I Can Create Magical Items

Opinion floor. As a newbie, my writing skills can only improve gradually. I wrote this book for the love of electricity when I got interested. They are just some interesting ideas. If there are any shortcomings, please mention them directly in this chapter so that I can correct them and grow. Don't talk about the writing style, just tell me which paragraph has the problem, because most people just talk about the writing style directly. I don't know where the problem is and it is difficult to correct it.

It's because I'm not good at writing and I didn't shape it well. It was originally supposed to be one kind. Although I took good care of you when you were little. I was afraid that you would be cold and prepared a comfortable house for you. I was afraid that you would be thirsty and hungry. I would prepare enough food and water. I would buy medicine when you were sick. I would actively clean the house and clean up the feces for you. However, it did not affect the feeling of eating meat at the end of the year. (Person) You are my wife, I love you, I like you. I think whatever you do is right. In real life, I work hard and earn money to support my family. I am willing to pay and rush in because of "me". Like. You? You you? You you you? Life and love can be separated. If there is the first you, there will be the second and third you (people)

The words do not convey the meaning, the words are verbose, confusing, a running account, missing words and few words, and the description of people, objects, and scenes is incomplete. It is a good idea, but it is a pity that the writing style is like a flash student from a giant university in the universe.

I came across this book last year when the author just started it. The subject matter was good but the writing was too poor and the main line was too confusing. It doesn't matter if the main line is messy, but the writing is so poor. There are typos, missing words, sentence fragmentation, expressions, mistakes, and many other problems that make my head hurt. I read one or two paragraphs when I was bored. I only read Chapter 40 intermittently today. I really couldn't help but want to ask, is the writing better in the later chapters?????

A message to the author: First of all, the imagination is wide open and the props are good😊. It can be seen that the author is very careful; but, you created a world, why don't you interact with the world? Don't always be immersed in your own imagination, interact with the world! Introduce the details of your world to everyone so that everyone can get to know your world and wander around in your world.

I want to prove that I sent the picture, it just doesn't show up.

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This is the planned route that was originally planned to connect Volume 1 and Volume 2. The first one is the romance world, the direction of development is the free demon, the demon is ruthless and careless, toying with all sentient beings - demons The second fairy tale world, the innate ancient gods are replaced by the gods of belief, the protagonist gradually eats away these belief gods to become the only god, and finally swallows the whole world, and then divides into small worlds, formulates possibilities, past lives and Anime movies related to gods cultivate this small world farm into a multi-world group, just to cultivate the materials they need, harvest the mysterious materials, put in nutrients, and mysteriously revive. All living beings are lambs managed by shepherds. They are truly like gods above. The development direction of the third classical Classic of Mountains and Seas world has been revealed, but in order to maintain mystery, I won't say it. This is a classical element without the prehistoric system. It doesn't write too many messy things. It is a simple beast, a mythical beast, a disaster beast, a world of mountains and seas where the legendary ancient gods feed each other, golden crows fly in the sky, Kun Peng swims in the sea, and all things are free in the frost and sky - monsters. The kind of fairy world. Fairy Tale Century, so we are looking for a naive light, a place where there is no good or bad, and people are chaotic and evil, which does not mean they have to be violent or a pervert. They are only for the benefit of themselves and the people around them. A little bit of darkness that makes people think carefully should be the development direction of Cthulhu type darkness. There are always book friends who say that I write in Cthulhu. Volume 3 is actually a preparation to alleviate that darkness. Primitive animality and survival and hunting, devouring and being devoured. Food language is called food, only for survival, without emotions, and morality is only for survival. If we go by the opinion put forward by a certain book friend, it is to develop quickly and directly become a big boss, start unlimited travel, go on a gorgeous journey as a human being, and follow the comprehensive comic route. Anyway, the plot is probably about these two developments!

If you think your writing is not good, why don't you just write more straightforwardly? I feel that my writing is not good and I like to foreshadow my writing, and if you don't say it in this chapter, I won't even know it's a foreshadowing. Once a story is told clearly and wonderfully, I feel pretty good. A bunch of drama queens are operating, and people are addicted to food. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

I persisted for a while and wondered whether the author did it on purpose. Reading these words made my head hurt. There were too many places where the sentences didn't make sense and I couldn't bear it anymore.