The Nightmare Is Coming

The author is obviously the kind of person whose compositions were shown by teachers as model essays in middle school. His foundation in language and writing is impressive. The setting of the worldview is very ambitious, and details are laid out at the beginning; the number of the mission report, the analysis function of AI, and a glimpse of the leopard raise the expectations for the precision and sci-fi sense of the worldview. The narrative is also rich in structure. Although it is not very friendly to follow-up, the two-line narrative with time difference is obvious and amazing. The author received bad reviews because of this design, so it might as well be regarded as a normal screening of readers. However, as a suspense book, the specific concept is mediocre. The revelation of "Road to Life" is not very exciting, and is even a bit far-fetched, such as the twist explanation of "ghosts catching people". But under the author's control, the plot is very attractive! There are a large number of scenes with substantial dialogue and action. The environment and imagery are very purposeful in promoting the plot. Especially the protagonist's fighting scenes, the scene feels like the storyboard of a movie. With this writing style, the writers I have seen at Qidian are all great writers (poisoning the author without any burden) But maybe the author sometimes relies on his own powerful writing style and writes big and special books, so that some plots are somewhat redundant. The decryption has become a fragmentary narrative. The first volume takes almost one chapter to explain the anomalies between the security guard and the housewife when they enter the apartment. However, there are no closely connected transitions between these interludes and the main timeline, making readers inevitably feel confused. The reason why an article is an article lies in its various narratives, explanations, and emotions, which can explain multi-dimensional motives in a two-dimensional picture. Foreshadowing has the same flaws. As for the speculation that the dream had already begun, clues ran through the unit, but in the end they were only pointed out hastily by the protagonist during the tense decisive battle. It was too delayed and poorly timed. It should have been amazing, but it didn't have the shock of being horrified when you think about it carefully. Female Boxing Warning for the comments below⚠️—— In addition, the character of the male protagonist is really a combination of the hard-core male protagonists of ancient European and American movies, and the fantasy male protagonist who escapes from love and playfulness but hides his inner caring. There are contradictions, memory points, and a typical "atypical hero" character. And misogynistic. I have seen a lot of decryption streams where the protagonist brings a girl and focuses on describing the girl's sweet voice and beautiful legs. I have also seen escape streams where the female player transforms into a screaming chicken/scheming vase/a death-defying expert, and is full of stereotypes, and I just laugh it off. But I really rarely see that female stereotypes are designed into key plots and become an important factor in promoting the plot. Nan Mingyuan, who worked tirelessly as an operator, took on the responsibility of intervening in the incident as an ordinary person. At the same time, the main point of cuteness was that he was teased by the protagonist's mean words to the point of being shy. After her courage to face death was easily wiped out by the protagonist's sentence "It's not your turn (a woman)", readers happily dismissed her pretentious monologue as a misfortune. The humanoid morpheus on the wall is a standard villain, cold and cruel, with evil intentions. The situation is so desperate that it can no longer be solved, and then the game suddenly freezes because of the sister's love for the brother. That's it? When I say this, I do not intend to ask the author to modify it (of course the author will not care about it), nor do I want to insinuate anyone's character or three views. I just want the author to feel what it feels like to be punched by a woman. The punch you owe... I will make up for it.

It is indeed toxic in the early stage, and the results of multi-line development are not very satisfactory, but in fact, it is really good in the later stage. But the beginning is really important 🤓. Most people are not the kind of people who don't read well and can easily change it. I know that the author greatly hopes to write an extraordinary book, but he should try to be as steady as possible at the beginning and wait for more details later.

I strongly urge the author to change the character name. Chapter 40, My name is Kang**

I saw that the previous writing was a bit messy, so I endured it When I saw the chapter where the protagonist decided to come back, I slipped away I thought it was the protagonist waiting for death and then suddenly a golden finger came I gained some ability to transcend the organization Do what I want to do But I met a woman who had no foreshadowing for me and came over to miserably, so I went in again, emmmmm Maybe this book is not suitable for me. Usually when I don't like it, I just silently leave it. This book, how should I put it, made me very unhappy to read it. I'll just say this and leave it behind

No mole, the little girl in a perfect dress

I have only read Chapter 20, and I feel that the early stage is not very confusing Jiang Mian's perspective, which I personally call the "victim's perspective", is used quite a lot in supernatural suspense stories, especially when the protagonist has experience and ability to deal with events and the tension decreases, he often changes his perspective to that of ordinary people. The victim, let the reader obediently retract Jio into the quilt... Depending on the arrangement of the novel author, sometimes the perspective of the victim will stop abruptly, and then the protagonist will notice the news of a "bizarre case that is very tragic at the scene". Sometimes like this book, the protagonist will appear in a critical moment like this book, and the hero will save... Ahem, people. However, this book not only has the main perspective interspersed with the victim's perspective, the main perspective also adds a flashback to the timeline three years ago, which is slightly more complicated than ordinary online novels. Perhaps the biggest difference is that the beginning is not the beginning of the story, and it does not start with the protagonist's "initial contact with weirdness and solving it - gaining abilities - understanding the world", but choosing the time point of "laid off and re-employed". As a result, the victim's perspective must be used very early to create a terrifying atmosphere, and at the same time, the main perspective must use narrative flashbacks to explain past events. Equivalent to three lines: the main perspective at the same time, the victim's perspective, and the main perspective in the past. And the third thread is a bit chipped. It also uses a lot of victim perspective in the beginning, like Aoba, but not many people say it is nonsense, probably because the protagonist perspective does not have the insertion of the past timeline, it is a simple hearing event-intervening event. Moreover, the victim's perspective is "telling", which is interactive with the main perspective's "listening".

