Trick World Investigator

Drive high and go low, regretful The author can write about small people struggling to survive, but cannot write about a certain foundation and then draw on others' strengths. The protagonist is appreciated by Young Master Huaixin and joins the Purple Dragon Guard. He is also the legitimate son of the fifth core member of the Tian family. He is being chased by Tian Jia Renfang for no reason. He has no way to go. He can completely use the situation to force them to dare not speak. Tian Jia Renfang does not need to fight to the death. This plot is very abrupt. There are also many unreasonable parts of the plot, and the pretense and slap in the face are very blunt.

The main problem with this book is Excellent setting Routine plot Mediocre writing style Not very suitable I am purely interested in the setting of Zhuzi Baijia, and I want to see the kind of sequence upgrade flow in the pre-Qin era. It turned out that the main character's fiancée broke off the engagement was very poisonous to me, and everyone was mindless to target the main character. There was also a problem with the main character's character, and there was no memory point at all (*｀へ´*) Also, the current novel was not written more than ten years ago. Please give up the routine. Such a good setting is wasted. What a pity←_←

Author, the plot behind you is getting more and more cliche. When the protagonist breaks through, he is surrounded by enemies and his relatives, and after breaking through, he kills the enemy, slaps him in the face, and has a happy reunion. These are all old clichés. Can't we write something else? Now the plot is advancing slowly, the character rendering is getting thinner and thinner, and even the protagonist looks more and more ridiculous. Since it is based on the pre-Qin worldview, it cannot write about the collision of various schools of thought, and there should be less so-called war and daughter-in-law. You can't create tension when you write about war, and you can't write about the love between children in such a way that it makes people think that the protagonist is a stallion and Chen Shimei. Since you have already written about the pre-Qin Dynasty, you cannot write about debates in the academy and traveling around the world! You cannot write about the mysterious side and secret battles outside the court. Your plot and routine text that you say is watery but is really useless has really failed and ruined the popularity.

Why do you lose 5% of your sanity value once you blow your breath? If someone doesn't know the alchemy of virtue, wouldn't he fall into madness after two or three battles? It feels very unreasonable.

The author's settings are really good. I won't talk about best friends here. The order set by various schools of thought is very interesting. The author also has a profound foundation in ancient Chinese prose. The plot is cliche and can be tolerated, but the ideas are all there and you can still watch it. But the character, the IQ of the supporting characters... Seemed to make me see a slap in the face article from 20 years ago. The uncle repeatedly jumps and slaps him in the face, and the pavilion master's son jumps and slaps him in the face in public... The irrational enemy insists on killing the protagonist, just for some land that the protagonist does not like. Later, another real and fake Crown Princess appeared. The real Crown Princess sat back and watched her reputation being tarnished, indifferently. There are too many, there are really too many unreasonable things in the plot. You can tell me about the logic of reading a novel, and you will know it yourself if you read it. You have to go against the protagonist for some inexplicable reason. What is this like? ? ? Central Plains Five Whites? Others are right, breaking off the engagement, being slapped in the face, being provoked by enemies, being slapped in the face again, being hated by passers-by for no reason, being slapped in the face... It really depends on the setting, the fusion of Youyou and Zhuangzi is still very interesting. The author should really sort out the plot logic, after all, you are here for the readers!

Let me talk about my personal feelings. In terms of the subject matter, there is nothing wrong with it. It's great. So what's the problem? First of all, it's almost chapter 30, and the engagement has just been broken off, so it's not that exciting at all, okay! I thought you were a slow burner, and by the time you saved Young Master Pingyuan, the first main plot was almost completed. In a normal novel, the protagonist would enter a period of untying the shackles, acting like a protagonist, and improving in a normal way. No matter whether you were taking the main plot of Young Pingyuan or Purple Guard, you have reached level 1, and you have made contributions. There should be a time when the protagonist takes the cup. There are two trials in a row at the beginning. If you insist on doing them consecutively, I will pretend that you are the author and hold my nose in recognition. Okay, just change the line and save Sister Yu, okay, the protagonist has risen to A again, full of friendship, okay, it has been upgraded to level 2, and Yangjiaocheng has been trampled by the powerful. I found out that no, the protagonist has been targeted and suppressed from the beginning. He is beaten wherever he goes, and he is unstable wherever he goes. In this way, he even supports a harem. If this is what the author wants, I have nothing to say.

I have read more than a hundred chapters. The men are basically enemies, and the beauties basically like the protagonist. Apart from the setting, I can't say it's exactly the same as the harem novel I read in elementary school, I can only say it's exactly the same.

Luo Li, one thing after another, endless, the protagonist is a little person, does he have a sarcastic face?

