I Can Work Indefinitely

I was attracted by the title of the book and read about ten chapters. But the characterization is terrible. The actions of the protagonist and supporting characters all show low IQs. . . The protagonist's behavior is also inconsistent with being reborn 30 years later. His state of mind and way of doing things make him feel like a loser. . . The conflict with Liu Hai and the communication with Lan's parents also reflect this. At the same time, I feel that the protagonist feels that he is Long Aotian in his heart and has invincible strength. However, his own strength was just like that at that time, and he was far away from invincibility. In general, this is a protagonist who is not strict at all and very reckless. At the same time, it will only increase the number of enemies and the number of friends. . . . It is not decisive at all to deal with the enemy. If you are really sure that you are an enemy, you should find an opportunity to kill him. Why keep him for the New Year? This should be the author's first book. The author can refer to these suggestions. Many times, the author's feeling when writing is completely different from what the reader reads. You can try to read your own novel yourself.

I believe that many people subscribed to complain and then came to speak. The early part of this book has collected the bad points of Internet articles, such as scumbag villains, beautiful teachers, class sweethearts, unruly daughters, school violence, fights, lawlessness, and national cancer. It was originally a good book, but the writing is generally full of poisonous points. Even if there is a system, do you know what will happen in three years? Can you be reborn in another world and not come to another world early? The brainless villain is always maimed and so on. I almost thought I was back in the underworld scene 20 years ago. Why is the beauty teacher so inseparable from the villain? Will the villain die if the plot is not delayed and the villain is not saved? Such a big world can't create other villains, so they have to catch a bang? Don't deceive young people into being poor. Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi also depends on the plot. It doesn't mean that you can just copy the previous routines. Unless the previous text is overhauled, it will be hopeless. Unfortunately, it was already finished when I saw it, so I can only complain about avoiding lightning.

I feel like the protagonist's world itself is not a good thing.

From the first chapter, I said I was going to kill those scumbags. I saw Chapter 63 and I haven't killed those scumbags yet. I'm very disappointed. How long do you want to keep delaying it? I'm really disappointed! ! !

Poof, ahahahaha! To be honest, most of the routines are old novels from more than ten years ago, and they are still very silly. But looking at it from another perspective, there are still authors writing like this these days, which is very funny (it's not the plot of the novel that is funny, it's the author who is funny). Since it is funny, it is not in vain. No, fans deserve to trick me into giving rewards 🤭.

The subject matter is good, but the character creation of each character in the book is too extreme. I feel that the IQ is not online (a high school student who gets into conflict always wants to break other people's legs and kill people, and meets a classmate Xiaolan on the road. His family's character is like this. You are joking with me. A rich person's character will behave like this. This is too cliché. The protagonist has been in the apocalypse in the future for so many years. Don't ask for 10 million in this plot. The author himself also said that there are still three years, okay, even if you don't want it for the sake of dignity. But there is no need to act like that... The author is too old-fashioned to create conflict) It feels like the style of the book from a few years ago. Anyway, I am an old bookworm and can't stand it. How can I be tired after living in such a good environment for so many years? Hey, overall this is a career template type that I like. But the character creation of each character is too cliched. Hey, I feel like the IQ is not high. The author should change it. The conflict is too cliché. When I see Xiaolan's classmate's family, I don't want to look forward to it anymore.

It gave me a heart attack. The outline is very interesting and the content is hard to describe in one sentence.

What you wrote at the beginning was pretty good, and you still have a little bit of IQ! Why do I become less intelligent the more I write about it? All members' IQ is not online

No, the introduction and background setting are quite good. How come this method of creating conflict is like a ghost? After reading four chapters, I thought I had traveled through time.

Damn you, you are in such a hurry that you haven't noticed at all. They have been pretending to be cool all day long and they put a knife to your neck and still laughed and laughed 🤭🤭

Every time the protagonist wants to kill someone, Xu Min stops him. The key point is that the protagonist still listens to it, which makes him uncomfortable to watch.

