I'm Not a Great Guy

The author wanted to write a low-key protagonist, which is indeed done well, but the other characters are very strange. A person should always have some characteristics. After all, everyone is different. However, from the group members to the group leader, whether they are male or female, or other species, within a few days of joining the group, they all retain their original characteristics and transform into meanness. From the beginning to the end, the group members all said they wanted to become Daluo Jinxian, but they only wanted to have sex for free. With all due respect, they couldn't become a loose immortal.

Qin Ming Mingyue should write Brother Zheng

Novels like chat groups are difficult to write. If the main character is not the group leader, it will be awkward to read.

Since the author said to read the book review section, I will mention three points here: 1. The characters in this book are not rich enough. I only remember 3 characters after seeing it, the protagonist, the group leader, and the group member. Because the group members basically all have the same tone and point of view, even if they showed a little bit of behavior when they first came in, they were completely assimilated within 3 chapters. The most obvious one is the Star Wars character and the jealous Yan Chixia (people would rather not be an official, but they will change their personalities and join the villain when they encounter the chat group), so the group members can only be regarded as one character. Because the characters are not rich enough, it was okay at first, but it will inevitably feel a bit boring after watching it. 2. Let's talk about the world setting. There are several detailed issues. For example, in recent chapters, the group has been discussing the saint's long-term vision. The group members mentioned that [Journey to the West] said that Brother Monkey is Nuwa's Sky-Mending Stone, and then said that Nuwa had already figured out Brother Monkey's affairs. However, Journey to the West does not mention that the stone is the Nuwa Stone, and it does not mention any relationship with Nuwa. I don't know if the Journey to the West in the world that the group members watched is not the same version as our world? Or is it that the group leader has been brainwashed and his memory is confused by the previous opinions of the prehistoric world? By the way, the follow-up work of Infinite Horror also has Honghuang, is it regarded as another lower version of Honghuang? 3. In terms of dungeons, the two dungeons after the group activity started are relatively average. First of all, because Zhang Jie is the leader, the main god restricts his actions, and constantly forces him to choose the next captain. No matter how many points he earns, can he survive the main god's obliteration? The strength of the curse is a bit low, and the core of the game includes a killing stone that is too obvious to deliberately give away treasures. An ordinary family house containing artifacts is the template for the protagonist, and a Buddhist scripture contains the art of yin and yang, which is really true. . . It would be better to use the Infinite Dawn meme to set the core of the curse. The protagonist finds Buddhist secrets from Buddhist scriptures, which can be regarded as a gift, and it is not so mixed. There are many versions of A Chinese Ghost Story, but the core of the plot of this copy is to deceive the demon and borrow a knife to kill people to cross the river and burn the bridge. This routine is clearly stated at the beginning. It is better to end it within two or three chapters without any unexpected events. I just feel that it is a bit watered down, and it also adds the setting of breaking through the Nascent Soul. ps: By the way, sermon videos can only be saved for one day? How come you can see the sermon right away until Yan Chixia joins? In the relationship chat group, do you consciously wait for the protagonist to post the video before recruiting people?

To be honest, many people say that Prehistoric is not worthy of the highest combat power. I would like to ask you which novel has a concept that surpasses Prehistoric and that most people agree with. The fantasy novels written by the author later have more or less concepts of the prehistoric. To put it bluntly, it is already a mature universe view, just like the Marvel universe and the Cthulhu universe. It is no longer something that you can deny if you disagree with it. In addition, the prehistoric is modified on the basis of Chinese mythology, which makes everyone agree even more. Unless someone in the future can write a novel that everyone or most people agree with, it will not change at all.

In the past, it was okay to use nuclear explosion saints. Then there were saints who took one step ten meters at a time. Now are there only special effects saints left?

I'm confused, racial antagonism, cultural conflict, my God, this kind of value can be put on the shelves

I just made a complaint video with the low profile Honghuang. Someone asked me the title of the book, but I couldn't find where the picture came from. Finally, I found out that it was posted by someone in the Q circle of friends. It took me a long time to find it. It was not easy to find out that it was this book!

