Konoha Old Village Chief

Yuan Fei had a headache when he saw it, couldn't it be changed to Sarutobi?

No, how can you let Tsunade get married?

Very good idea. However, there are many typos and many problematic sentences. I hope the author will take a few minutes to read it himself after coding. Novel ideas will certainly attract readers, but how to make readers stay is also important

At the beginning of Chapter 30, the content of the book went off the rails. The author had too many ideas and couldn't integrate them properly. A simple soul travel through three generations would be enough. The six paths would weave a net or something. It was a bit far and the circle would never come back! The gap in combat power is even greater. There is no need to write this. The soul magic and so on are also nonsense. Isn't it good to simply cultivate immortals... There are too many contents and too complicated. This book should be a eunuch! Fix the outline and start over.

It would be better to just write the story of the third generation. Just say that the third generation dreams of modern times, sees the plot of Naruto, and then wakes up and starts to change the tragedy. This story outline is better. The writing in the later part of the book is getting more and more disgusting, and the brainless improvement of combat power, coupled with Boruto, what about traveling through time and space, and what about becoming younger and more handsome, does the third generation have a harem?

It's pretty good-looking, but it's not very suitable for beginners because some people can't distinguish some logical problems and find it confusing. 😭Why is it gone?

Come on, the subject matter is very good, I'm optimistic about you

Wasn't the second generation Raikage defeated by Golden Kaku?

Come on 🙂

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Wasn't the behavior the protagonist did when he first arrived very abnormal? Why is no one searching for souls?

This is a wonderful book. I don't know if it will be popular or not, but it is really wonderful.

A fantastic book. Reading a book and making a play are basic operations. The author may have written about Young and Dangerous before. He said "I said so" all day long, acting like a domineering president fell in love with me.