Devouring Star Traveler

The first thing that attracted me to this book was the beginning 300 years later, but maybe 300 years is not that long, and the overall difference between the Earth volume and the original work is still not very big. Choosing the Space Mercenary Alliance personally seems to be a good development. Ninety-nine percent of the Devouring fans I read before were those who joined the Virtual Universe Company. The original work about the Virtual Universe Company has a complete system and is relatively easy to write. This is an advantage but also a disadvantage. It's not easy to come up with new ideas, and if there are too many similar fans, it will look boring, so the author's choice of Space Mercenary Alliance is very satisfying to me. The original space mercenary alliance didn't have much of a role, and there was a lot of room for originality. I hope to see a different kind of swallowing in this book. Come on!

Dear author, I have something to say after reading the latest chapter. First of all, there is the issue of the level of the secret method. Now the protagonist is a star level, which belongs to the early stage, that is, the learning stage. There is no need to understand the level of the secret method at all. Just like Luo Feng fought with the Yanshen Weapon in the early stage, because this magic weapon can fully exert its own strength, there is no need to understand the level of the secret method. He will not start to create his own secret method until the magic weapon cannot exert his strength. The second is the issue of the amplitude of the secret method on combat power. First of all, the secret method is not original, so it cannot fully exert the power of the secret method. Of course, this is something that needs to be understood later. Therefore, the power of the secret method cannot be displayed digitally at all. One thing I would like to say to the author is that it is best not to classify secret techniques in the early stage. What is an ordinary ultimate and how much strength it can achieve should be left to the world master to discuss later. The last point is that Dada actually digitally displays the strength of secret delivery. My suggestion is to be as vague as possible. First, the original work did not clearly indicate how many times the secret power can be increased. It only stated how many opponents were eliminated. It can be seen that even Tomato is not willing to use numbers to show strength. After all, after immortality, the divine body has completely transformed into a god. The numbers alone are already huge. Add in the amplitude of the secret power and how much power can be destroyed with one blow... It is scary to think about it. Another thing I want to say is that if it is completely digitized, it is not clear in the original work. According to your data, for example, an amplitude of 100 times is not mainstream, 500 times is ordinary, and 1000 times is top-notch. From the data point of view, the difference between top and ordinary is only twice, but according to the performance of the original work, it is more than twice, even ten times is low. The summary suggestion is that there is no need to emphasize the level of secret techniques before becoming a world leader. After all, the secret techniques before this can fully exert one's own strength. The second is to try not to digitize the secret level as much as possible. It's hard to make a long review more precise

For newcomers, it is recommended to read directly from the second volume. It can be regarded as being directly reborn as a planet. The characters in the first volume will basically not appear later, and it can be intertwined with the original plot.

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I laughed when I saw the Realm Lord accepting a disciple. The key point is that the protagonist agreed. I was convinced. The purpose of expressing talent is to apprentice with strong people and need resources. Why do you become a Realm Master after showing your talent? If you don't join the Virtual Universe, you will join the mercenaries. Obviously I know the Virtual Universe company better. I finally understand why the results are not good. A Realm Master can be a teacher and have fart resources. Moreover, he has to practice and accept disciples. Haha.

What a poisonous article The protagonist becomes stronger for no reason. For example, when he enters the original universe, he understands all the laws for no reason, and then becomes inexplicably or recognized by all the laws. You can say that he is the son of heaven. Later, he is in a semi-hostile state with the original universe and enslaves the universe. There are hundreds of the strongest in one wave. In the adventure of the space boat, you can get hundreds of treasures at the level of the Eternal True God and the Chaos Golden Wings in one go. It is simply outrageous. The cheats are not as strong as yours. They also steal Luo Feng's opportunity, steal the Donghe inheritance, the Chaos Golden Wings, and seize the Shen Realm Beast. I can't watch this anymore. I don't recommend reading it. It ruins the original series.

