I'm Really Not a Senior

The burping feels pretty good, but the cocoa is a bit poisonous.

The author should change Huang Ke's setting. It's too poisonous. He only wrote a few chapters and he started to be persuaded to quit with such poison.

It's a very good subject matter. I just discovered it last night. It was refreshing and great at first. But later on, the plot between the protagonist and those women really poisoned me. I feel like the author can't advance the plot without using women? ? ? Or maybe it's hard to understand what the author wants to express and what foreshadowing is being laid out. . . .

I have read over a hundred chapters and I don't understand why the author insists on writing a little girl character? Do you have a fetish? From my observation, in the world of Xianxia novels, little lolita are not pleasing to readers, but more of trying to discourage readers.

Shangguan Qin has not been killed at all, why would such a person keep her? Is it just because she's a woman?

Those few chapters of Coco really put me off. The whole story was pretty good, but the characterization made me less interested in looking at it. If the author continues to do this later, it will really become poisonous. When the author was reading the book himself, when he saw this kind of character, he probably had no desire to read any more.

What age are you still playing the character of a willful and tsundere young lady? Aren't you worried?

The author wants to describe Coco as an innocent girl who is inexperienced in the world, but her writing skills are not good enough and she gives the impression that she is an unruly and willful young lady As long as the problem is automatically ignored, it is not a big deal, but if it is too long, it will be disgusting.

His brother-in-law, the protagonist is so powerful. Although he doesn't know it, he can't be forced to become a disciple by others. It's too hasty. You must know that the Tao should not be taught lightly. I feel so uncomfortable when I see it.

Coco is too poisonous. I really don't want to watch it.

1. The protagonist lives in the Qingyun Sect, and everyone in the sect is dead. The protagonist collects their corpses, and similarly, the protagonist inherits the Qingyun Sect 2. Chapter 78 said that the Qingyun Sect was killed by the snake demon, and then the protagonist accepted the snake demon as his younger brother 3. The protagonist does not know, but Yes, the author knows, and we readers also have a God's perspective 4. We readers are flesh and blood, and we humans also have emotions. Reading novels will arouse psychological resonance 5. The snake demon is not a human being. What it does is correct for it. However, for us, it is a heinous crime, because we are human beings . . . It doesn't matter whether the protagonist knows it or not, I only know that normal authors would not write like this. Likewise, normal readers cannot accept it.

Do you want it as long as it's a woman?

The protagonist has always been calm, which I have to say is very consistent with an expert. The supporting actress made me feel silly, she was like the kind that I fell in love with at first sight when I saw the handsome protagonist.

It wouldn't be a good book without a female protagonist... These women are so fucking disgusting

Cocoa is indeed a poisonous person. After he matures, he will no longer talk to Pig's Feet!

By the way, when did this happen?

I think it's fine as long as it looks good, it's relaxing, not tiring, and it's funny

There are more chapters with water word count than the main plot 😅😅

I'm convinced. Is this kind of brain supplement so popular now...

I don't know why, but it doesn't look good after leaving the Imperial City.

It's really poisonous. I thought there was no female protagonist when I read the introduction. Nowadays, it's popular to trick people into killing pigs.

There are only a few of them in one day, which makes my monthly pass very difficult.

After more than 100 chapters, I still don't know my own strength, and I'm vomiting blood. Do I really think that people from other worlds are fools? It is enough to open up the Dantian 100 times as much as the scholar's work, but it has to be hundreds or thousands of times. The Heavenly Eye requires spiritual energy, so you can use this. If you learn some other techniques, you won't be afraid of anything. There are so many poisonous points that I almost vomited blood when I saw them.

After reading Chapter 14, do you want to know whether Coco will receive a lunch box later? This is a place for cultivating immortality, not a city. Why is there such a character? ?

I just watched it. In which chapter did the protagonist change his sleeves to be shorter?

I wonder if all those reading books are brats? Doesn't it mean that someone who looks ugly is uneducated? Beautiful are other beautiful words. . . This is also called poisonous point, which is funny.

Have the transformed girl who is looking for the protagonist and a few lowly guys been forgotten?

As long as the supervisor insists on chasing it every day

The author should not forget the foreshadowing. Wasn't the child at the bottom of the lake (Dongtian's original consciousness?) Who was born on the mountain at the beginning of the protagonist looking for the protagonist? Do you want to take away some foreshadowing before finishing the book? Or do you plan to write a sequel after finishing this book and wait until your writing becomes better in the future to collect the foreshadowing? 🙂🙂 Actually, I really like this book you wrote. Your work is the first one I read on Playbase, and it is also the only one I have followed and plan to finish. Although there is a lot of room for improvement in writing, I really like this style. I hope you can write a beautiful ending and look forward to your next book. Come on, Ollie! 🤭👍

The 18-year-old bookworm said that this book is really well written, and it is very interesting to read calmly. . . I don't understand the views of today's young people. Does it have to be a book like Tudou where others look at you and kill the whole family to be interesting?