To be honest, I, a bookworm who has been reading for more than ten years, now have too much taste, and there are fewer and fewer books that I can read. I have been reading suspense books recently, and I have been looking for a long time but I haven't found a few good ones. I happened to see your book yesterday, but it's a pity that it is too young. I have limited ability and can only subscribe to support it. Come on, writing a book is not easy!

Make complaints. I quite like the setting of this book. The infinite flow of dreams eroding reality. In addition, the author will not throw away the setting wildly. The setting is enough and leaves enough blanks. But the author is really weak in writing people. The first fourteen chapters mainly talk about the protagonist's comeback after retirement, but such a dramatic section is very pale. The protagonist is dying, the protagonist sacrifices his life to save others, the protagonist is at odds with the organization's philosophy, the protagonist retires out of frustration because he feels that he has implicated his sister, then the protagonist has actually been volunteering (?), And finally the protagonist decides to break out and return to the organization because of the reappearance of the dream that killed his sister (???). The motivation can be said to be poorly drawn. My favorite part of the comeback of a character is the snake gambler in "Trading Crime". First, he shows an overly self-disciplined and ordinary middle-level manager. When he encounters a bank case, he rushes out after a while of entanglement, becomes a hero after being unlucky, and then enters the stage of revealing his true identity. He deftly reduces his visibility, then gets drawn into troubles from his past, and finally resolves the remaining issues and finds that he doesn't want to be so quiet. Does it look familiar? This is a very cliche Hollywood movie plot, but it is really useful. Don't look down on clichés, this stuff has been tried and tested.

No mole, some cute 19-year-old jk boys and girls

The feeling of separation in reading is very serious. It is okay to write two lines or multiple lines, but the other line has nothing to do with what the protagonist is doing, and is even dispensable. It is very bad, and it is very jumpy. This makes it difficult to maintain immersive reading. I hope the author can grasp the degree

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After reading Chapter 10, I am not interested in reading anymore. It's all in the clouds. You did that in that organization and did that for this. Is it necessary to go around like this and make it unclear?

I read all the chapters in one go. The author is very good at setting up events, especially the one about returning to the morgue. This book is not perfect, but it is worth reading. It is not easy to write about supernatural beings. I have fully subscribed and supported it.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the main character's character was not good. He was waiting to die on the roadside, and then I saw a girl suddenly running into school again. I was so speechless.

Come on, this kind of novel is very difficult now, the restrictions are very serious, but I still have to come on, I am very optimistic about you, personally I feel that your novel looks better than the House of Horrors, you may not have found the right time.

Those who were hit by silver should read five or six chapters and invest decisively! A bookworm of twenty years thinks this book is very good! ! ! Come on, author! ! !

I don't quite understand the composition of the ability of Shuling people, 1. When the fully descended ghosts are completed by matter, they will have both domains and rules. The Shuling people only have the domain. When the Shuling people completely liberate ghosts, there will not be a situation where [ghosts and humans are unified in a short period of time and temporarily reach the level of completeness and gain domains and rules at the same time]? 2. Is Chen Rongxuan's control over the five senses his own domain, or is this domain the Married Man's but Chen Rongxuan has the right to use it? What is the teleportation used for micro-liberation? Is it an ability derived from the field? The name of the field of five sense control does not match teleportation. 3. Because the field used by Chen Rongxuan is controlled by the five senses, I may have been caught in the mirror, and I am a little confused about the fighting method of Shu Lingren. ①The spirit-beaming man gains part of the ghost's abilities during slight liberation, and lets the ghost come out to fight for him when fully liberated (like the summoner, the summoner can share a small part of the abilities of the summoned beast, but most of the combat power is in the summoned beast). ②The ghost's identity will not manifest (the wedding ghost seen by the protagonist is an illusion, or the wedding ghost comes out but is an empty shell, and the real combat power lies with Chen Rongxuan). The Shuling people directly use the ghost's ability, and get part of the ghost's ability during micro liberation (micro liberation is the same as ①), and get all the ghost's ability when fully liberated. They are a battle mage, and the ghost is just a buff machine. ③The spirit-beaming man can switch between ① and ②. He can either put his ability on the ghost and let the ghost fight for him, or he can put his ability on himself and enter Gandalf mode. Choose one of the two. ④ Shu Lingren has the abilities of ① and ② at the same time. While releasing real ghosts, he also has the ability of ghosts himself, giving him double happiness (Chen Rongxuan cannot do it because his ability is not enough).

In fact, the look and feel is okay... When the author comes back, please give me a kick. Thank you.

I came across this book when I was robbing a treasure chest. It is really exciting. I read it in one breath. The story is completely told and the writing is very good. To be honest, I usually don't dare to read too scary novels. The sense of immersion is too strong and it is easy to scare myself. Now I don't dare to leave the house. I always feel cautious, but I want to continue reading. As for the fact that there aren't many readers, maybe it's because people haven't discovered it yet, but some people will definitely like it.

Come on, old bookworm thinks your writing is really good.

The needle doesn't poke, the needle doesn't poke, the book is really good. So far, it seems that the plot of the story is reasonable, the characters are very three-dimensional, and there is no nt plot. I remember that I had read several good books, such as "Light Chaser in the City" and "Restricted Doomsday Syndrome". I couldn't even search for them at the starting point, so I had to go to Baidu. . . I really like this type of book. I hope the author will not give up! ! !

Can I cum for three pictures🙂

Is it that kind of nightmare series? Such as Nightmare Invasion and Nightmare Apostle