Fans of Zhetian and Swallowing Starry Sky don't dare to watch it now. Fans of the original work will always close the loop of time. One moment, a future body kills him, and the next moment, a glance passes by, reappearing everything. Ignoring time, space, and cause and effect, the protagonist cannot move or do anything. She can only be the nanny of the original protagonist. She cannot suppress the original protagonist, nor can she kill him. If you touch a hair, your future will be threatened. However, you don't know that there is a world of time travellers. It is impossible for a time loop to occur, and the time traveler is the biggest causal variable. The laws of time and space he carries transcend the world in which he is located, otherwise how could he cross the world barrier? The so-called time closed loop is a joke🤮🤮

You must go to Chaos City. After all, this city is a holy place for cultivating geniuses. When mentioning Chaos City, you have to mention the Chaos Monument. It is known that the protagonist is on the path of light space. I am sure that among the fifty-six chaos monuments, there is absolutely no chaos monument that is purely on the path of light space. So I made a few guesses about the protagonist's next path. The first one is a Chaos Monument based on the laws of space, mixed with the laws of time and the laws of light. This kind of Chaos Monument is theoretically the most suitable Chaos Monument. But not necessarily, because it is too complicated, and it is not suitable for genius cultivation. After all, anyone who has a thorough understanding of time and space is already a sage. The original work also states that the Cosmic Chaos Monument is a Chaos Monument that mixes the laws of time and space. In other words, the protagonist has a high probability of taking the Cosmic Chaos Monument route, and a small probability of creating his own Chaos Monument. I think the protagonist needs a plug-in now. Although the protagonist is very talented, it is obviously not as talented as it was in the Ten Million Era. Not to mention competing with Xia Zhi, even Bolan cannot compete with him. Even if the protagonist competes with Luo Feng, who is a genius, he will most likely lose. So I bet that there will be new plug-ins in the future, either to directly improve talents, or similar to Luo Feng's beast god statue, and the protagonist's standard golden finger clone technique has not yet come. Devouring without clone technique is incomplete. After all, if immortality does not have clone technique, it will bankrupt just one battle. And as a reader, I honestly don't know anything about the current strength level of the protagonist. For example, the strength gap during the Genius War can be reflected by the number of phantoms. At that time, Luo Feng himself could be divided into 9 at the end, and Bo Lan had thousands. This can show the strength gap. Chaos City even divided the strength into 21 Tongtian Bridge. Let us have an intuitive feeling But this book does not have it. I hope the author can introduce it in detail in the next chapter.

If I didn't have a better chance, I would definitely fight for Luo Feng. People are so realistic. Appreciation is appreciation, and you should grab it or grab it 🤓 However, the protagonist's start is basically impossible to grab, except for the Star Tower.

The first volume was too discouraging, but the second volume only started to be interesting. The author's level is acceptable.

The previous book friend sent me a message saying that I feel jio is not good, but I can send three pictures of my jio that are OK

I have repeatedly told my fellow readers not to go beyond 2 major levels. I thought it was cool, but in fact the extremes of things will discourage readers. If you have poor grades and simple combat power, just write more than 2 major levels The domain master can move up to 10,000 kilometers per second The speed of the master of the universe is 100 times the speed of light The true god can be a million times the speed of light You said that the true god of the void is not faster than the king of the universe Lord? Some Devouring fandom authors post self-promotion, if you don't want to be the same, don't do it Picture 1-2 The Lord of the Universe kills the True God of the Void Figure 3-6 The Domain Lord kills the Immortal in one second Figure 7-10 The Domain Lord kills the Venerable and threatens to die even if the True God comes over

How do you keep reading? After reading more than ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

The heroine in the role column is outrageous. You have offended the non-heroine party and also offended the heroine party. Whenever I think who is the heroine, the role of this female character gradually decreases until there is no more. For example, the two girls who want to secretly kiss the protagonist at the beginning, such as Instructor Ding who forces the protagonist to stab the gun into his chest... Ah this...

When I saw the author saying that the original ancestor had not been suppressed and that the crisis of world beasts could be easily overcome, I knew that I didn't need to continue reading this book. The author couldn't even understand it after devouring the original text. If the original ancestor cannot enslave the realm beasts, he must face the king of realm beasts. If you want to defeat the realm beast king, you must at least have the strength of a veteran in the chaos realm. The original ancestor only has the qualifications to grow into the chaos realm. Even if the original ancestor is not suppressed, he will at most have the strength of the Eternal True God by that time.

The master of the world, the Lord of the universe, is really a heifer standing on his head.