Does the Tao Te Ching belong to the protagonist? How much death do you have to make to dare to take the Tao Te Ching as your own? How can I still be called Lao Tzu without the Tao Te Ching? The Tao Te Ching is almost the symbol of Lao Tzu. The protagonist takes it for himself. Even if he dies a million times, he won't be able to repay the karma. This is the karma of a saint. If he dies once, his soul will be gone. And you dare to rob me of the Tao Te Ching. Why don't you directly create people to become saints? In this way, Nuwa has no chance. Even if there is karma, it will be paid off slowly. After all, I am a saint without the Tao Te Ching. Nu Wa, who has not created people, is at most a quasi-sage...

The more I read it, the less interesting it becomes, and everyone becomes a selfish villain.

To sum up, the protagonist is a transparent tool with no emotions, the group members are the same, have no integrity, no spine, no personality, greed and arrogance

It's an interesting theme, but the violence is too strong. I seriously doubt that the author is venting it in the article. There are so many curses throughout the story that it gives me a headache.

The protagonist is made like a tool man, and his realm is low. If it weren't for the skills provided by the group members, the brain supplement of the second tool group leader, and the prehistoric own special effects, would this protagonist be able to securely sit first? Apart from the special effects protagonist, who canbe able to suppress in the group? And the protagonist's sense of existence gets lower and lower as we go to the end , this role of the protagonist in other chat groups is to provide the freeRoad Furnace with techniques and weapons.

It's too watery. It's okay if you add some water occasionally and use it as a seasoning. If you write about group members as the protagonists, then why do you still need the protagonists? Tool man? There are so many group members, can you just add one more person in the future and continue the fun? The protagonist has not appeared once in ten thousand years, and water is not like this.

It could have been okay, but the intrigue throughout the whole thing was disgusting to watch. The personalities of many characters have collapsed, and they are just other people with the same names.

Let me tell you my point of view. When this type of novel first appeared, it was very attractive. Various popular characters gathered together, but gradually I found that these characters were no longer the original ones. The original character concepts gradually became Mandarin and unified. No matter how popular they were, in the writings of these authors, they would only call 666, just like passers-by, without the characteristics of the original novels. A ruthless and determined villain will definitely become ordinary once he joins the group, but as a top existence in the world, his character is so determined that he can change whenever he wants.

You are the novel with the most profanity I have ever seen and it has not been blocked.

The author was too focused on the chat group and completely downplayed the main character. If this is the case, then the protagonist is directly the chat group itself, which I think is better. There is no need for the false protagonist Wu Ming at all.

You can still read it at the beginning, but by the end, the number of words is overwhelming. Skipping many chapters, you only need to look at the title to know where the water is. I really have no interest in reading anymore.

Emmmmm, I feel like the chat group is too infighting, and the style of the whole group has become distorted. I think a carrier like Zhutian Chat Group exists for group members to help and communicate with each other. They usually exchange their experiences and make some rants, instead of engaging in intrigues like now...

The saint is truly terrifying. He can soar into the clouds and ride on the mist, 6 meters away in one step, and his punch can reach 15 kilograms.

One chapter is full of dialogue, and most of it is a repeater. The author is really good at watering down

I read Chapter 20 and found it quite interesting. But I want to say something for Yue Buqun. Yue Buqun: This chat group is the most rubbish one I have ever seen. In other groups, I am the protagonist 🤭

It feels very strange. How does the protagonist know that he is in a low-end version of the prehistoric world? How does he know that those magical weapons are not as good as the magic weapons in the martial arts world? He has never been to the martial arts world. Also, is it so easy for the protagonist to realize enlightenment?

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. It's all chatting and spanking. It gives me a headache to look at it

I want to see the story of the protagonist in the prehistoric era. Although he has transcended, can't he go back when the protagonist is invincible? For example, taking away all the ten innate spiritual roots. .

I don't know how many people are the same as those who came here every day.

The writing of this novel is okay but a bit cumbersome. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, the author, I will give you a recommendation ticket every day. Come on, it's very interesting 😡😡😡

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