Douluo: My Martial Spirit Is Kuang San

And Su Yuntao's performance was too ignorant. This is unreasonable, really. The Star Luo Empire has been inherited for who knows how many years, and the martial spirit must be registered. As a person who specializes in awakening martial spirits, would he recognize these famous martial spirits? Before coming to the Silla Empire to awaken, would you not do some homework? Well, even if he is uneducated. What makes me think the biggest drawback is that the Star Luo Empire royal family needs the Spirit Hall to help awaken the spirit? Oh my god, such a big empire can't awaken the martial spirit on its own? Sorry, maybe you have other plans, but I feel there are too many loopholes at first glance. Hope there will be improvements in the future.

Su Yuntao said that Lan Yincao was a useless martial spirit. As a result, he was called Blind Douluo. What is a useless martial spirit? It has no attack power, no defense power, no auxiliary power, and no control power. There is no development potential. These Bluesilver Grasses are all available. As the inspection deacon of Wuhun Hall, Su Yuntao awakens Wuhun for the common people. How could he not know the basic common sense of Wuhun? As long as it is a beast martial spirit, a weapon-type martial spirit, or a human martial spirit, it is impossible for it to be useless. At most, the development potential is low, and it will not be able to compare with some powerful martial spirits in the later stage. Chapter 3 Su Yuntao is described as a mud-legged guy who knows nothing. A guy who knows nothing can become a bishop, and a guy who knows nothing and has low strength can be appreciated by the Pope and specially transfer him from the Tiandou Empire to the capital of the Star Luo Empire? Su Yuntao's identification of Tang San's Blue Silver Grass as a useless martial spirit was based on the premise of not believing Yu Xiaogang's theory. Another reason is that Blue Silver Grass had never produced a soul master before Tang San. Ah Yin is a soul beast, and the news has long been blocked by Qian Daoliu. Tang San's Blue Silver Grass was no ordinary Blue Silver Grass. It's the Blue Silver Emperor. If it weren't for the two immortal herbs of the Ice and Fire Eyes, the Blue Silver Emperor would just be an ordinary control system or auxiliary system. Only Tang Hao's family and the spirit beasts knew about the Blue Silver Emperor's existence. Even the Shrek Seven Monsters and the Tang Sect established by Tang San himself didn't know about the Blue Silver Emperor's existence. Otherwise the Tang Sect would not have blindly chosen the people with the Blue Silver Grass Spirit as their sect leader. Dou Er also mentioned that the sect leaders in the past generations were the weakest beings at the same level.

Uh... You. Chapter 4, the first appearance of Wuhun, omits too many details. Kuangsan Wuhun doesn't even have an appearance description, and the expressions of other people are too bland. The key is that you said Kuangsan Wuhun is self-aware, right? So why don't you give a psychological description? Others saw that Kuangsan Wuhun's performance was really too bland. In this world where martial arts are inherited from the fathers, awakening a young girl's martial spirit is no more important. After all, the protagonist's father is a giant martial spirit, so it's okay to involve the martial spirit's mutation. The key is that this martial spirit still has autonomous consciousness? …Too many flaws. Let's see how you make up for it next.

Write it carefully and don't spoil the title.

Uh, why has it been so long? The book review section is so deserted except for me. How many have you collected? Personally, I feel that when writing a novel, the first few chapters are very important. To be honest, your first few chapters are a bit sloppy and need to be improved.

Damn it, I originally wanted to open a new book. Unexpectedly, the name was registered. When I checked, I found someone who thought the same thing as me. It's pretty good to use Kuang San as a martial spirit. Come on, keep writing.

To be honest, I think it's a bit messy. Please break it down into more sections.

It's divided into multiple sections, and it's a headache to read just two sections on one page. Also, there are too many explanations (long-winded).

Why isn't it updated? In the new book period, updates are the keyah, my little brother.

Coming, coming 😁

This is not updated anymore. If it is not updated, forget it and it will be removed from the shelves.

Will Zhu Zhuqing accept it? To tell the truth, Dai Mubai and Master are the same as Qian Xunji