This teacher is really disgusting. In his eyes, the protagonist just wants to prove the correctness of his secret method, and it doesn't matter how high his achievements are in the future. There are also problems with the author's writing style. From the moment the protagonist's teacher confessed, I felt uncomfortable and even depressed as a reader. The reason is also very simple. We are reading from a fan, so we naturally know the situation of the original work very well. So as readers, we watch the protagonist's teacher drag the protagonist all the way to a dead end, which is really frustrating. It doesn't matter if it's the author and the readers of your own book, after all, they will know that the protagonist will definitely be able to find his own way. But this is a fan, even if it is cheating, it cannot be at the universe level, and even the world lord level begins to integrate the ten laws. If I dare to write this, I can only say goodbye. Therefore, there are only three paths that the protagonist can take. One is to understand time and space and become the master of the universe. The second is to understand and integrate the eight laws to become the master of the universe. The third is to become the master of the universe through light and time. Under this situation, the protagonist still wants to understand the law of wind, the law of water, and learn the morning wind. It is super uncomfortable and a bit depressing to keep sprinting towards the dead end. The Realm Master in this latest chapter felt the same way when he lamented the pity. Having said all this, I still want to say, can I write it out as soon as possible which path the protagonist should take? It's so time-consuming. When is the light gone, the wind is light, and the water is empty? Or do I want them all?

Swallowing Starry Sky is one of the best fanfics, currently it is the two best with Lord of All Things. The protagonist has his own life. Not only is his experience no longer an enhanced version of Luo Feng, but his cultivation process and direction are also different from Luo Feng, and he will not deliberately befriend Luo Feng. This book is the one with the deepest and best exploration of the cultivation system among the Devouring fandoms. The author has really put a lot of effort into research. The original cultivation system has achieved 6 to 7 successes of the original work, and its originality is good. I think that the author has this originality and can write a true supplementary work on Devouring. Also, writing that he and Luo Feng are in the same original universe actually violates the logic of the original work. For example, you can write stories about characters from other original universes and other cultivation systems, and then make reasonable arrangements to connect with Luo Feng and others, and even confront each other at one point. I believe it will be more interesting.

This book is very good in terms of responsibility. To give a few examples, the five cities at the Lagrange point of the Earth-Moon system, the size of the Black Dragon Mountain island in the virtual universe and the comparison of the orbit of Saturn are all very particular and cannot be written without any common sense in astrophysics. In addition, The author's writing and timeline design are very logical. If you look closely, it looks like a programmer writing code, which is very beautiful. In addition, the original currency has an exchange system from the Chinese Earth Silver Blue Black Dragon Mountain Ganwu Universe Hunyuan Heavy Treasure to the Supreme Treasure, and even the power system at all levels has benchmarks. I believe that the author must have sorted it out. In addition, the author has also properly imagined the development of earth's technology and power three hundred years later. It is quite reasonable. He has also made additions to the basic settings and functions of the virtual universe. I feel that the writing is very good, but I am a little worried that there are still relatively few people reading it. The author is basically using love to generate electricity. I hope I can stick to it. Can the author have time to introduce to everyone his working background? I think it may be related to physics and computers. Anyway, he is definitely more professional than a mechanical dog like me. . .

I really can't find any other good Devouring fanfics, so I started reading this one based on the recommendations. I couldn't even read the first volume, it was too poisonous, even Shen Nong couldn't handle it, so I'm withdrawing!

There are only a few protagonists that I like, such as Luo Feng who swallows the stars, Wang Lin who is an immortal, Shi Hao who is in the perfect world, and Ye Fan who covers the sky. The others are not so impressive, especially Wang Lin who abandoned the book several times and picked it up again.

The feeling of collapse in the initial universe, from the second floor of Babel Tower (according to performance, Luo Feng has just reached the level of the initial universe, maybe he can't break through the first floor) directly to the 14th floor of Babel Tower in 30 years, (Cody also cried and called boss) This level can completely break through the domain master, return the opportunity. Also, there are no strong people who know about the protagonist at this stage of reaching the sky. The human race can completely hide the protagonist so that it will not be noticed by the lurkers of the alien race. But if they do not reserve it to let all the kings know, isn't it just to let the alien race assassinate him? ? ? And the intensity can be replaced by King of Lurkers.

