Ordinary Balanced Apprentice

Why do you keep this Fei? Disgusting to us?

Looking forward to the dark descendant's appearance

It can be seen that the author specifically checked the information when writing Valoran, and the timeline is clear and thoughtful.

Zed, Kayn, Shen, Kennen, Akali, this is the real balance. Akali is my stream, walking alone between the two parties.

The Kinkou is not the Ionian Kinkou! It's the balance of Roxas! Why balance? Answer Protect the land because we live here! What if we all died! So who is the Kinkou Sect protecting the land for? Noxus? Then the Kinkou Sect is protecting Kinkou for Roxas! Why should Ionians be admitted into the sect! Why do we call ourselves Ionians?

Plain boiled water, no ups and downs.

I just don't understand. None of the books recommended by Daily Guide have more than 200 chapters?

Did the author write about emptiness? I have a small suggestion for Void. I think it can be written like Cthulhu, with power erosion and constant whispering. I think it matches the Void Thief 😃😃😃😃😃

I haven't read the book yet, but this introduction is really not good and makes me feel like a second-rate novel. Sweat("▔㉨▔)sweat

Making a patriotic movie for Noxus is outrageous

Alas, I don't want to say anything anymore, so I just wrote a few words at the end: Please let the author sort it out. In chapter 30, I didn't explain who the protagonist was before, what age he was, and what kind of environment he was in. He didn't even mention it (it seems). But later on, he mentioned a little bit about the current environment and life. The village was sacrificed, but the protagonist didn't die (it seems like this), and then he was tortured and persuaded before he was taken in. Maybe the plot is about knowing him. Kali, the teacher, and the conflict with Fei pushed out Akali, attracted attention, had some enemies with Mei and Kennen, and then stole the power of the Shadow Stone from Zed (the protagonist's is the fragment of the source power of the nightmare.) Then he met Irelia during the run, in advance (originally I don't know when) Then he met Riven in disguise, and met Riven again in a one-on-one duel with Zed, and was "forcibly" taken away. Then what Fei did caused Shen and his disciples to engage in a small-scale battle with Noxus. Yes, that's it, the plot is roughly like this, I won't go into details. I don't know how other book friends felt after reading it. I felt a little aggrieved after reading it. I didn't dare to fight, but I didn't want to kill. It's okay to play one-on-one under the premise of conflict between camps. When you are weak, the protagonist who was well portrayed in the book collapsed here, and instantly changed from an IQ online to a mentally retarded one. I don't even know what to say. When I saw Dai Fei, I knew something bad was going to happen again, and it happened. If you write about Riven being killed or someone coming to save her when she's seriously injured, that's fine, but writing about someone stabbing you in the back is pretty cool, right? I don't want to watch the rest of the story. That's why I said, wouldn't it be nice to write it the way it was portrayed before? It was written like this just to make the plot watery, but it wasn't written well. Next time you write about this kind of conflict, remember to write it a few more times, and then read and think more. If you think something is inappropriate, see how to change it. There are not many books in the Alliance world, but there are quite a few, but when writing this, you have to deal with the timeline and other things, especially when writing this kind of main hero who has not yet grown up. You can still read the book, but there are still some poisonous points, or in other words: the plot is poisonous and the details are not handled well.

This book is very well written, don't give up. To be honest, I found this book by chance. This book is not famous, but it will gradually become popular as the number of book friends increases. I saw a fan with more than 20,000 words who wrote 800,000 words, but later it increased to more than 200,000 words after one million words. I think you have this potential.

Don't worry, author, you are not alone, we are always here

Writing about Kyle, I have some thoughts I want to share with the author. In the League of Legends background story I read, Kyle's mother also gained strength by climbing Mount Targon, but it wasn't that extreme at first, and then it gradually became extreme. Abandoning her husband and daughters to carry out justice, combined with Pantheon's story, we can guess that the justice stars are subtly erasing the humanity of those who are qualified. Just like Kyle, it was not that extreme at the beginning. In the game, Kyle and Morgana's voice eggs include "If I can see my sister again" and "Sisters, we have never been "Enemy", I feel that Kyle still has some humanity. If possible, Pantheon can use Morgana to awaken Kyle's hidden humanity. What does the author think?

It can be seen from the setting and plot arrangement that the author has put his heart into it. Unfortunately, the writing skills are insufficient and the immersion is poor. The main reason is that the character description is not vivid enough. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Don't have too many heroines, don't have too many heroines, don't have too many heroines

I just finished reading the latest chapter. The heroine is an eight-year-old girl??? Although the hero is only treating his sister emotionally now. But don't really become husband and wife in the future. Too poisonous

The writing is pretty good, but most of it was read blindly after a few chapters before I couldn't stand it anymore. I really don't want to read what they wrote, so the author, come on (ง •̀_•́)งIf you don't die, I'll give it to you.

When will it be updated? You might as well take a day off.

Waiting for the author to come back...

🐴When will you be back?

It's very well written, why don't you update it?

I will keep waiting, I hope

What's wrong with the author? Please say something.

I suddenly discovered that my investment failed. Why did I stop updating? It's a very good book.

Waiting for the author to come back the next day

The writing is great. It can be seen that the author wrote it with great care. I offer my recommendation votes and monthly passes.

The author hopes that in the future, the dark descendants can break the seal and regain their former glory, mainly because I feel that Aatrox is too miserable.