Well, the subject matter is okay, but the emotional drama is too mediocre and I can't stand it. If you don't know how to write it, don't write it. As soon as you wake up, you will kill people and set fires. And then do this and that, don't bully the poor young man and want revenge? What's the difference between yours and Tianshengmen?

Enmmm. After reading two or three chapters, I felt very uncomfortable and irritable.

To be able to make the book review section so violent, the author is also a talent.

The portrayal of the character Xu Min is a bit poor. I thought it was to portray the "goodness" in the protagonist's heart, but now I feel that the writing is a bit retarded.

Is there still such a novel in 2021?

What a hatred, high school students want to kill people, this book should have been able to do it ten years ago

Only the introduction is the essence of the whole book.

I stopped watching the teacher's skills since they appeared. It's too buggy. It can create talents in batches, and others also have the ability to learn quickly. How is it different from the protagonist? It's just about size. It's such an unpleasant experience!

Already fully booked. It's just that the realistic country and the heroine's family are too embarrassing. It feels a bit embarrassing. I turned to a comment. The character creation is too extreme. It's too strong to persuade people to quit.

It looked pretty good at first, but when it came to the mass grave plot, the author's description of the army was so disgusting and really toxic.

After reading six chapters, I was poisoned. Earlier, I was arrogant and disdainful of Ten Million. What does that mean? It shows that you are extremely arrogant. You still have three years without money or resources. It is very arrogant. After being ridiculed later, you just said "I like it very much"? 🤔What? An arrogant person is being caricatured? I can no longer bear the poison of this book. I can only say that the author's writing style needs to be improved. Although I am very interested in the setting of this book, the poisonous point makes me hesitate. Goodbye to the author. I hope you will read the next book and improve your writing style to not be so poisonous.

Objectively speaking, the subject matter is still very good. But your portrayal of the conflicts between the characters is too childish, right? It's pretentious and all kinds of brainless, although the novel can be a little exaggerated. But in terms of cultivation, can we exaggerate the contradictions between tasks? Can we take some precautions? After the VIP chapter, it really feels like a group of children playing house. I really can't stand it anymore. Goodbye!

Can you have some brains when writing urban plots in today's novels? After so many years, I have changed my style a little bit, and my writing is a little more in line with reality.

I really enjoyed reading it. It is definitely not a novel ten years ago. There are really people in the real world who are perverted like this. I wanted to say it when I saw Chapter 1, but I didn't bother to say it if I had 1 fan point. When I saw Chapter 2, I was so angry that I subscribed to the chapter and wanted to say something about the author. Could it be that the main character has taken some gunpowder? He rushed like this. He was ridiculed by passers-by all the time. He was beaten to death and crippled at every turn. Gotham City in the DC world is not as vicious as you. He was truly brainless throughout. I have been practicing poisonous skills for five years and fell short because of your book.

Unlimited employment naturally requires many occupations. Dear book friends, please give me some advice. Format. Occupation: Occupation upper limit: First-level skills: Skill effects: Second-level skills: Skill effects And so on... Begging! ! ! !

I couldn't stand it anymore. After reading a few chapters, I just felt like my IQ was being rubbed on the ground. Is this a plot that the author can write now? Not to mention that everyone in it is a powder keg that is flammable and explosive, but each one of them is still extremely confident. After reading a few chapters, I wanted to post a comment, but it turned out that I still want to be a fan. If this is your trick to cheat money, I can only say, haha, I wish you a happy Tomb-Sweeping Day every year.

The author's writing style is also good, and the plot development is compact and reasonable. Although it is toxic, it can be explained as a character. The problems in liberal arts are not big. The key problem is science. I suspect that the author failed the physics, chemistry, and mathematics exams and has never studied economics. 😁

Overall it's pretty good, but it's lagging in some aspects, and the pig's feet were a bit indecisive in the early stages, and I haven't seen it later.

Who are you showing so little to? Let others see it and think we look down upon it. Update, the author stayed up all night to update