A Journey to the Heavens Starting from the Journey to the West

To be honest, author, do you think the beginning of your writing is a bit messy? Especially the setting of the protagonist's predecessor. He devoted himself to studying and practiced martial arts for two days. What did his father think? Wouldn't it be better to just change it to say that you have never learned martial arts? Anyway, I didn't think that practicing martial arts for two days had any impact on the subsequent plot. After reading two or three chapters, I felt that the protagonist's father was schizophrenic. This was to prevent him from practicing martial arts. If you have time, really, change the setting at the beginning.

Isn't this protagonist just a retard? He is either laughing or angry all day long. He has no writing skills and no plot. If you are writing a corresponding novel, if you don't read the novel, you should at least watch the TV series. You are writing nonsense.

Suddenly, Wang Yuyan disappeared? ? ?

The pace of this book is too fast and there is no detailed description. It is a fast food article.

Is there any point in leading an army in Journey to the West? Kill tens of millions of mortals with a wave of your hand, no matter how many troops you have, they will just be cannon fodder! Journey to the West relies on skills, opportunities, training materials, and your own understanding. If you travel to the Song Dynasty and join the army... Haha, let alone knowing about Journey to the West, even if you go to the Song Dynasty from the beginning, you must first kill the Emperor of the Zhao family if you want to join the army! The Song Dynasty was really not weak. It could be said that the country was rich and the people were strong. It was just that the emperor was not good enough and brought out a group of corrupt civil servants, so it was weak! Traveling through the Song Dynasty, you can only rebel, and you must rebel!

I don't understand why I went to the martial arts world to learn my skills while traveling to the West.

Is your Journey to the West serious? Bringing a few people back out of thin air, does everyone have to be covered up for a certain number of days? The protagonist himself is a time traveler. Are the numbers in the Book of Life and Death in Journey to the West calculated manually? It should be automatically generated by heaven and earth, right? If you bring people back, humans won't notice, gods won't notice, and heaven and earth won't notice? It's not just talk that all heretics should die.

After watching it for a while, I felt really stupid. Why do you worry about this or that when it comes to the damage potential of cultivation techniques? You are not even an immortal and you are worried about nothing. What right do you have to worry? The most annoying thing is that he has thoughts about Wu Zetian not long after the beginning. I really don't know what the author thinks. The main world is not a historical version or a cultivation version. It is a world where immortals and gods will perish. According to most Journey to the West templates, Wu Zetian is surrounded by at least the reincarnations of the Bodhisattva level, and they may even be disciples accepted by Taoist bosses! This is really getting more and more awkward the more I watch it At the beginning of Yang Shen, he became a thief, and later he attacked Meng Shenji. This is nothing, after all, his character is not very good, but what qualifications do you have to say so to the two big guys of Creation and Immortality, who created a cultivation system from scratch and led the human race to rise to become the mainstream protagonist in the world. What qualifications do you have to look down on others? You are writing a book, and you must at least respect the characters in the book. You know, the image of the protagonist to me is that of a loser, a coward whose mentality cannot be corrected after getting rich! I haven't read the copies that will be released later. If this is still the case, we can only say goodbye. The character creation is really inconsistent with my three views

After identification, this book is an obscene work. Treating people as collectibles just because those four women are beautiful twins? ? ? ? ? ? Excuse me, has the protagonist never seen a beautiful woman? Also, for a modern person, nothing is more important than freedom. Put a person in a space where there are no animals or plants, only a few pitiful necessities of life, how to poop, pee, and how to deal with it. Has the protagonist considered it? Has the author considered it? Would the author want to be done like this? Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you. Forcing things that the protagonist and the author can't stand on others, let alone four women. Author you. . . . . . . . . . . . . Also, biologists and sociologists have proven that man is a social species. He cannot exist alone without human society. If so, they would rather commit suicide than endure this kind of loneliness. The four people still don't know how long it will take for the protagonist to release them into nature. Man is not an animal, not an ornament in a zoo. Does the author treat people as if they are livestock? Abandon playing around. Writing novels is not just for fun. If it is for fun, then you should have your own bottom line. At least you can't do something anti-intellectual and anti-human!

I took away a lot of women in the first world... Let me go, look at which best-selling novels are still in the harem, should they be eliminated long ago?

Why is it opening high and going low again? Could it be that all those who traveled to the Westward Journey could not grow up without taking a trip to the gold-type martial arts? It's so simple. The first world that every Journey to the West travels through is the gold martial arts world. Why go there? Pretending?

I am stupid, the plot is okay, but there are many mistakes in this common sense. You are writing about the Tang Dynasty and imagine that a local policeman has a thousand acres of land. Are you crazy? Writing about the period of Journey to the West, it was said that there were no human beings among the gods and Buddhas in the sky. Buddhas such as Sakyamuni and gods such as Li Jing said: What, I have been expelled from the human race?

