I Am an Artist in Japan

You should update more often. If you don't update more, how can anyone read it? No one will see how you sign a contract. If you don't sign a contract, how will you make a small amount of money? If you don't make a small amount of money, how will you get to the top of your life? If you don't get to the top of your life, how will you get a wife? If you don't marry a wife, how will you continue the family line? How can you treat your family if you don't carry on the family line? Okay, I can't go on anymore

It's quite nice, but the characters are a bit copied from the life in Tokyo that started with painting. The author can create some characters himself. The overall feeling is still okay, author, come on, just don't collapse in the later stage.

When I saw 100,000 yen, I felt it was a bit too poisonous. What does 100,000 yen mean in Tokyo? It is roughly equivalent to the concept of 2000 Express in Beijing and Shanghai. Is this just a song competition? A city in the sky? This amount of money in China is not even enough for a one-way ticket to Beijing and Shanghai.

Many things are too templated and abrupt, and the villain seems to be inexplicably looking for trouble with the protagonist. Especially in Hayata High School, the feeling is particularly strong. Art students are a group that is very difficult to quantify. Generally, they can only be judged based on their works. However, there is no such thing as saying that if your work is better than mine this time, you are better than me. Instead, you look at the output over a period of time. The protagonist has won a few times, and the protagonist is not taught by the school. How can anyone think that this school is great, but not this person? It's like the difference between this school being Jay Chou's alma mater and this school being the school that nurtured Jay Chou.

I haven't read it yet, but I just wanted to ask if he is the kind of artist I think he is?

It was very awkward to read. What my ex-girlfriend wrote originally seemed like nothing, but it was too embarrassing to force someone to read it.

I think we should change the introduction. What if RBR sees it?

The needle is good, I hope I won't start a harem 🙂

The villain is very cliched, and he comes here to find trouble without any logic. Basically, the villains are all carved out of molds one by one.

It's so little. Can you have more? ? ? ?

It turns out that the author is trying to make your protagonist less pretentious. Instead of being too modest, it is better to attack with all his strength! Otherwise, continuing like this will create hidden dangers in the woods for the protagonist! ! I always feel like the main character has a weird personality!

Qidian Orphanage has added a new member 🙄

The plot arrangement is too deliberate, especially the pretense and slap-in-the-face plot. It's like feeding feces to flies. In addition, there are a lot of things wrong with the description of the details. Shouldn't it be a gold reward or a silver reward? First place? There are also conversations arranged to chat and even argue during the concert. Are you sure the security won't pinch you out?