The Chat Partner Is from Another World

Progress: Finished reading the Tomb of the Desert God. I feel that the first few chapters until Yunlan's appearance are very interesting, and I have a lot of expectations. The first thing is to connect to the druid in another world, and let the druid transform through chatting on different channels. It is a bit interesting. At the same time, I am also looking forward to what the golden finger is that makes the protagonist stronger. Then the time traveler was suddenly mentioned, and then Yun Lan appeared, the second alien world, the second time traveler. The protagonist still had nothing, and his soul was inexplicably dragged into Yun Lan's body by the software. My feeling is that all expectations are gone. The mastermind behind the software is a puppet. The exchange with Yunlan is unattractive except for the beginning. Summary: The protagonist has no purpose and no gain. He acts as a pure tool man and follows another tool man to learn about the background of an alien world and sees the experience and corpse of a time traveler. It is difficult to continue following a story like this, and the lack of people in the comment area is probably largely due to this. Advantages: The author's writing style is good and the writing style looks comfortable and smooth. Disadvantages: The plot arrangement has very few exciting points, it is slow to start, and it seems to be in a daily style, similar to the feeling of my time and space hotel. Unfortunately, it is difficult to read without the interesting points, and the characters cannot stand up in the dry story. I hope the author will write better as he writes~

Grandma said that you must not read the author's books for nothing. Come on, please give me Gucheng crazy and subscribe automatically

Newcomers who have just watched it may be a little confused, thinking that apart from the sense of immersion, there is nothing interesting about the rich character descriptions. In fact, the author held back a lot, and the following description will reveal this special world view to you bit by bit. It's just that it's hard to write, it's a bit convoluted, and it's easy to break down! Come on, I want to see a different ending

Come take a look and support the author greatly (I will never say it's because the book is not famous and I haven't found any pirated copies yet)

Sometimes I feel helpless It's not that I hate it I just want to say: Many of you writers can't even write a main story with a single protagonist Why do you challenge group dramas with multiple characters and multiple plot lines? Is Wenqing disease all the same symptom? Just like what primary school Chinese teachers often say: ——I started writing prose before I finished writing each narrative. ——The writing is so scattered that the form and spirit are scattered. How dare you call it prose? Oh, I hope the author is really like a god One book will go platinum

The plot of Memento was a bit confusing, and to be honest, I was a bit dissuaded from it, and then it was put on the shelves, just in time to slip away...

Is it possible that people who don't smoke look annoying if they smoke cigarettes all the time?

What on earth is it about? I read it inexplicably and aimlessly. What does the protagonist want to do?

A cool article is not a cool article, the person behind the scenes is not the person behind the scenes, and upgrading the practice is not upgrading the practice. Just a soy sauce guy

Half of the protagonist's life is said to have disappeared. It was so disgusting that my desire to read instantly dropped by 60%.

Can you write less about Genshin Impact? I'm very confused ()

This book... The timeline is confusing. One thing is written over and over again, and there is too much ink in unimportant places. Showy words, lack of theme. After reading dozens of chapters, I felt like nothing was said. No plot, no focus, no climax.

After reading more than 80 chapters, I seem to have read it and then seem not to have read it.

It is recommended that the author persist, but this year many people who think they are correct are being forced by the data. But if I don't have my own ideas, I can't write anymore, so just shake off the burden and see the reaction.

First

It's a bit messy, the outline is not good, the theme is not clear, I can't stand it after reading about 30 chapters.

After reading the introduction, I thought of a game, which is about a girl from another world asking for help.

Tell me, how can you let your soul rest in peace?

Haha, sudden update, I only saw it on the 19th, 12 days have passed

Ah, I just ordered them all, don't hesitate.