At the Beginning of Fahai, I Was Actually a Player

The title and divisions are completely inconsistent. Your book should not appear in the fantasy genre, and it should not be in the fantasy continent. Moreover, the writing style is not good, and the set routines are not carefully designed. It seems to be described in one word: water In fact, a good novel does not necessarily have to be written fast, but it must be written very delicately. It is a good habit to make more drafts.

With a title like this and content like this, it will 100% last for no more than two or three months at most. If you don't believe it, if it is still updated after two or three months, I will give birth to children for everyone here.

In Chapter 23, the protagonist's personality changes drastically. He becomes a dark batch and is simply a hypocrite. The kindness and purity of the previous chapters are all gone. More green tea than green tea.

Chapter 22 is a little disgusting. I can help Old Turtle in the first place, but later I can take the demon pill by force without caring about human life. You will do whatever it takes to achieve your goals. Are you sure you are qualified to be a disciple of the protagonist Amitabha? If Amitabha knew about it, he would definitely slap Fahai to death.

After seeing so many book reviews, I stopped reading your book, but I gave you a recommendation vote. Author, if you persist for three months, my future children will depend on you, for our "happiness". No matter how many people criticize you, you have to persevere.

Anti-Buddhism in the name of Buddhism. If a person who truly believes in Buddhism reads this book, he will probably commit a crime of anger.

The mighty heavenly dragon is one of the eight heavenly dragons of Buddhism. Everyone knows who the World Honored Ksitigarbha Prajna Buddha is. How about you use the blessing given by the Buddha to destroy the Buddha? It is so majestic 😰

The author has five books, which one has he finished? ? ? ? The loss of integrity is too serious

There are mighty dragons every day, young people really don't care about virtue, look at me lightning ⚡Five🖐🏻 series

Chapter 1 or 2 directly persuaded him to quit, and he almost died of embarrassment 😜

What is Sanjiang pushing this week? It's not the type I like to watch. I read the comments and there's a risk of eunuchs. I've read a lot of historical books in the genre that I recommend. They have shady stories. What about other books?

Such a title and content will 100% become a eunuch within two or three months. If you don't believe it, it will still be updated after two or three months. I will ask everyone who is working on it to have children.

Author: As long as I am not embarrassed, the only person who is embarrassed is the reader.

It's been a long time since I've read a book that appeals to my taste. Good job, author.

The donkey's lips are not the same as the horse's mouth, the script is beyond the sky, the strength is high and low, and finally the style of painting suddenly changes, full of the atmosphere of web games

Why can you get into Sanjiang now with these four to five thousand recommendation votes...

What the hell are you writing? The front is pretty good, but the back just gives up.

Good guy, what is Sanjiang?

It seemed that he was almost eunuch, and he looked confused. The writing of the characters is unclear. It's okay if you write about a child from the original world. Don't write about a modern person in his 20s who time travels and becomes a child. The result is that he even thinks like a child👶🏻. Baffling.

Good guy, he turned out to be an old eunuch

The writing is messy and it feels like pasting and copying without using any brain.

What is written after Chapter 80? ? It's inconsistent. You said it was a game world before, but then you created a game warehouse in the game world and then entered the game? ? I suspect you ghostwrote it, it's a mess.

This guy can be blacklisted, and all five copies will be cut off.

The books he wrote are all about eunuchs, so don't vote for them

Do all names have to be like this to catch people's attention?

Do you need it? You write so thoughtfully! If you want to write about a monk, feel free to write about it! It has to be so dark! So annoying! ! !

Cut to rule forever😤😤

Damn it, updated eight days ago, the editor is so crazy about you, this eunuch is also recommended

Sure enough, it was cut. I knew it when I left that comment 🙂

I got drunk and gave up decisively by using the first person pronoun.