The Love Style of the Passerby Male Protagonist

I feel that the author's control of the plot and characters is still not very good... When I first read the beginning, my eyes lit up and I thought it was very good. But if you look a little further, the male protagonist's "licking" character is revealed. At the beginning of the novel, it is clearly stated that the male protagonist's personality is cynical and good at force. Such a person, but for some inexplicable reasons, he basically obeys the words of the eldest ladies of various families. He will do whatever others tell him to do. In particular, he always refuses verbally first, but the woman loses after a little more effort. The reason is also very simple: giving money. So it's strange to me that the male protagonist who kills Zixijie all by himself will have no choice but to compromise with the young ladies. A person, especially a capable person, a person who is strong in certain aspects, is confident and proud in his heart and will not bow to others easily, but the male protagonist is... And I think there is a very strange logic. The male protagonist who hacked off the West Street and set the rules can obey the words of the young ladies in order to make money, and he always looks helpless on the surface. So why can't he take over Zixi Street to make money? Since he himself does not reject violence and is keen to use violence to solve conflicts on Zixi Street, can't he use his ability to make money? If it is illegal, it has been illegal from the moment he used violence. In general, it's very frustrating to watch, and it's getting more and more frustrating. The whole process is about the heroines showing how powerful they are and how good their family background is in front of the male protagonist. They use it to highlight the humbleness of the male protagonist. Their attitudes are definitely not friendly to the male protagonist. And the funniest thing is that they accidentally discovered that the male protagonist is quite capable of fighting and changed their attitude... The feeling of separation is serious.

Update quickly, not enough to read

There are so many characters, and the beginning was fine. By the time I read chapter 21, there were a lot of characters, but apart from the few in the bar, I only remember a light novel writer president with a lot of strange and dirty nicknames, a eldest lady who pursues the protagonist's friend, a protagonist's friend who likes the eldest lady's friend, and a maid classmate of the eldest lady. Others have no idea at all, and the protagonist's name is not familiar, so there are a lot of supporting characters who have no distinctive features. Roughly calculating, there are two brothers at the bar, a blonde guest girl who chatted for a long time, a girl who was rescued from the gangsters and laid the foundation, a boss who has been mentioned in many descriptions but did not appear, a president who has a lot of dirty names, a eldest lady who helps to make deals with friends, a eldest lady servant who was described from a personal perspective for a while, two women and a man during the meeting, look There may be girls with voodoo dolls, and there may be others that I didn't remember or got confused. Chapter 21 has 12 or more supporting characters or heroines, which... And the words are piled up, gorgeous and empty, and the characteristics of the characters are not seen at all. I only know that each of the women is beautiful from heaven, with beautiful legs, breasts and beautiful face. There are many gorgeous descriptions, and there are 3 or 4 descriptions of the protagonist's appearance as if she was in her prime. The background of the world seems to hide special powers. We can tell some from the descriptions of the voodoo dolls and the basement. The protagonist's tricks are to improve his combat skills and physical fitness. I guess there will not be too many battle plots in the future. I really doubt whether the author can control it. Can any book friends who have been following the book tell me about the highlights and opinions of this book?

Although I have only read Chapter 14. But I always feel that the protagonist is like a dog😅

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง! The reward has been given, the vote has been cast, it's super good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The characters are very delicately drawn, and I don't feel the poisonous points that others have said (maybe because the author's pace is slow, new readers can just look back, it's really not poisonous) Finally! ! ! One person's blood book, please update! ! !

Let me tell you, if you feel disgusted after reading the previous part and want to criticize it, please bear with it until you read it. Don't take it out of context to judge the subsequent plot. If you have any opinions, you can put them forward, but if you are full of shit as soon as you appear, then your comments will definitely be deleted and permanently banned. About Ji, it can only be said that Ji lost her mother when she was a child and closed herself off to give birth to a second personality. Because of her mother's death, she did not regard her friendship with her friend Ye Mo as her feelings for her mother: love (probably). Some readers said that this explanation is far-fetched... This is what is written in the outline! About Shang Xiaoyu, this person never wanted her to be the heroine (›´ω`‹ ) I don't know why you think she will be the heroine. I'm very confused, and there's talk of sending a girl away…please! He only appeared in two or three chapters and didn't even have a single line. Hey! Don't be preconceived! Hey! And it's even more impossible to almost take drugs in a bar! About An, some readers think that she is a combination of senior sister and Yukino... Um... I am not sure about this (ºº) Ahem, some readers say that An has a vicious tongue... Oh my god! It's better not to over-interpret it... This kind of thing is obviously a tsundere, a yandere and a venomous tongue. After reading the following, I basically like An (ღ˘⌣˘ღ). Anyway, let's talk about that sentence later. In addition, some readers asked why the protagonist didn't kill the heroine... Please! Do you want to be so violent... This is a romantic light novel (x_x;) Anyway, you will find that these early settings are not important anymore, so don't care too much about the details, let alone over-interpretation, (ﾉ_ _)ﾉ Personal suggestion, turn off the comment settings before reading this book, it will have a better reading experience | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ Finally, the update status... Gou Xuan updates every two days and accidentally asks for leave... Fuck! This book will be finished in October, and the new book is already being depositedｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

I vomited when I saw this. The strong taste of the taker and the soft-hearted behavior don't suit me at all. I'd better forget this kind of heroine who threatens the protagonist. Can you be tougher in doing things? I feel like a tool. I reluctantly accepted it at the beginning, but now it's poisoned. I don't know why you think of that Ji as the heroine? Maybe it's because I have a mysophobia, and I can't accept the heroine's ambiguous plot with other people, or blushing at other men. You two heroines have problems with your character. It's not that I can't accept the poisonous tongue, but let's forget about the poisonous tongue, right? There are also problems with the protagonist's character. If you hit a guy, you'll hit him, and if you hit a girl, you'll lick her. If someone has a venomous tongue, won't you respond with a venomous tongue? If it comes to me, I won't pay attention to this kind of woman, and the whole monitor, I don't know why there is still such an ex plot in 2021. The key author is that you are still positioned as the heroine. In the end, I can only say that the author, when you set up the heroine, can you think about how the plot will feel to the readers?

