I Have a Time and Space Gate

I like this kind of theme of developing a different world with Guo Jia. I will save it for now and watch it later.

As expected, this kind of book cools down quickly.

Is the protagonist a time traveler? But there is no explanation at the beginning of the article (or I missed it). If it is a time traveler, then it is understandable that the country does not understand the situation in the different world in the current plot. It would be ridiculous if the protagonist were an Aboriginal person. Today's military is not ignorant of what is going on outside the window, or it cannot do this in terms of soldier resources. They are all people who have experienced the explosion of the Internet, especially the young soldiers. Cartoons, movies, and games are all "all five poisons." Even if the soldiers of the "older generation" are not very good at the Internet, they will be able to do it if they are taught by the younger generations of comrades and family members. At this time, there is a high probability that the protagonist does not know what kind of different world or new world this is, and some soldiers have already guessed it.

Can I say that it looks awkward if I don't watch the two-dimensional animation (Dog Head) To be honest, I haven't seen many anime but I know some famous ones. However, the author's subject matter is quite good. I look forward to continuing it and have invested in it.

Come on, you have to keep writing and I will keep following you

After reading the first chapter, my first feeling was that there were missing words, and the second feeling was that the punctuation was wrong. It is recommended that the author check it after writing. If the reading experience is not good, it will feel like copying someone else's work, which is why there are missing words and punctuation.

By the way, what kind of world is the first world? What impression do I feel?

I said that the different world feels a bit familiar. The relationship is changed to Zanchi, and the plot feels weird after the magic change.

I was confused when I read it. I didn't know what it was written. What was it doing? The main thread of the mission was not obvious, it was very messy and couldn't be connected at all, which made me waste my brain and quit.

To be honest, I didn't understand it. I just updated the chapter and I don't know what it is about⊙_⊙

Not bad, but the writing is too messy. There are some chapters where I have no idea what you are writing. I'd better improve my writing, overall it's okay.

No need to discuss, we have already entered the palace

There is a very big bug. I remember it was explained in one chapter that the protagonist is only 15 years old, but his personal performance and IQ performance are completely different from that of a 15-year-old to a 25-year-old

Finish the book directly? Author, you are cheating people and not paying for their lives. If I invest a hundred dollars, I will get back 25😭😭😭

Three bodies, three bodies rushing

I really like this kind of subject matter, but be careful about sensitive topics. Many similar people have already received 404s or eunuchs. I'm optimistic about you and keep going!

The male protagonist's emotional and diplomatic lines are boring. Is the country's training arranged like this? The male protagonist?

What is the world view of Red Alert? ? It's very confusing

From the beginning of Chapter 26, there was a mess and irrelevant plot, so I skipped chapters to read it.

A very good subject has been badly written by you.

I just read Chapter 6. Can you give me an accurate estimate of 15 or 18?

Why is the status complete?

Let me ask, is this world "Zhan Chi Tong"? Why do I feel like everyone's names are different?🤭