Hong Kong Comprehensive World Free Travel

A lot of it is written in Cantonese, and I don't have a strong sense of empathy. Even though I'm from Cantonese, it's awkward to watch. Also, it's a human society with a fat guy, which I can't stand.

I've read more than a dozen chapters and it feels like a confusing area. I don't know what you want to write.

It can be said that the first 170,000 words are not interesting at all. I don't know what the protagonist's thoughts are, and I don't know what the protagonist's purpose is. Anyway, he just follows others.

I felt relieved when I saw so many people complaining about it. I couldn't stand it anymore after about 20 chapters. I was so confused that I didn't even know what I was writing. Hey

Fat guy? ? I really hate fat people being the protagonists

Cantonese people are embarrassed when you insert it in Cantonese. If you don't say it's to make money, then it doesn't matter. If you want to make money, I can only regret to say that I won't spend money to read or reward. Articles and novels that can make people read and read must first be coherent and not lag when reading. If you insert Cantonese, it will make people stutter and make reading uncomfortable. Just like some yellow-skinned and white-hearted people who feel that they are advanced when they speak only a few English words, in fact everyone is disgusted and feels like a rustic.

The plot is confusing, I don't know what to do, the plot is procrastinating, and there's nothing exciting about it.

After reading the first chapter, don't show off that you know Cantonese and translate it in (). Then why don't you just write it in Mandarin? Who are you writing for? Cantonese, Hong Konger? ? People from other places should not read it.

There are 107 comments, and none of them are agreed upon. It's ridiculous to insist on writing them in a messy way. This is only possible if you don't point to this thing.

I saw a woman in Thailand being drugged and having sex with her. I really couldn't stand it anymore. The first chapter was quite interesting, but the more I read, the more confusing it became...

A gangster crime novel, so-so! There is no sense of satisfaction in the Hong Kong drama world using the plot of the original work for its own benefit! It feels like I'm only wearing a Hong Kong composite shell! Not a real Hong Kong comprehensive article!

It was really painful to read, and the writing was so incomprehensible.

IQ is in arrears. Should I write an outline according to the script? Forced intelligence reduction

The writing is too messy. Since it is a Hong Kong comprehensive novel, the main context must be clarified. This book is about writing whatever comes to mind.

I read more than 50 chapters, but I really don't understand what it is about and what the theme is.

I feel relieved when I see you all scolding me.

I've read more than a dozen chapters and my head is spinning, and I don't know what to write?

What did you write? I only read about twenty chapters of a novel and I was confused. Is it okay?

Can the ambush chapter be more refined? It's too dragging!

The protagonist already knows the plot, but he still doesn't want to change, but insists on following the plot, and is still injured. What should he do?

Doctor

Chapter 14 persuades people to quit, mainly because they don't understand and don't understand the protagonist's operations.

Reading this book is more tiring than working part-time. It's poisonous. Let's briefly talk about a plot. In the previous plot, there is a scene where the protagonist discovers a trap. He sneers a few times and steps into it. You will know the poison of this damn thing. It was not written by one person at all.

You are writing Mandarin novels, not Hong Kong popular novels. You cannot use many dialect vocabulary, which is very discouraging.

Has the protagonist always been a fat guy? Didn't you lose weight later?

The protagonist is SB Don't blame me for swearing Catch the traitor before taking action First, don't change the action plan Second, don't ask the boss to report the situation Just act according to the previous plan I'm sorry for the disgust I made until you die.

It's not exciting at all, and it's a long paragraph to write, which looks quite tiring.

Free travel, a mess Fire Cloud Evil God

Click to take a look and capture the boss alive. I haven't seen this type of movie very often, and I read the reviews saying that it wasn't enjoyable, but I think it's okay. Wouldn't it be more appropriate to read Shuangwen and cultivate immortality?

There are more than 600 chapters, all of which are Hong Kong movies. I really don't understand what's good about Hong Kong movies and why I still write so many. No wonder it's not popular and I can just write one or two copies. How can I write too many? I deserve the death of being thrown into the street.