Players Lead the World

I would feel better if the two female characters in the front were not there. I saw that the one in the gym has any use other than getting a gas mask in Chapter 84. The image is not pleasing, and it is of no use in promoting the plot. Skipping it will not affect the continuity. I don't know why it was designed. The plot of the guide at the end is also weird. Weird, why do you have to create some emotional lines? It doesn't mean that it can make the character more fleshed out. You might as well change it to a male character. And after reading Chapter 84, where is the growth of the protagonist? I don't mean the change of numerical values. After the protagonist experiences these events, he understands that this is not just a game. Isn't there a mentality growth? I didn't see it. The subject matter is very good, but the useless supporting characters and the embarrassing plot are really not well presented to the readers. It's not bad enough, but it's awkward.

After the chase, surprisingly he was not poisoned Although the protagonist's original identity seemed to be known to everyone, no one found out about Goldfinger. The protagonist is also ready to give up his real identity The author's writing is pretty good, but there are too few updates.

This novel can be considered an above-average novel, one that is good but not too popular. There are no logical problems, the writing style is very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, and the content and subject matter are also very interesting. Overall, this novel is very good. But there are still some problems with the writing of the supporting characters. I always feel that the supporting characters... Well, I can't say it, are a bit off-putting, and they are forced to intersperse the scenes.

I think it's okay, so I just want to ask if there is a female protagonist. To be honest, if the writing skills are not good enough to write a female protagonist, I really can't stand it. Now I always feel that there are too many descriptions of female characters around the protagonist, which makes me feel like there are too many female protagonists.

This book is really strange. After reading the previous plot for a long time, I felt that it was not enjoyable at all. The plot was bland and I just brushed it off. There are also some plot developments that are just forced into it and are inexplicable. The protagonist also felt weird. He really treated reality as a game. As a result, when the real game plot happened, he suddenly became emotional again. Moreover, after playing several games, I didn't see any growth in the protagonist at all, so I just loaded up the game and passed the game without thinking. Can you show off your IQ? [Just like the swordsman plot, the fighting plot is just like oral sex, there is no sense of scene at all, or is it the story behind it? The supporting role is really hard to describe. The protagonist said that women will only affect my speed of drawing the sword. Then the author arranged for a bunch of supporting female characters to insert themselves into the plot, and they suddenly became close to the protagonist for no reason. Even the game plot has supporting female characters. . .

Ask the author, is this your new vest? If so, let me take a look at what your previous vest was.

The plot and settings are very good, but can you stop writing so many messy and unimpressive stories, forcing the protagonist to be a woman who loses her wits and loses her waistcoat, some inexplicable sixth sense, and some really otherworldly people become women near the protagonist. Hey, this book is very good.

The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, and the content is resonant and thought-provoking. It is one of the rare good books I have encountered in decades. My only regret is that I have not read a word of it.

Wait, wouldn't it be better to replace the woman who leads the way with destiny with a tall and thick man?

The author's writing is very good, and I feel it is much more interesting than the book "It's a Small World". I hope the author doesn't want to be a stud. The ambiguous relationship with women in that book is really disgusting.

The plot is okay What I don't like is that the female characters are not likable and someone knows the identity of the protagonist not even many chapters in. The first two female characters were dismissed as soon as they were written (I couldn't stand it until about chapter 80). Maybe the later ones will be better, but it is difficult to retain people if they are dismissed in the first place My personal thoughts. I won't talk about other minor points that are not too serious.

More than forty chapters revealed his identity directly, and I am a damn good guy.

Matrix game, a weird game box, a small world with endless fun, I am the boss behind the scenes.

The book is very good, but the character of the supporting actress is not very good at the beginning.

Ever since that woman first appeared, I wonder if it was because the female protagonist had so many roles that were too prominent, and it felt like she was charging in an unknown direction.

It's not so much that no one reads it, but that the writing style, world view and plot structure are not up to the desired level. I came across your book from 🐶Tingri's forum, but as of now, you want to spread out the world view too eagerly, which leads to a strong sense of fragmentation in the plot. Especially the Cthulhu chapter and the setting of the big world game seem to be spread out to emphasize that the world view is very large.

Asking how to add gram elements to a book, it's very simple. Three key words---evil god, tentacles, and indescribable.

This novel is quite interesting, with novel themes and a good plot. Approved by an eight-year-old bookworm, non-toxic and edible

To be honest, the part about my future self is indeed very discouraging. Don't ask me why. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. My intuition told me...

I just watched a little bit, and I found it quite embarrassing at the beginning when I saw Wen Siliu's identity revealed. I hadn't even written a few pictures before someone discovered it, which shattered my sense of expectation. The gap is too big. I originally wanted to stay up late to watch it, but I might as well forget it now!

Why write the protagonist as a funny character? Do you think no one likes the calm protagonist?

The role of Miss Lu is too abrupt, and I still feel a sense of fragmentation when I see it now.

A little advice for the author (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

I can't figure out why it's not popular. As a bookworm of ten years, I feel that this book is actually quite good.

I came here because there is no heroine. Please tell me if there is no heroine.

It hurts my heart😭

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The writing style of the author's novel is still very interesting, and the development of the story is also good. I sincerely hope that the protagonist can have a few more interesting companions who can trust each other and have interesting personalities. After all, walking alone is not as good as walking with many people. The author can read novels about making games to make the content of the game more interesting.