Desolate Travel

The prehistoric world view is very uncomfortable, so try to write as little as possible about this kind of thing. For example, what was Pangu's opening of the sky and the Big Bang that exploded the universe? Or split the earth from the atmosphere? He was conceived by chaos, the earliest creature, splitting the continent and sky, and then he could only transform into all things? Sun and moon? No matter how you look at it, it has split a planet, at most a star system. Don't talk about the settings of other novels. Some novels even say that chaos is just a small world. Don't change history and some myths. In the early days, such novels were okay, but now they are no longer popular. People who have been to elementary school will feel awkward when reading this, unless they are newbies or brainless non-bookworms who just read a few pages temporarily. There is a huge contrast between many myths and reality, and it will feel awkward no matter how magically they are modified. Even many books with this setting are unable to construct a model of the world in their minds at the end.

Is there a big shot coming soon?

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I read the first dozen chapters in one go, so I can't wait for the update.

You and I write books a bit like we write movies. To put it simply, it is like a running account, but the writing is quite good and the description is very good. Because I have been troubled by this problem for a long time. I found out from the beginning when I wrote 10,000 words. The writing of these 10,000 words is smooth and the segmentation is pretty good. Because of this, I stopped updating and wondered for a long time, and I couldn't find it after thinking about it for a long time. I figured out what the problem was, so I looked for some fantasy novels on the market. I felt that the writing style was like a magic novel. I wrote three chapters and 10,000 words, but there was something awkward about it that I couldn't describe. I sometimes write short paragraphs, but those things were written without too many ideas and restrictions on the outline of the characters. The style does not have the feeling of a running account, but the writing style is too white, just like the Eternal God Emperor. Moreover, I also think that the beginning of the writing is better than some plain writing, and then I learned some online writing skills. Sometimes I wonder if I have injected too much imagination, and painted too much in order to pursue the picture in my mind, or I say that I am trapped in a circle of topics, just like someone else is writing a whole TV series but I write it like a movie or CG. I pursue the writing not to be too white, but I don't want it to be as protracted as the movie. Many plots are difficult to describe and extend due to the atmosphere of the movie. I still don't fully understand this until now. 😅

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