Black Sea Ship Girl

Talking about the abuser, in fact, the main reason is that the early goal of the book was too low. After writing too much, I found that it was destined to be unpopular, so the writing was erratic. Moreover, the free book would be good if it didn't pretend to be pretentious and slap the face of the master. What happened to the abuser? This is the only novel on my bookshelf that is not on the shelf. It is a masterpiece selected from the free section. Let me tell those who come next, the main character in this book has an extremely high IQ, and most of those who can't accept it are used to being slapped in the face by pretending to be cool. How can anyone with an online IQ not abuse the protagonist? Long Aotian can produce a readable book by whittling away at templates. How can the whole world revolve around you in reality? Except for masterpieces, the difference between a good book and a sad one has never been clear. If you really don't want to see it as reality, don't take it for granted. Coming back to this book, I'm afraid you have never read a sadist. Do you call the upper class protagonists in this book sadistic? Among the middle and lower class, only those who are famous and not involved in politics or who have hundreds of millions to pretend to be cool and have cool articles will not abuse them?

The writing style is very strong and the layout is grand. This world view that unfolds bit by bit from the perspective of the protagonist is particularly fascinating. I highly recommend it (by the way, does anyone think Ma Fei is a bit like the innocent Wu Xie in The Stealing Pen 😁

I have read more than 350 chapters, which is half of the current updates. I don't know what your approach is in writing this book. The protagonist cannot outwit each other, and all kinds of plots can be seen through. In times of crisis, you have to rely on others to pull it off (this includes but is not limited to Ma Fei who was almost killed in the first duel, and the nuclear radiation went out of control many times). His father is the ceiling of combat power, close to omniscience and omnipotence. The protagonist is forced to marry, is calculated, and is murdered at the beginning. Is this what you are looking for without losing your wits? From chapter 300 onwards, it becomes even more extreme, and he is directly placed under house arrest. I just want to ask, does the author have any special hobbies and feels comfortable being manipulated? Even if you want to write about a battle of wits, if you want to write about a strong opponent, can't you write about a stronger protagonist? If you don't lower your intelligence, will the protagonist be crushed for a long time? You have to write about a huge world view, about the flow of reality, about suffering and hatred, and in the end there must be an ending where the clouds are cleared and the sky is clear, but this book does not have that at all, there is only the abuser, the abuser, and the abuser. The setting of the protagonist is extremely confusing. At the beginning, he seems to be very clever and a genius. However, throughout the book, his luck is not as good as Ma Fei's, and his intelligence is not as good as his fiancée and his father. The hero's ship girl is said to have received 4 nightmares now, but she looks like she will be penetrated by each of his father's 12 ship girls. From the perspective of the main characters in the book, to put it bluntly, he is a waste. I don't know if the author made a mistake in writing, or just wanted to write it like this. I regret not reading the book review first, but I hope that my book review can provide some reference for future readers. It is impossible for the author to change the previous review, so the basic evaluation will not change.

No matter what, as long as the protagonist you write has some brains, he will chase it to the end! There are too few Kanniang articles!

It's been so many days since I've been in the trap, and you're the best fan writer I've ever seen. As long as you're not in jail, I'll finish it, (ง •̀_•́)ง

I have read more than 200 chapters. Is this playing house? Children playing in mud? Have you ever defeated the brainless and arrogant good-for-nothing male protagonist? The fighting skills are overtaken by the good-for-nothing Nanako Takahashi, the villain template? Don't you really think that trash can catch up with genius? It had to be Ma Fei from Dragon Quest. I was really speechless. In the end, my hatred and resentment were all arranged by your father. The puppet male protagonist was like a clown. So what does your teacher mean to the human ship girl who was protecting you before? Life? Straw? Speechless O__O"... The male protagonist really has no progress and is a loser.

This. . Ship Niangwen. . It should be the default harem 😁

I never expected to give it away to a girl. You just gave it away and it still failed to achieve the goal. This is the most speechless part for me. I didn't read the other ones. I guess it will be frustrating when I look at it later. Goodbye!

