Cousin Wanfu

Are you sure the author didn't just make up the word count? It's so long-winded to write

Did the author make up the word count? A half-year-old child, a half-year-old girl, I almost vomited reading it, it felt like there was a sentence in every chapter. The first time I read a novel, I skipped between the male and female protagonists. I can't say it doesn't look good, and I can't say it looks good either. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

Hello, author. I was recommended to you by another friend. I have read the novel from beginning to end. I like it very much. I also saw my hometown Xiuyan in it, but I don't know if it is the same place. Hahaha, I hope you can continue to work hard and write more excellent works! !

I read what was recommended on Xiaohongshu. It was OK at first, but the more I read, the worse it became, so I decided to abandon the article.

After reading more than a thousand chapters, I feel numb

I thought it looked great after watching the beginning! The author's writing style is very good, and the dialogues between the characters are not concise and archaic, and they do not make people feel awkward. The plot development is very reasonable.

The growth process is too detailed and too slow. I have to write down everything I do every day in detail, which makes me tired.

This is really the most verbose article I have ever read. The words are repeated over and over again. After reading more than 600 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. This is too boring 😅

The author's writing style is very good and he often quotes from classics. It's just that the plot advances too slowly and there are too many chapters. It feels like the heroine lives her life according to the day. Whatever she did today, she will do tomorrow. She has only passed one year old after hundreds of chapters. Moreover, the age of the female protagonist is too young, and she feels that she is capable of anything before she is ten years old, and the male protagonist still has a deep love for him. Although the setting is in ancient times, the readers are modern people after all, so it always feels strange. In addition, the male and female protagonists have their own halo, they are so smart, and they have strong assists around them, so they have almost no shortcomings. If the male and female protagonists cheat all the way, the plot will seem boring.

I feel that the ages of the male and female protagonists are too young. At the beginning, the female protagonist is like a three-year-old child, but within a few months she is like an adult. The contrast is too great.

I have never seen such cool writing...

What is this? The two supporting characters are more cautious than the two protagonists?

I originally planned to read it for free, but the author wrote so well 😰 that I read it in advance

When the heroine said that although his father had bad personal ethics, he just had a common problem with most men. He was a bit stuck in his throat. He cheated on his wife during pregnancy (some people may think that it was not cheating in ancient times). He had an argument with his wife and pushed her down, causing her to bleed. When he saw his wife lying in a pool of blood, he did not save her, but ran away without looking back. He is a murderer, even after his wife's death, he spent her dowry, fell in love with Mr. And Mrs. Yang, and treated his original daughter harshly. The heroine took revenge on Mr. Yang and made her imprisoned semi-crazy. It was her father's turn. He was just guilty of a common problem of most men. Anyone can say this. She can't, can she be worthy of the biological mother who is under Jiuquan? Before her mother died, she was ill and tried her best to arrange everything for her. She might not be able to feel at ease until she died. It was obvious that two people made mistakes, but only the woman was unlucky. Her father continued to serve as his official outside the home, and even though he had a prosperous official career, the heroine had to be filial to her if she had anything. He, what luck is there? His father still has a bright face, and he is like a flower at home, and he has a beautiful family in his arms. Without the Xie family, there is the Yang family, and without the Yang family, there are younger and fresher ones. Just because they are male, they take all the benefits. Even women excuse them, but they are committing a common fault of most men.

The heroine is really frozen... She has done countless things, traveled to a lot of places, fought with squires, and knocked down a lot of people. However, the heroine is still 13 years old. Either the events and time are synchronized, or the age is not mentioned, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable. The heroine does not have to get married at 15.6 Years old. It doesn't matter if she is 18.9 Or more than 20 years old. Anyway, during the turmoil, it would be really awkward to keep her age frozen.

Why is it that after chapter 400, the pig's feet are still 10 years old! It's too procrastinating…

In fact, it looks okay, but the wording is a bit too refined, and a bit vulgar and pretentious. If it is restrained, it will look better.