I like this book "Swallowing Star Traveler" very much. As a Devouring fan, I always have various assumptions about the setting system of Devouring. Recently, I also wrote about the induction, superposition, and fusion of the laws of "Skyrim" Liu Dao. I noticed that the author's definition is very clear and has obvious details advantages over other fan authors. Regarding the practice of the law route, I personally have some brief opinions, and I will discuss and exchange them with the author and all readers. First point: Imagine that characteristics such as stasis, illusion, absorption, extreme speed, etc. That are subordinate to different attributes in the artistic conception can be evolved into different essences of the law by further research, induction, definition and summary. There are 108 essences of the upper law. Study the nature of the law and practice the path of the law. From easy to difficult, from low to high, one can master any 2, 3, 4... Until all 108 essences are operated in any cross combination, then master the higher law of the system and become a venerable person. From the countless permutations and combinations, it can be seen that this requires countless experience, wisdom and perseverance to achieve. When practitioners study various essential combinations and combine weapons, moves, bodies, experience, understanding, mind and other factors, they form different levels of secret methods (unclassified, ordinary, advanced, top-level, peak, etc.). The venerable master can master three basic secret methods based on a series of superior laws, such as teleportation, blockade and strangulation. In the same way, it can be set that the lower laws have, for example, 72 essences (this is my own imagination, the original work does not seem to have a detailed definition), and the upper and lower laws have 36 different essences. The permutation and combination will produce geometric differences. This is also consistent with the setting that the lower laws can only be immortal, and the higher laws are more powerful and can become venerable. Second point: Regarding the law of fusion, I think that the law of a single system + a law of a single system (addition) is not a law of fusion. For example, for thousands of human beings, some of them first cultivate the lower laws to become immortal, and then practice the upper laws to become venerables. This is just the superposition of laws, not the fusion of laws. Only the law of a single system x the law of a single system (multiplication, 108+72, a total of 180 essences merge into one law) is a law of fusion, and the law of fusion is the path of the strongest. Only by choosing the essential path can one take the path of fusion. The ordinary practice path only knows what it is but does not know why. Immortality and the Venerable are the limit, and it is almost impossible to take the path of fusion. In addition, regarding the Lord of the Universe, it is only the superposition of space + time, not the law of fusion. If two superior laws are fused, it will definitely be more powerful than the way of the eight beast gods. After all, the way of the beast gods, as the strongest in the universe, is only the fusion of upper and lower. Third point: Regarding the route of chaos (the law is called the holy route), it can be considered that the supreme law of the cosmic sea evolves into the law of chaos, and the chaos evolves into a single law, and the law is formed by the combination of essence. If you want to achieve the sanctification of the law, you have to start from low to high again, from single law to fusion law until it evolves into the law of chaos again. Of course, in the process of cultivation, individual talents and understandings are different, the rules are compatible and exclusive, and the progress of cultivation is also very different. Fan authors can make a fuss about this and formulate golden fingers. There are two doubts and small inferences that I would like to discuss with you: First, some of the thousands of venerable human beings first became immortal through the lower laws, and then became venerables through the upper laws. Then there are still some sages who may not have cultivated the lower laws, but only cultivated the upper laws first. So how did they become immortal without the law infusion? It is speculated that it is possible that all the venerables first practice the lower laws to become immortal and then become venerables, or that they can break through immortality by simply cultivating the upper laws to the 70-80% stage. This needs to be further studied. Second, regarding the law of fusion, Jie Fanzi, the great master of the universe sea before countless reincarnations, evolved the law of water and fire into the roughly tenth level of the origin of water and fire (see the original work, Part 26, Chapter 21 for details) Jie Fanzi's treasure), the strongest person in the universe (true god stage) roughly spans from the top of level 6 to level 12. We can make the following inferences. The basic fusion of the two lower laws starts at about level 6.7, And the fusion of the upper and lower laws starts at about level 7.8, Which is close to the level of the eight beast gods. Multi-system methods The fusion may be higher. If other characteristics (such as the origin of life, the true meaning of the law, and other details that require full use of imagination and supplementation) are integrated into the fusion of laws, the combat power may be even higher. Of course, if other routes are taken, such as divine bodies, axes, illusions, and other schools, there are other definitions. The above is only the conjecture of a fanatical devouring fan, and is only for discussion with everyone. You are welcome to correct and criticize, thank you!

It's not a matter of lack of writing skills. It's because you have no main line at all? The protagonist has different goals today and tomorrow. What do readers think? Set goals—experience setbacks—accomplish goals Isn't this the most basic thing? The original work is an example, Improve the life of parents - become a warrior - change the villa Treat the younger brother's leg - fight in the wilderness - change the medicine Encounter a hunt - become the god of war - complete the revenge The golden horn comes - sacrifice in battle - seize the golden horn This thing is called the main plot! If you string together the small main lines, it's called a novel! Oh my God, I spent more than three hours trying to figure out what the protagonist wanted to do. He practiced shooting guns, practicing knives, and flying knives. He wanted to join a company, then he became a mercenary, and he went to the universe and came back. The story is all in pieces. I picked it up and it shattered on the ground. I was so convinced.

