My Name Is Luo Qingcheng

After reading it, um... How should I put it... Although the plot and character interactions are described smoothly, the profiles or characterizations of the supporting characters and the protagonist are a bit random, and the too fast plot flow also makes people feel that this is just a book. To put it simply, it is impossible to substitute the character's perspective. As an author, if you want readers to empathize with the characters in the book, the most important thing is to pay attention to substitution. There is no need to change what has been written in the first part. When writing later, you can use fragmentary memories, narration by others, stories, etc. To improve the character image so that readers can better understand the characters (not just the protagonist). This can effectively improve the current situation of inability to empathize. In addition, too fast a plot flow will cause the psychological description of many characters to be unable to be described. To increase the sense of immersion, in addition to the image of the characters themselves, a certain description of psychological activities is also required. You can try slowing down the pace of the plot and spending more time writing short stories about the characters. Although it is a bit troublesome, it will enrich the image of the characters. [The most important point] My method may not be suitable for everyone. Treat yourself as them, look at everything around you from a different perspective, don't think of yourself as a superior creator god. Above. [If you don't quite understand, you can read my book, it's about daily life, it should be helpful qwq]

It's pretty good for the same genre, and the writing is smooth. But it is illogical for a neurotic to stab a bad guy and then give him money to tell him the location of his relatives. Why, the article did not mention the protagonist's ability to control the overall situation. It is assumed that the bad guy can run away and the monk cannot run away from the temple, so he does not dare to hurt the protagonist's relatives. This is a logic. Suppose that the protagonist's strength and reputation are so strong that the bad guys dare not hurt the protagonist's relatives. This is also a logic, but it is not mentioned in the previous article. But it's only six chapters, and I may explain in the follow-up content that my current evaluation is one-sided. To be honest, to be honest, I feel like I am reading the martial arts novels of Jin Yong's Gu Long era and the world view set by Douluo Dalu. It's not that bad, but this kind of plot that relies on sacrifice to let the protagonist grow up is already considered a Renaissance. I don't really like the tragic style of writing. After all, I didn't have to read the kind of tragic martial arts novels back then. Now I have to choose some and forget them. They are well written, but they are not suitable for me. Thanks for the recommendation.

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Alas, the author's straight male nature has been exposed. If you have older brothers, brothers, and sisters with better literary talents, you can think of some more sexy names, sects, more famous weapons, mythological characters, etc. If you want to write a novel but haven't done it yet, you can also send your story and I will help you write it! !

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It was very smooth to watch, the plot developed too fast, and the descriptions were all on point, but so many people died... It was too fast, come on

The handling is quite interesting, very promising, keep it up

I just took a look at it and it was okay. I added a bookshelf.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Personally, I feel that the author wanted to write in depth, but his writing skills are still immature, but it's okay, keep up the good work.

Come on, young man, it's a very good book. I've collected it and read it slowly.

The direction of the introduction is not obvious, so please bookmark and vote first, continue to read, keep up the good work...