Tianyun Food and Residence

How should I put it... The Golden Three Chapters are not out of date. To be honest, I read the first chapter. The writing is not very bad, and the vocabulary is not enough. There is no need to appear too many questions. From time to time, the character's mood and psychological activities can be clearly expressed with expressions and actions. The most important thing is, if I didn't read the introduction, I might If you haven't even figured out your protagonist yet, the plot should be written around the protagonist, and minor details can be omitted. Write it roughly through memories or mentions by others. Don't worry about collections. What newcomers need to do is to accumulate fans. It's really useless to be obsessed with data. Not many people have the time to read your tens of thousands of articles (unless the new work of a great god). The above are all personal opinions.

The author is a reliable person, it is finally over without tj, I will still invest in you next time. Although I have only invested for a few days. . .

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This book is like a stone in a latrine. You may say it is shit, but he is not. You may say he can read it, but he cannot stand it. The characters have unclear characteristics and are capricious. Can banknotes expire? The old TM show king. The plot describes something weird, and I don't understand the author's intention in describing this thing. Isn't it a fantasy chef article? At first glance, I thought it was an article from the 1990s. A classic novice who makes all the most common mistakes. He still wants to write down what he thinks is a good idea without the writing skills. This is a typical smart-aleck style. It is recommended that the author consult more seniors for advice. Only by constantly asking for advice can he continue on the way of writing a book. Writing a book behind closed doors will not work in this era.

Hello everyone, National Producer, I am Shuai Bi Qiang Shui, who started reading this book from today. The second word is "qiang", not "war". Please look familiar to me. Thank you By the way, I sent you the blade, and the eunuch kidnapped me directly. Don't worry, I can do it Come on, author.

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Chapters 1 and 2 brought tears to my eyes 😭