My Mirror Can Level Up

I would like to give the author a suggestion. I have only read Chapter 14, and I feel that I am fascinated by the dialogue between different places at the same time. Only those who have read the original work in its entirety (I have not read A Chinese Ghost Story) can restore your dialogue and who is saying it and why. Then the pace is too fast. I could use more description. I hope that the protagonist's golden finger explosion rate settings and records of things can be slowly brought out. For example, I saw two colors of blood on the 12th floor of the blood training. The low-grade wind spirit root of the harpy that was brushed in the main world is gone. Otherwise, it should be There are three types of spiritual roots that should be written, and I don't know if there are any left out. Because the pace is too fast, I skipped it when I felt that I couldn't understand it. Many novels that travel through the worlds just randomly take some worlds or write a world for too long, which will make people not want to read and skip it, or let them go to the eunuch. Hope these suggestions help

There are too many mistakes. The author should go back and correct them slowly.

I saw that your book suddenly lost contact!

Already collected, come on, please come back for a visit

Why doesn't the Great Emperor of Immortal Kingdom have any brothers who know about it?

I thought it was a new book, but I changed the name without changing the entire book.

Author, does this book have a female protagonist?

I read the introduction and read the book reviews to see if it is a projection of the heavens and a mechanism. .