I first got to know the author as the author of Rebirth of a Rich Family: The Return of the Devil's Daughter. I really like the novels written by the author. Today I accidentally discovered the author's new article. I look forward to the author's great success 😜😜

The first part is okay, but the further you go, the more wordy it gets. There are too many references to scriptures, too few plot descriptions, and the key points are not captured.

Can I say that it was Mrs. Yu who caused all the tragedies?

I have read about a quarter of the time, and I feel that this book is about taking the families of several people and recreating their characters based on the character "Green, Fat, Red, and Thin". For example, in "Knowledge", Feng Shaofeng's mother is the daughter of a wealthy businessman from Jiangnan. When the male protagonist was a child, he was... The male protagonist's father died, and the male protagonist is the eldest son, but he was suppressed by Bai Lianhua's stepmother since he was a child. And Liying's mother died in childbirth due to being raped by someone, so the female protagonist was raised by her grandmother, but her father didn't treat him very much. In this book, Yaoyao is a combination of the two of them. She has a super-rich mother who died in childbirth and has no father to love her. Liang Shu's father also has the same temperament - he is obsessed with officialdom and values ​​​​face, and family honor and disgrace are above all else. Especially the heroine's family has a carefree mistress and concubines. The male protagonist and villain of this book are re-creations. The author writes it very well. It is really immersive to watch. It is so graceful and charming. Come on, author.

Without mentioning anything else, let's talk about the heroine and Aunt Xu making pills. There is not only one nanny who came out of the palace, Nanny Xu, but the feeling in the article is that Nanny Xu is the best in the world. The medicinal tea she taught the heroine to make has a fragrance that has never been seen outside the palace. If it is because the heroine's unique spiritual dew is added, the effect is strange, but even the ordinary ones have extraordinary effects, which no other noble family has ever seen. Nanny Xu came from the palace, not from the sky. What she knew was not invented exclusively by her. Since it was just the secret recipe of the palace, couldn't other nuns who came from the palace know it? Especially the life-saving musk pills. With such an effect, how could it become something that only the heroine can make and no one else has? Even Zhenguo Houfu, a long-established and meritorious house that founded the country, did not prepare it in advance, but the heroine can do it casually. I made a lot of backups to find out whether the prescription belongs to Aunt Xu or the heroine created it herself, or the required materials are only available to the heroine. Furthermore, is the heroine, a ten-year-old child who has only studied pharmacology for a few months, really better than those imperial doctors? The aura of this heroine is too dazzling and completely abnormal. She is completely cheating.

Why does this article have cards for the male and female partners, but not for the male and female protagonists?

Don't wait for the update in the early hours tonight. After finishing each day's chapter, I have to re-read it, revise it, and post it when I'm satisfied. I've compiled 4,000 words of what I wrote today, and I'll have to revise it before posting it tomorrow. I'll try to resume early morning updates tomorrow. Thank you for your support!

What's the point of this book? I've read more than 60 chapters and still haven't seen anything interesting. Can you tell me about it after reading it?

This book's logic, storytelling, and plot are all rigorous. The ancient novels I read before were just fresh illustrations and few decent writing styles. The plot is even more outrageous. When I met this fairy wife, I fell in love immediately.

I enjoyed watching it very much, but every time I saw the word "deserve", I always felt that something was wrong 😥 There is also "a smile/smile", which is very special. One day the author changes his waistcoat to write a book, and I can also be dazzled 😁

It's fine if you skip the emotional scenes (too embarrassing and boring), but skip the long verbosity and just read a couple of sentences in each chapter.

The author has no writing skills, and basically expresses it in the form of a running account. The most annoying thing is that everything has to be suffixed with the word "", and I don't know where the dialect is from. It's too rustic. I gave it up, I really can't stand it anymore.

Alas, there are too many inconsistencies in the article. In Chapter 40, when the heroine's mother was pregnant, the heroine's father went to the family of his superior, Zuodu Censor Yang, and met the heroine's stepmother. In other words, the heroine's father was the censor at the time. As a result, in Chapter 481, it turned out that the heroine's father was originally in the official department. It was because after the heroine's mother died, the Xie family hated him, so they secretly operated, promoted and secretly demoted, and moved him to the Metropolitan Procuratorate.