of You Hong in your book is really good. At least I personally appreciate it. What about the protagonist? What did he do? I brought the protagonist into reading the book! Are you really not going to take an unusual path? I have this feeling stuck in my heart that even after finishing the book, it still doesn't come out... I've never liked writing book reviews. If I don't write something, I can't get rid of this feeling. I'm depressed. Goodbye! ! ! ! ! !

I feel a little sick to my stomach. If you write the relationship between Mi Lu and fzm well, I have nothing to say, but are you too sudden? Although you are the heroine who writes the order, you can't give it away for free, right? I was able to withstand the viciousness of chasing the heroine in the early stage, but are Mi Lu and fzm too vicious? If you change someone else and don't mention fzm's previous fiancé, why are you suddenly getting along with Mi Lu? Logically, I didn't ask, and the text has always emphasized that Mi Lu doesn't love the protagonist. However, I just want to ask you, do you accept it?

I felt really bad. I looked at the title and thought it was a sweet novel. Result! Why do you like to smash beautiful things into pieces?

I hope You Hong comes to vote

I've read a lot of people who criticize this book, so I'm posting this specifically A lot of people say it's not good, why don't you let me talk about it? Jiadan didn't stop talking. I created a post specifically for you to complain and give your opinions. I also said that external comments will be controlled, and general complaints from outside will not be deleted unless your comments are inappropriate Many people responded and said that if it's not good, you should write a book yourself. You said that this is compared to the food in a restaurant. If it is not good, you can scold the chef and say the food is not delicious. , In fact, the metaphor is not appropriate, so I asked if you can try this book, and if you are not satisfied, you can just leave. Can you try a part of the food in a restaurant, and if it doesn't taste good, you can leave without paying. The free trial part in front is originally for publicity, and it is also for you to try the poison. It is similar to the promotion of trial food in supermarkets. Can you just spray it after eating it if it doesn't taste good? Usually you can just leave. I am not posting this to troll anyone, I just want you to troll less. It is not easy for the author.

This review of Good Guy makes me afraid to read this book.

No, with such a big project that can solve all the difficult diseases in the world, what if the state doesn't step in to protect it and let them play house?

This book is okay, why do you want to criticize it? If you have any suggestions, please don't criticize me. If you really don't like it, don't come here. At least respect the author. Every chapter you see may have been revised many times by the author (guess, I have written books before, maybe I am not good at it), but everyone likes different things. Just criticize me because you don't like it. I don't think it is right. If you think I am wrong, I won't say it. It's my personal opinion. Don't criticize me.

For Liu Yi and Mi Lu to be friends, their family backgrounds should be similar. As far as Liu Yi knew, almost no one could win that fiancé. Mi Lu thought it was possible to win. On the same information platform, two people came to two different conclusions. Later, it was said that the male protagonist's background is quite impressive. Earlier, You Hong was walking with the heroine's mother again. The background of the hero could scare You Hong to death. Maybe the fiancé is the same person And the male protagonist is in good physical condition, but he hasn't exercised for a while. After just two weeks of replying, no dog could outrun him. This man is not simple. The following possibilities are proposed here: ①: Family background, the male protagonist himself has very good physical fitness. Based on the dog-walking paragraph and the type of dog the female protagonist has, it is estimated that the male protagonist can also be linked to the military. ②: Fighting for the throne: Before You Hong broke up, she went to the United States to make a lot of money. My physical fitness may also be stimulated after the breakup, and I have done some very incredible feats.

June 1st!

I just started reading it, and I saw that every last book review had people rejecting it, saying that the book was not good. I can only say that it is a pity for those who quit. The author of this book is quite powerful, he must be an old two-dimensional person. The characters are very well created, and the foreshadowing is clear and easy to understand. There are no problems in character setting and plot advancement. It is a very good novel, not a so-called CEO story. What is a CEO's letter? The poor and stupid heroine is pretty good, but is being competed by men from various big families. This is the president's story. This book is obviously a very good workplace romance novel. It's a bit sadistic but also very funny. It's so good to read! Come on, author!

A colleague of mine mentioned to me that trembling is a sign of lack of love. This is also interesting to say that it is a good product. Everyone's life experience is different, and their views will naturally be different. Seeing that the reviews of this book are generally biased, it can only be said that the readers are still mostly regular or traditional people. In fact, there is really no need to force others to write books according to their own ideas. Works reproduced according to traditional wishes are good books? Do you stop thinking about ideas that you can't accept? It's a bit biased and egotistical. Of course, the readers expressed their thoughts and paid attention to the work. Although some of the words were a bit mean, I guess the author who can write such a style of work would not care so much. (Laughs) In short, this work can be regarded as the daily version of Deadpool in urban love comics. It is relaxed and freehand, interspersed with emotions, there is sadness in the joy, and love in the sadness. I hope more ink is used to build the plot, flesh out the characters, and simply embellish it with funny jokes. Meaningless stacking is not advisable, otherwise it will be easy to be said to be stupid. My humble opinion, just laugh at it. :-D Finally, I hope that Xiao Jianjian named Ma can bring more resonance and fun to the appropriate audience.

For those who haven't read it yet, here are some things to note before consuming it: 1. It will be very delicious if you read this book as a comedy, but substitution is strictly prohibited. (The style is like watching books like Ah San, Crayon Shin-chan, Oolong Police Station... But never substitute it into reality, otherwise you will be gone.) 2. The male protagonist practiced it in the early stage, but the three views are correct, there are hundreds of millions of points Just click m 😅. As for the tsundere heroine in the early stage, she has a very normal and funny character and plot, with constant "misunderstandings" (especially the black silk part 😃), LSP understands it all 🤭. 3. To the author: The second female lead is very interesting. I like the second female lead, but I saw that someone seems to be talking about changing the female lead. I personally don't recommend it. This book should be positioned as a funny dog food series, just like in Kaguya, it would be bad if the president and Fujiwara Chika are together. Look, there is no selling point anymore. Of course, the author is expected to write it down~ 4. Please stick to chapter 80, the dog food will start to feed the book friends 🙂 (More than 100 chapters are really sweet) Finally, please improve 🥺