Dying and Immortality

The biggest shortcoming is that the fighting scenes cannot be narrated, and it looks inexplicable 🙂 Also, the protagonist's behavior is neither decent nor magical, but he is neither up to nor down in the middle, which is embarrassing 🙂 If you say he is a holy mother, it is not really good. Anyway, it is inexplicable, as if his soul is missing. The protagonist becomes stronger just to advance the plot, and he is a proper tool man, like in the city lord's mansion. , The protagonist gets things completely accidentally, which is too passive, looks uncomfortable, and cannot be taken in. In the future, it is better for the protagonist to plan what things he gets and make it more real. Otherwise, you can get any good things accidentally? It's too fake🤭

This kind of evil thing should either not be controlled in the first place. If it is controlled and wants to be restored, what are you thinking? There is such a good thing after losing consciousness.

To be honest, it was a good start, but the more I watched it, the more baffling it became. I can't explain what's bad about it, but the more I watched, the less interesting it became and it didn't catch anyone.

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! {"TopicId":"639366952518811648","TopicName":"Ended with flowers"}👏👏👏

Is it over? Hahaha, after raising it for so long, I'm going to start watching it. Will Xiao Yueyue be resurrected in the end? Haha, kill, kill. .

I have read about a hundred chapters before. I would like to ask everyone, has Xiao Yueyue been resurrected now?

This book is very engaging and beautiful! Have an immersive feeling

It's a nice day today, can we kill it?

What an update, I really like it.

It's interesting and worth saving. I will continue to read it. Come on

What's going on? Why hasn't it been updated for so long? Ahhh, ahhhh! So sad! Update soon, I want to see it, I want to see it.

Is it over? My youth is over! A little sad 😭.

Excellent review, the author is too strong, I can still write this, I admire it!

It's absolutely ok, feel free to follow the updates🙂🙂 Come on!

Very good, but the update is too slow Looking forward to more updates...

I just read the beginning. Is Xiao Yueyue resurrected now?

It felt pretty good at first, but the further you look at it, the worse it gets.

It's been a bit fast lately, is it about to be finished? Let's talk about Dan, what's going on!

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are disturbing, please mute me.

They say you spend money to find a girlfriend. Those of you who haven't found one must have saved a lot of money! 🙂🙂

. . . . . . I read about 20 chapters, but I didn't find anything written. It felt a bit nonsensical.

However, this setting is still quite novel, but the subsequent plot feels not very good.