Learn all the secrets, and write every secret in detail. If you want to be detailed, just write the main secrets, okay? A whole novel that is as bland as a running account, rubbish

The writing is good, although there are some minor flaws, but overall it can be regarded as a masterpiece among devouring fans. I also have some personal opinions on this book, and I hope the author can improve it. First of all, there is the villain. The protagonist of a book cannot always have smooth sailing. I can only say that it gave me a very unreal feeling. All the people who appeared were either relatives or people who tried their best to help the protagonist. Didn't you consider the appearance of a minor villain? After all, it is not a realistic issue to demand truth, kindness and beauty in the whole world. Even if we don't consider creating a villain, I think there must be at least those who are jealous, disliked, or even hate the protagonist. The second protagonist is the choice of weapons or paths. Knives, guns, mentalists, and even illusionists are all involved, but the author must understand that specializing in one is the best choice. As for Xiang Luo Feng, although he used swords in the later stages, he was mainly a spiritual master before entering the battlefield outside the territory. Therefore, it is best for the protagonist to specialize in one thing, either as a mentalist, as a warrior with a sword or gun, or as an illusionist. Trying to be proficient in everything will only lead to nothing in the end. Even if the author opens a lot of cheats, everything nb will not be dominated by one thing in the end, just like Tongtianqiao is divided into mentalists, warriors, and illusionists. Of course, the above is just a minor problem. I think the biggest problem is that the protagonist is too "kind" in heart. Whenever someone comes to ask for advice, the protagonist will rush to help and don't know how to refuse. It's okay to say it's the Holy Mother. In the end, it feels like the protagonist doesn't know the basics, the cheats of Thor and Hong are modified at will, and the difficulty is reduced so much? In the future, it is recommended that the protagonist's adapted cheats be made more difficult, at least they cannot be learned casually, otherwise it will give me the feeling that Thor and Hong are useless. There are still some minor issues, such as the currency issue. The conversion of points and currency is a headache. It is recommended to downplay it as much as possible. In the future, we should try to make the point ratio a little clearer. Of course, this is a small issue. Last but not least, I hope the author will not be impatient. Why do you say this? It only took the protagonist one day to learn the Nine-Level Thunder Sword from the first to the tenth level. It felt too exaggerated. In terms of time, it could have been learned in a month or two. Learn in one day that everyone is trash. The author has a feeling that he is always rushing forward. There is no need to catch up with Luo Feng in such a hurry. Later, I remember that there is a 6,000-year-old Luo Feng who wants to spend time in the Star Tower, so he just needs to catch up with Luo Feng in the middle. Finally, there is the issue of the heroine. I personally think that the protagonist, the instructor, is very well created. The impression of the two girls appearing later was just average, they could only exclaim and exclaim, which was not pleasant.

The design at this point in time is good. According to calculations, Luo Feng should have made stone sculptures in the Lasao world in 2351. And you only need about 150 years to grow and then the earth will cede territory. I hope there will be a reasonable arrangement for your ascent. Don't do anything to show off. After all, the Luo family may not be a good bird before the highest points task, and they will probably be killed by your whole family. It shouldn't be possible to postpone the battle of the strong until about 7000 years. I guess the Ganwu Dojo will enter the secret realm of the apocalypse. But if you want to see something new, don't do too much in the Earth chapter. It's a bit awkward for you to control this kind of emotional drama, and Goldfinger hasn't been released yet so I won't judge it without comment. Come on, little seedling, invest and go, don't be a eunuch

Start by writing that two beauties like the protagonist, and then there happens to be a beautiful instructor, the protagonist is super handsome, and the protagonist's parents keep asking him to get married and have children, but in the end there will be no heroine and he will be lonely for the rest of his life? ? There are also a bunch of useless introductions to the things I bought earlier, including Thunder Knife and Destruction, and I also bought a bunch of messy things.

Devouring fan fiction is generally written at the same time as Luo Feng. This one started very well after Luo Feng. I hope that the following Golden Finger will also be good, and don't give it to a system irresponsibly.

After reading the first volume, the plot has no climax, no excitement... It's so bland. If it weren't for devouring fans, I really wouldn't be able to survive this kind of book. How do you manage to have a golden finger but act both awesome and trashy? What's cool is that he has comprehended the first ten levels of "Thunder Knife" and "World Destruction" in a short time and even developed the combined power of two cheats. What's rubbish is that there are many people of the same age who have comprehended more than ten levels. There are many people. You say you are angry or not. It doesn't matter. After all, they are all geniuses, but the author should not put them together, so that your golden finger will be too inexpressive.