Yangmen of the Song Dynasty

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To be honest, this is already a well-written novel. The rhythm may be a little faster later on, but overall it is still pretty good. If you stick with it, you will definitely get better.

The Yang family didn't have to write about it, and the generals of the Song Dynasty didn't have to write about it. It was okay to live in a dawdle, but once you could fight, the literati and the emperor persecuted you, and you either died on the battlefield or in the court. Therefore, if the author chooses this name, there is basically no chance of it, unless he stands up or rebels.

Only by rebelling can the outcome of Yang Clan be changed. Otherwise, if you fight in front and hold back later, you will win the battle. He also ended up with the same fate as Yue Fei 😴 Prince Yue shouldn't let the coward kill him

I also like the theme of the Yang family generals, and I thought it was passable when I read the first few chapters. But when I saw the singing part in Chapter 6, I felt so poisonous that I lost the desire to read the rest. I can understand the author's desire to write a story about the protagonist pretending to be pretentious. Maybe the author also likes to listen to the song "A Bridge of Fate", but can you consider the difference in aesthetics of the times? The ancients were shocked to hear it? It looks super awkward. If you can't write this plot well, please don't let yourself go. Tang and Song poetry, as music literature, has three elements: music, diction and singing. If you sing in an ancient style, you can still save it, but if you sing in vernacular, you won't be distracted at all. 🤔 It's really thanks to the author's mercy that he didn't write and sing "Learning to Meow"

If you really want to write about the generals of the Song Dynasty, just set up a carriage to rebel. If you don't rebel, you can't save the generals. To be honest, the Song Dynasty is the most difficult dynasty to save, even more difficult than the late Ming Dynasty.

Is there any room for a general to show off his skills? ? ? Judging from the author's introduction, he must have watched too many TV series. Yang Ye was really not ranked among the military generals of the early Song Dynasty. Zhao Kuangyin had more than 20 sworn brothers and he was very good at fighting...

The writing of this book is good, but the plot is a bit delayed and a bit unreasonable. First of all, after the protagonist was assassinated, he dared to run around alone, but the family didn't care at all. Not to mention sending people to protect him, at least send a few secret guards, right? Secondly, when you were interrogating Qiniang, you dared to kill her, but you actually said you didn't know how to interrogate her? At least you've heard of the Little Dark Room. The protagonist of the time traveler will be poisoned if he arranges the plot in this way, and the murderer is so obvious. The protagonist is almost killed, as if nothing is wrong. The protagonist has such a good temper😔

Yang Jiumei? What about the most famous Yang Bamei?

It's good-looking, it's my type, come on!

From my personal point of view, the Song Dynasty's rebellion cannot be successful. You know how many rebellions there were in the Song Dynasty in a year. It lasted for five thousand years in China. It was really the dynasty with the most rebellions. Except for the Yuan Dynasty that was destroyed by the Song Dynasty, no rebellion was successful. After the Yuan Dynasty destroyed the Song Dynasty, the Yuan Dynasty would be about the same. Of course, there were also problems with the Yuan Dynasty itself, but it is undeniable that the Song Dynasty was difficult to rebel against.