I Traveled Through Time and Became the Villain of a Female Channel Novel

After reading a chapter and a half, I felt like my intelligence had been insulted. The dialogue and actions were written in such a naive way that I didn't feel sweet at all! My eyes are too hot to open, and my back is covered with goosebumps. Goodbye. That's right! Does anyone have a sweet recommendation? It doesn't matter whether the hero or heroine is a hero, the main thing is that it's reasonable and not a noob.

Since the male protagonist rejected the female protagonist, the author began to rewrite the plot, but this book is mainly sweet. After that, except for acting coquettishly when asking the male protagonist for money, the female protagonist is cold and cold at other times, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

Another green-haired bastard, tut tut.

For female videos, please turn left, you are lost. This is a male channel. It is recommended to put female videos. The brain circuits of men and women are quite different 🥱. Female videos are not necessarily poisonous.

I have been reading books for more than 10 years, and this is the most difficult novel I have ever read, bar none. What a great guy, being able to write such an ugly book is awesome, he is extremely talented. I have read so many books, and no matter how ugly the writing is, I won't criticize anyone, but yours is really disgusting and I can't help it. It's very 🐂

I'm stupid, is this a male video? It really has countless flaws, but it's not to the point where it's unbearable. The author should be a female author. I suggest you write a female channel. This book is full of brainless taste, especially those who emphasize logic and worldview will not be able to stand it. The part where I went down to Jiangnan made me vomit. Whose regent is like you? Five guards captured 132 officials? The total number of people you bring with the princess and her servants will not exceed 20, right? If it were to seize the power of local officials, or to call in the troops stationed in the area, there would be logic, but there is nothing! Are these officials all pigs? There is no family that can be an official? You need to use some logic even if you are just making up your own ideas! It takes some effort for 20 people to catch 132 pigs. In short, this book is really, don't read it with your brain, don't use any brain at all!

First of all, I like the novel written by the author very much, but I can't help but express my dissatisfaction. In future plots, the heroines can be reduced from being sexually assaulted by NPCs and villains. This kind of plot is like being fed to flies. In male-channeled novels, the reader's perspective is that of the male protagonist. If you take it in, the plot will be as uncomfortable as if your girlfriend was ntr. And the male monks are not so vulgar. Seeing a good-looking girl is like possession. This is a loser, not a monk. Finally, I like the male protagonist and the female protagonist very much

I think what you are writing now, the master who was let down by Jun Wuer in the original work must be included, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable.

In fact, the author doesn't need to care about those black men. I think it's actually quite interesting. How can I put it? In fact, the author can focus on writing about his life with his disciples, and he can change his filial piety appropriately (dog head)

Alas, it's very good that the plot was badly written by you.

Is it a single heroine? If so, it makes me sick

Why is this novel on a male channel?

After reading two chapters, the protagonist is the most rubbish Golden elixir cultivator I have ever seen. His Golden elixir cultivation was bitten by a little girl of several years old who has never practiced. He screamed. This is not even as good as an ordinary person on the earth who exercises regularly. The author probably doesn't know what the Golden elixir chapter is.

It wouldn't be bad if the subject matter was about women's rights. But the plot is ridiculously awkward. The main character is simply too licky. The description of the lolita was not too embarrassing. I thought it was the beginning of character development, but I didn't expect it to be the beginning of embarrassment. I'm so stupid, really, I know...

I think it's pretty good. I'm a bookworm for ten years. I think it's okay. The writing is pretty good. It's not a novice. If it's too harsh, it means all the apprentices are female and one of the apprentices is running away from someone else. The author may have misunderstood sweet stories. A single female protagonist's pure love is the sweetest thing. What you write is like a shameless field. If you read one or two chapters in the comment section and say it's a novice, don't be fooled. I suspect it's a troll hired by the author.

After reading Chapter 30, I felt that the author's choice of words and sentences were too frivolous, and there was no hint of immortality. I don't know if I can keep watching.

I couldn't stand it anymore, so I smashed my phone angrily, this ridiculous logic, this weird setting has no logic at all.

I can't do more. . .

Update it. I like it very much.

As long as you write, I will always order everything

Has Bingrou closed it? I don't want to see her being tortured, woo woo woo

Obviously, the subject matter of the whole novel is very good, the contradictions of the characters are very clear, and the potential is great. However, almost all the novels are about characters. Is the novel only about characters? Obviously not. If a novel is all or almost all about characters, is it still a novel? That doesn't even count as the storybook. The novel is not just about the characters, but also reflects the society. Even the original fantasy has no assumptions and is divorced from the material and reality. The same is true for novels. Novels that are divorced from social reality are not novels. If the world of novels is just for you, it is just you telling stories, which is idealism and metaphysics. The structure of a world is not the author's subjective statement, but an objective statement. I think this is the failure. This novel lacks criticism, eloquence and thinking, as well as a reasonable and sophisticated structure. This is what I think needs to be improved.

🙂🙂

Borrowing the building "After traveling through time and becoming a female cultivator", everyone is welcome to try it

Updates are too slow. In addition, the author sent an apprentice 🔨

A love story covered in fantasy? 😓

I fell in love with the cover of this book. Does anyone have the original picture? Only the human kind