A few suggestions 1. In general, the venomous heroine in harem novels has a unique title for the male protagonist. Although she is also venomous to others, she will have honorific titles to reflect the close and distant relationship. When Ni Chen entered the scene, I almost thought she was a double male protagonist 2. The names of the protagonist and supporting characters should be clearer. This is a harem novel (let's not talk about the authenticity of the harem). Looking at the name Shang Yuer, 90% of people in harem novels will default to being the heroine, right? As a result, I was speculating on CP with the Ni Chen above. . . If you choose a second girl, a silly girl, etc., If you use less description in the early stage, no one will think of giving it away. If it was originally set to be a female protagonist, but later changed to a female protagonist after being unable to compete, it would feel even more discouraging. . . This means that most of the weak characters in Higaru don't need to be written. . . Falling in love makes people brave, and most people like to watch the scenes where a weak character creates a Shura field with a strong character because of their love. Overall, I quite like it, except for the parts of Ni Chen and Shang Yu'er. . .

There is no justice,

Thank you for the abuse of the heroine. If you don't abuse the heroine, I won't watch it again. Don't say whether you like it or not. I didn't want to watch it after reading the comments, but I still clicked on it. The more I read, the more frustrated I am? The more you read, the more you want to scold the author?

I haven't read it yet. I'm currently at chapter twenty-seven. I have to admit that I was naive. I imagined that I could torture the heroine to death later. It turns out that I thought too much, alas. Forcibly whitewashing the heroine is really an exaggeration, ahhh, why do you have to whitewash her! Isn't it bad for you to abuse the heroine later? Then you have to create a character for the heroine in the front, and whitewash it in the back. Is it interesting? No. Then this book, without the shell of the Stitch Monster, is just an ordinary light romance novel. What a fart! Waste of my feelings.

It's also strange. Some books have a vicious heroine and a male protagonist. I hate it very much and feel disgusted. But some books are different. For example, this book has a heroine with a vicious tongue and a male protagonist.

It really feels like a dragon. I hope the author will stick to it!

... Author, if you don't have the skill of the old thief, don't learn it 😥. Although the old thief is reviled by thousands of people, he knows where to describe the details, and at the same time, it touches people's hearts without boring the readers. However, what others write only makes people dazzled, and the story itself is not explained clearly. After reading it, it can only make people feel irritated. Let's explain the story clearly first and then add the finishing touches 😅

I finally realized that with this development, if nothing happens later, the male protagonist of this book will be a waste! Ahem, passers-by, passers-by. Interspersed between the real male and female protagonists, this and that, in the end I felt like I couldn't get anything! Then what is the significance of this book? Making two almost impossible heroines the heroine? Unless you later write that the female protagonists are overly dependent on the male protagonist of the book, and then he suddenly disappears, and finally the female protagonists find that they can't survive without him and want to find him. How else are you going to write it? Are the female protagonists gradually discovering the charm of the male protagonist in this book? What the hell? Is there at least one person I like as the male protagonist in the beginning? Where is the male protagonist of this book? I don't even know what the author brought to write this book. Is he really just a passerby? Even if I wrote it, I wouldn't write it so harshly! The heroine's attitude towards the hero is simply awesome. If I didn't come back later, I wouldn't even know the point of reading this book.

An Ruo, the eldest lady, is very wet and has no idea that so many big things have happened. , The power turmoil in this city has nothing to do with her family. It is said that he is very possessive and pretends to be under surveillance but does not even know that his man has become someone else's public son-in-law. The male protagonist is a complete scumbag but he still pretends to be innocent, and he is also very hypocritical. He kills people on a pier, and then he is still worried about killing a serial murderer. What the hell?

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Let's evaluate it. It's a bit weird in some places, such as the strange support group and other settings that I don't understand, the dialogue that makes no sense at all times, and the method of inserting character backgrounds that make people unable to complain. It's a bit back to the original style where it was all for love. Since the author has also read the Loading Love Game, I think you should also learn from his book's light skin and relaxed urban writing style, which may be more in line with the taste of Qidian. Of course, the author, if you want to say that this novel is your own work for pleasure, etc., Then that's really good.

I'm not biased, but how many good women like to go to nightclubs? I'm afraid it's not a bunch of cuckolds.

I will always support the author, come on!

The author works really hard, come on

There are only so many points in this number. They are all given to you. The writing is very good. Come on!

The eldest lady and the maid (Mechanical Buddy Universe)

All I can say is that I ordered it all before, but gave up after reading about half of it. It wasn't because the book wasn't good, but because the enthusiasm had faded. I saw this novel on the bookshelf today, and I came back to read the ending and leave a comment.

It's obviously very good-looking, but it's too miserable. It's really a different feeling. You can look further back.

The writing is pretty good, but the pacing is not. If I didn't have to write poisonous points, my grades would probably be good.

The senses are quite good, but some plots seem very abrupt.

I ended up scattering flowers, even though I was very reluctant to leave. I feel that a lot of content can be expanded. I will write the next book well 😫

I want to save some money, but I'm afraid I'll lose all the books I save.

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