Use Xp System to Build the Devil City

The writing is okay, but there is a problem with the label. I personally recommend changing the label to light novel + two-dimensional. Of course, the current labels of fantasy and magic are not inappropriate, but from the perspective of fantasy and magic, it has been a series of intellectual attacks since the first chapter, which makes it a bit embarrassing to watch. On the basis of embarrassment, there are too many free chapters, which makes it difficult to attract people. Of course, changing the tag is just a personal suggestion. I hope the author will get better and better.

Isn't it exciting! But it seems very interesting!

The author's writing is very good~ Come on and write~ Otherwise I will send it🔪🔪🔪😇

I think the author made a mistake. What we want to see is not the XP system on the protagonist, but your XP system.

The title of this book makes me call it "good guy!" "I Use the Sexual Fetish System to Build the Demon King's Castle" 🙂

This light novel already has the potential to be adapted into an anime... I can see the descriptions in many places... Bella is pouting, watching the elves happily eating instant noodles... Come on, the author, don't be a eunuch.

Demon King's Army (✘) Harem Group (✔)

It's really weird that it's a Windows XP system.

Before I read the book, I just wanted to know, is this XP serious?

This book is good, I thought it was xp, but when I clicked in, I found out it was xp. After reading it for a while, I found out it was indeed xp.

How should I put it? The protagonist has forgotten that a weak country has no diplomacy, as well as city walls, tunnels, traps, and equipment. Peace is about being strong on one's own, not about licking anything all day long. Damn it, from the rabbit tribe to the pig-headed man, you will be rejected once. Forget about the Sword Demon King, but I can't understand the pig-headed men. You know they are going to invade your territory and you still want to lick them. You need to play at least one game to earn some time to develop.

After reading a few chapters, the heroine gave up to the devil for free. She was already weak, but I heard that the hero is still a eunuch, which made me lose the desire to read on.

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At present, I think the only poisonous point of this novel is the age setting of the protagonist in his previous life, as well as the operations in the protagonist's plot: he gives up escaping as soon as he sees the XP system, and gives up without even trying it. Shouldn't normal adults make a conclusion after turning the whole system over and over again? Even when being hunted, he evaded and pretended that there was no system. In the end, he was forced to go out of his way to explore. This operation is really not something that a 30-year-old who can become a company manager can do. It would be about the same for a 15-year-old child. It would be very reasonable if the protagonist's age in his previous life was changed to 15 years old. Even if the protagonist's thoughts and actions are more childish, it will not give people a poisonous feeling.

White hair, red eyes, crooked legs on head, good figure, wearing a dress. This must be Bella, right.

I'm very confused. Is it so difficult to learn magic when there are top-notch dark talents and a group of dark elves? After dozens of chapters, I don't have any idea about this. So what's the point of setting this talent to make the protagonist look more like the Demon King? And in the chapters about the Alliance, you can go to the small tribe to understand the situation before going there. As a result, you just go up and punch others in the face, making the protagonist look like a sz. I can't understand it at all while playing and describing daily life.

I suddenly felt something when I saw the picture in front of me.

I want to write a book, what about the LSP system? The ability is to touch the breasts of a beautiful woman for one minute, and you can gain the opponent's physical fitness, plus a random ability or talent including embroidery, coquettishness, spells, combat skills including but not limited to, the physical fitness can be superimposed, and the ability and talent can be upgraded similarly.

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If you leave it in the library, it will suddenly end. I want to say a few words. The advantages and disadvantages of this book are obvious. The author's writing skills are quite good, but he can't write stories at all. The character creation is also very stereotyped. In the early stage, it is obvious that the author is poor and has run out of inspiration. I can only say that an interesting idea cannot support a long writing, and it must rely on the accumulation of daily materials. After all, reading an imaginary article requires one idea after another, but the daily update mode of online articles is not enough to support this kind of imagination. If the author plans to open another book, my suggestion is to write a fanfic. The advantage of fanfic is that there is no need to worry about character creation and plot lines, and the author has serious weaknesses in this aspect. To give a simple example, the person in the top ten of the light novel rankings, the corpse collector of the possible world, his plot control ability and character creation ability are one level better than the author, but because of the big tree of Conan IP, he is prosperous.

The author has been here for an hour. No one has commented yet. Author, if you continue to do this, no one will read it. Take it seriously! This is the final advice to you from your loyal readers😭

More than 500 chapters later, the protagonist is still a eunuch

In the first few chapters, there is a lot of intelligence Forcing the protagonist to be evasive and "no time" Anyway, you can feel it After that, you can transform into a dragon when you have the ability to transform, but you can't change into a tree or stone. If it doesn't work, reeds in the water won't work, it's very safe

Almost fully booked, saw close to 80%. Forget it if I order 80 more chapters. In fact, 50% of the time, I wanted to give up because of weak country diplomacy. 80% of the time, good guys, invite a human family to open a harem in the Demon King's army. That's awesome. I've never seen a protagonist in a different world novel give away a woman to improve his abilities. Oh no, he gave away an elf lolita as a spouse. At the end of the writing, a human character who has never been masked and has no meaning can be a man. The protagonist can only be a eunuch. Really, in just these few chapters, I thought of 100 ways to make a tauren. I really can't stand it anymore.

Ha? Finished? It's quite sudden

I've ordered it all. Come on, author, it's really good. You must keep writing.

I came here specifically to give a reward, but I couldn't stand watching it even after it was put on the shelves. The plug-ins are interesting, but the plot is really boring.

It feels like this book is almost finished.

It's very nice. I feel like I put it in the wrong division. I'll come back to complete the order when there's a recharge event next time. I'll order 100 chapters first.

What happened from 94 to 95? Did it jump?