It's a bit disgusting that he actually takes people through time. I gave up immediately when I saw Bringing a Woman Back. No matter how you play it, if the golden finger is exposed, there is no need to watch it. It cannot be said that there is no heroine, but it is about traveling across the world with a woman! I really feel that this is a particularly big poisonous point. There is no sense of crisis at all. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist is just playing, and it is not about the gods becoming stronger. It's the kind where the heavens go around and take in women! I feel so disgusted with this kind of protagonist right now!

I'm speechless. In Journey to the West, your martial arts training was of no use, but you also traveled to the Eight Tribes of Demi-Gods? You are useless even in Shenlong Babu.

I've written more than a hundred chapters and I'm still a first-tier guy in an iron shirt. Damn it!

The protagonist has problems with his outlook on life. After learning Wu Yazi's skills, he still shows all kinds of disgust and insults. It's so stupid. It's a typical white-eyed wolf behavior. If I were Wu Yazi, I wouldn't pass on the skills to the protagonist even if I died.

I saw Wu Yazi's disciples who were learning other people's martial arts, taking other people's things and mocking them, belittling them and even insulting them and calling them names. They looked down on all kinds of trash. I really don't know where I got my confidence or quality. I don't ask you to be grateful, but I ask you to be a human being. No wonder this book has so many chapters but few people have read it.

I don't understand why they brought out a few useless women? Is it a vase? Does it increase weaknesses?

I am speechless. If I take people through time and space at will, do I really think that Heavenly Dao or saints are fools?

The world of the first "Dragon" was a little bit poisonous, the author was overly pretentious and had a harem. After accepting the quadruplets, I stopped talking to Li Qinglu. Anyway, one is from the orphanage and the other is the princess of the subjugated country. But what about Mengshi? Where are her parents? After taking in Wang Yuyan, where is her mother, Mrs. Wang? Got killed by your secret? To sum up, the protagonist is a selfish and arrogant person. Although the author has matured in writing the protagonist, the protagonist reflected in your words has not changed.

It's just a low-level journey through time. He also brought the people he brought out of the space. You are the electric light in the toilet. The monk has lice on his head. I have never seen such a sacrifice.

I don't know why, but the author keeps emphasizing the words "own woman" and "own maid" in the article. It feels like he is deliberately trying to reduce the number of words. I have read a lot of Tianwen, but I have never seen any novel written like this. It feels very awkward.

I especially don't like this kind of traveling with other people. Every time you take someone to your own world, there is an added danger.

There are three golden chapters in the front, and rubbish in the back. As soon as they arrived in the Song Dynasty, they rushed to do things without knowing the background. It didn't matter if they started doing things. The iron cloth shirt they practiced was too awesome, too fake. Besides, can the effect of cultivation in the world of cultivating immortals be the same as that in the world of low martial arts? It is even more false to go to Wu Yazi later. If the power of the imperial court in Tianlong is so strong, all the martial arts in the world are not in the hands of the imperial court. The martial arts and the imperial court are two worlds that do not interfere with each other. You did not see Qiao Feng going to Khitan and became the king of Nanyuan with his martial arts. According to your calculation, Qiao Feng cannot be killed by the power of the imperial court. Let's talk about the Osmanthus Flower Manual (it must only become awesome after the spiritual energy declines, otherwise a thousand eunuchs who know the Sunflower Manual will not be able to unify the world, and 99 out of 100 people will not be able to discover it, but one of them will find it). Let's talk about Qipan Mountain. Your best soldiers can go up the mountain. It can be regarded as a deep mountain and old forest, and there is no road. Finally, he constantly threatened Su Xinghe and Wuyazi. A genius who was proficient in various subjects could not do it in the mountains even with 100,000 troops. If Yazi hadn't been so easy to deceive (he would believe whatever the pig's trotters said), he could only have the power of one blow, and he would have been insulted by the pig's trotters in every possible way. He would have learned nothing about Tao and martial arts. He also begged Pig's Foot to become a disciple because of his talent in external skills, which was really laughable. Being good at external skills does not necessarily mean you are talented at internal skills. Besides, pig's feet are not the only ones who are talented.

Yangshen is the world, you set it to level two 😅

How should I put it, in those mythical worlds, there is no need for human emperors. The emperor can only live for a hundred years, and a dynasty can last for hundreds or thousands of years. Please, The myth is straightforward. Even if the emperor cannot become an immortal, he should be able to live for hundreds of years. A dynasty can last at least tens of thousands or even millions of years!

Also, Journey to the West is actually in the stage of Li Shimin in the Tang Dynasty. That really made me laugh to death. There is also a soldier who is so happy when he praises him. No one will flatter him when he becomes the emperor? Wu Zetian really appeared. According to your calculation, wouldn't it be modern after a thousand years? Is this the timeline for Journey to the West?

The first few chapters were okay and I thought it was a good book. But I couldn't stand the rest of the book. There were only a few of them. I couldn't stand it even if I skipped through it. The world of Journey to the West is full of monsters. The protagonist even risked his life to bring people from other worlds to the main world. Thinking about the lower body. Farewell.

Aren't you afraid of overturning if you tell people directly? I feel like you should be a little more cautious and basic deception is still necessary.

If the protagonist passes the iron shirt to a woman, isn't he afraid of being exterminated?