How much grievance must I have suffered to be able to write like this 😅

The creativity is pretty good. It is a pity that no matter how good the idea is, it cannot withstand the chaotic and anti-intellectual international situation and the author's unruly and bloody heart. Also add the protagonist's magical double-standard Virgin Heart

After reading dozens of chapters, let me share my thoughts. To be honest, there are very few Kanniang novels that are this bad. The author can write it. The writing is pretty good. But after reading it, it changed a bit. In order to reverse, reverse, and to be black, it is actually not necessary. Only people with the same ability will play cards with each other. If you have the ability, you will just overturn the table. What I mean is that the author keeps drawing circles. It seems that a lot has happened, but in the blink of an eye, it is back to the starting point. It was okay at the beginning. The further you go, the more ink stains you feel.

After seeing 274, I really didn't want to read it. I couldn't read this book at all. I was beaten wherever I went. Pay attention to the fact that I was beaten. The result seemed acceptable, but I was deflated throughout the whole process. The protagonist described is a "wise general", and his plan will definitely be seen through. No matter how strong or weak the opponent is, he will definitely swell before the fight begins. Every time you win, you still rely on changing sides, and then you lose every time. After the fight, you must rely on accidental rescues. How many times have you died without relying on "accidental explosions"? To put it nicely, it's because the opponent is so strong, to claim that the protagonist is so awesome after missing one move. To put it badly, if the author is fair, how many times does the protagonist have to die? You also have to rely on accidental support. I'll tie a dog up and let Heihai show his strength. Isn't it better than you? I deserve this book not to be popular

According to the setting of this book, there is one light and one dark. Light and darkness are mutually reinforcing, so this is the reason why the plots of all Kanji games will never end. Where there is light, there must be darkness.

Brother nb, you really have perseverance

I picked up this book when I had nothing to do (Dubaojia. Jpg) It really appealed to my taste. What the author wrote really shocked me, and I praised it (doge).

Regarding this book, I came across it accidentally. When I was searching for Kanniang, after all, except for Dafeng's book, other Kanniang texts were completely difficult to read. But this book, I have read a few chapters, and I feel pretty good about it. I hope the author can listen to the readers' opinions instead of being manipulated by the readers, and write what is in his heart. ps. Ship b passed byヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

After reading dozens of chapters, I have to say that the writing is quite good and the characters' emotions are well written. The problem is that the depiction of ship girls is too dark. Abuse of the master is a big problem. If you don't kill other people's ship girls, let your own ship girls suffer. It is unacceptable. The character of the protagonist is very problematic.

Are geniuses pretentious without any brains? This one dies, that first one, the ship girl is not like the ship girl, but also the whole great political ideal

Don't criticize this book. The author can't stand it. Just write it happily. . . . .

May 27 Currently reading chapter 278, it is clear why the author cannot sign the contract

As long as the author continues to write, I will continue to follow him! Come on, author! Please reply to your little fans!

I have written a story about a fan traveling through the universe, which should not be regarded as a cool novel but a hard-core science fiction. I will update the new novel "Dark Zone Breakout: Starting from Carmona and Traveling Across the World" from time to time. The protagonist's first world is your novel, mainly "The Battle of Waiko Island"

It's been 6 or 7 days since there was an update on True Eunuch? There are very few stories about shipgirls like this. It's a pity that they are gone now.

Suddenly I felt that Yamato Musashi was quite pitiful.

I finally caught up. Don't stop updating.

Brother, why don't you stop updating? It's very beautiful. It's not easy. Don't stop updating.

There are a bunch of black and white people in the comment area. To be honest, as long as it is logical and does not involve the Riddler, the writing is fine. I can accept even the abuse of the protagonist. The problem is that abuse for the sake of abuse followed by all kinds of riddles is really uncomfortable to watch. Can't you express your opinions?

Other Kan Niang texts are healing, but this Kan Niang texts are depressing.

I once saw a story about a person who traveled to the world of a ship girl and became 052. Was he in the North Pole or the Antarctic at the beginning?

Now that I'm reading Chapter 9, I feel it's well written.