Looking for Perfection in Zhetian

I felt really uncomfortable reading this book and couldn't stand it.

It's quite strange. You know you are in Zhetian, but you are still shocked at how the sect has been passed down for hundreds of thousands of years. It's like you know you are traveling to the West, and you are still shocked that there are immortals in the world!

This book is written in a literate manner, and the arrangement of the protagonist is very strange, and there is no sense of substitution. If the entire time traveler does not know about Zhetian, it is not as good as the first book.

This is a bit strange to start with. There are so many chapters where you still don't know what training is. It's okay even if you arrange a protagonist who hasn't read Shetian. However, it's really a bit urgent to start so many chapters without training.

It's ridiculous. The insights of a person who has been practicing Taoism for many years are not as good as those of a person who has never been exposed to Taoism. Are you kidding me? She still has modern higher education. During the long years of practicing Taoism, modern knowledge and insights are like a summer insect that cannot speak ice. It is extremely ridiculous.

I can't read it, the writing is unclear, it's too messy, it's not suitable for modern articles, it's not smooth, and it's causing amnesia and I don't know how to cover the sky, so why read a fanfic?

What? The protagonist doesn't know how to cover the sky, and then pretends to be an expert and joins the Lingbao sect. He is a novice in spiritual practice and discusses Taoism with the practitioners. The supporting character has a facial expression and no IQ. . .

After reading a few chapters, I was stunned that I, who had read the original work, didn't understand it!

Everyone writes in vernacular, so why does the vernacular of this book sound so uncomfortable?

Follow the author and never give up, the fourth one

Let me tell the author, you misunderstood what I said in this chapter. Lingbao Tianzun's wheel sea is actually the same as everyone else's. The reason why there are nine springs of Tianzun's life is because after a long time, the big life spring has dried up, and the remaining part is Those nine little ones Original text of Chapter 1,114 of the following chapter: "Shading the Sky" "Why is there more than one spring of life? Could it be that several deities were buried together? Wouldn't it be a super sea tomb?" The nine-tailed crocodile dragon criminal muttered. In the age of mythology, there were nine gods and Taoists, all of whom were extremely mysterious and whose final destinations were unknown. Ye Fan frowned, shook his head, and said: "This sea of ​​suffering is so vast and boundless, comparable to an ancient star field, and although the spring of life is large, it is still relatively small." Ye Fan speculated that the truly boundless spring of life is about to dry up, and these springs of life are just overflowing "a few strands of fairy essence". If they were connected together in their heyday, they would be countless times vaster than this.

A time traveler knows how to pull coffins in Nine Dragons and how to cover the sky And then he doesn't know anything about the Lingbao sect. He is just like the aborigines. The protagonist's setting is very contradictory.

It turns out it's still being updated, what a perseverance! Fans of fans are really not lovable, as you can tell by looking at the current score of this book. It is still recommended that the author reopen a pure Zhetian fanfic. To be honest, Taishang Wuwu is much better than this one, which is such a pity. Good luck to you and see you soon. I hope this isn't your last comment.

The writing is incomprehensible, and I don't know what the author actually wrote.

As a fanfic, the writing in this book is not bad, but the start is too slow, which simply tests the reader's patience. No matter how deep you bury the foreshadowing, if the character is not likeable at the beginning, it will be a big failure.

The writing style is good, but the logic seems a bit confusing. Most of the Zhetian fandoms probably like the majestic feeling. I think the author can write more in this aspect.

In the clouds and fog, the writing is very pretentious.

It's a weird article, I can't say there's anything wrong with it.

Dude, I'm curious if you've messed with anyone.

You might as well write about an aborigine. You have to write about a time traveler who doesn't know the plot and has a flash of inspiration haha

Have you read the Lingbao Tianzun book? That one is really well written

It can still be seen that Taishang Wuji is witnessing ancient history, but whether you are there or not, he is there and it will happen. It has become the past, and I can't see what the meaning is! Are you pretending! What's the point of your appearance in this book? Are you taking every opportunity to write your story in the original text? I'm not pretending. I don't know what to say in many places. The red-sharp spear appears. It's not so bad to simply write a time-travel fanfic with your writing skills.