Qi Refining Senior Brother

Damn it. Watching this stuff will make you addicted

When he saw the third junior sister, he didn't want to look at her because he had formed an instinctive resistance. Your book is about the protagonist pretending to be a master. You could write about the third junior sister doubting the protagonist and trying to undermine the protagonist, but you write that all the protagonist's details are known to her, and she responds to her requests. What is this? If you want to create conflicts and highlight the embarrassment of the protagonist being exposed, it shouldn't be like this if someone takes advantage of you. I'm sure 50% of people have no desire to read this chapter. It's too alienating.

As soon as the first girl came out, I didn't want to watch it.

If there wasn't this third senior sister, I would feel very comfortable watching it

I have started a new plot. I feel that the writing for this competition is so boring. I will try to correct it.

I couldn't stop after watching it. I felt so little at the end. Big boost to the author.

It's a good start, I hope there will be less brainless female fans in the follow-up.

I would also like to see more of the heroine's style 😁

Just have a single heroine, don't write so many sluts

That woman is very poisonous as soon as she comes out.

Wow, you guys read so fast. I just uploaded it and you finished it? ? 😰

Everything else is good, except that it's a little bit poisonous for a female character who is a passerby to see the protagonist's nympho doing stupid things.

All the disciples of a sect went to the academy to practice again? What the hell do I......... This setting..........

Found a good book, recommended