A very talented author has written a very special book. The training system is roughly based on Mystery, and the style is changed to Eastern classical style. From the outer shell to the content, the author's own in-depth composition is revealed, showing his talent. The plot structure is often unexpected and unpredictable, which shows his talent. It's just a bit excessive. Everyone likes to see twists and turns, and twists and turns of 50% and 60% off affect the smoothness of the main line. Especially when I saw Chapter 108, a life-and-death enemy could turn into a marriage heroine, I felt that I really couldn't bear to watch it anymore. But I still admire the author's writing talent. Just like the book that seems to be a reference to "The Perfect Way", the author squandered his writing style wantonly, and the book never became popular. Is a stable frame rhythm really so unimportant?

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that the advantages and disadvantages are equally obvious. The advantage is that it is full of creativity. Although the entire training system has just been slowly opened, it looks very novel. The writing style is good. Although it is a bit archaic for the sake of archaism, it still has a Qin and Han style, but it is a bit hollow. And based on the current development, I don't expect it to be written in the future. But just the choice of words and sentences, and the structure are better than more than half of the online texts, at least much better than those completely spoken anecdotes. The shortcomings are also very obvious, and they have even reached the point where you can immediately point them out if the settings are not excellent. The rhythm is slow and full of routines. The plot relies entirely on pretense and slaps in the face. There are all kinds of obvious routines. The protagonist's IQ is not high, and the supporting characters are all mentally retarded. They don't look like practitioners from a big family, but like children in a kindergarten fighting for wits and courage. The overall impression is that it has excellent creativity, passable writing skills, and a messy plot. What a pity

This plot is so written that it really ruins the setting.

You can be creative and creative, and it can even be said to be very innovative. But the story is too obscure, and the protagonist lacks charm and decisiveness. If your heart is not ruthless and your hands are not dark, you will not be able to achieve great things, and if you are motivated by sex, you will make people unhappy. For example, that lady who cares, the relationship transition was handled well, but this kind of plot just didn't make people like it. The handling of breaking points and refreshing points is also unsatisfactory. The problem with this book's success is not the subject matter or the writing style, but has a lot to do with the charm of the protagonist and the overall rhythm of the recommended story. There will be people who like it, but it's just destined to not be many.

Full subscription, only 60 chapters after a month of reading. I want the author to update quickly but I am afraid of poor writing. So annoying! Can anyone recommend some good time-travel books like this one?

It feels like the core fifth room is a fake core. There are still three nails in the broken ship. As the core of a big family, it's fine if there are no thugs to protect the courtyard. Not even maids and servants? This is no longer a question of poverty. Where is the face of the aristocratic family? He was assassinated at the beginning. As the core of the family, does the family just ignore it? No one even asked? Isn't this kind of family broken up long ago? Can it be passed down for dozens of generations?

The quality of this book by the author is very high. I feel like I can become a god in one book. I need to promote it more. I feel like I haven't read much of it.

I feel that the setting is still very novel, but there is a reason why this book has 800,000 words and 5,000 collections. I think the biggest reason is that the protagonist is really like a human mocking machine. People come out to target wherever he goes, especially the divorced woman who causes a lot of things and the protagonist cannot deal with them every time. She is very poisonous.

The protagonist's pattern is to get up, get beaten, change the map, get up again, get beaten again, and change the map again.

The setting is very good, written by Laqua

What is this, the villain is brainless and clever? I'm really convinced, such a good idea, and the plot is written like this.

After reading more than 20 chapters, you will be blown away by the plot. Is there any content? Stay away, idiot.

This book really collapsed. In the early stage, the protagonist was crazily suppressed, and in the later stage, it was upgraded crazily. In the end, he was confused. I don't know how he became the God Emperor. Oh my God, it felt like he suddenly became the God Emperor. But the ending was not bad. The author is a newcomer after all, so it is understandable. If it were an old author, he could only think that he was seeking death.

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Already fully booked, monthly passes are provided. The setting and framework of this book are still very good. The content is okay too. As for the clichéd plot and other issues, I think it's okay since he is a new author after all. After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the author's progress is quite obvious. I hope I can write the complete book well.

First-class setting, third-rate plot and writing

I just started reading this book. The setting is great and the plot is very slow. How many chapters will Jiang Ying die in? I'll just jump over and watch it

This kind of nonsense novel, to be honest, has no market, the cultivation system is complicated, and there are a bunch of so-called ancient principles. Basically, people read the novel to relax. This novel is really not pleasing to the eye.

It's very interesting, and I highly recommend it. The reason why this book is not popular is probably because of its title. It makes people think it is the kind of ghost-killing novel. However, it is not the case. The background is grand and vast, and the cultivation levels are clearly divided. It's much better than the pretentious writing by today's noobs.

It's very well written, why doesn't anyone do it?

After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know the protagonist's abilities. I suggest you just go ahead and write a historical article. What kind of weird article should you write?

Can it be written in vernacular? Ancient Chinese + vernacular are neither fish nor fowl.