Honor and Peace

The author writes very well, and I have read other works, so I came here to take a look. The writing is precise and clear, and it looks very relaxed and enjoyable. Worth paying attention to

Ji Xie is so annoying. Wait until she reaches the third-bedroom position and still insists on talking about the concept of a big family. Then she can ask others. She can stand and talk without getting tired. She is more hateful than a pure evil person. At least she is selfish for herself.

I wish the male lead wasn't Ji.

Look, the Xie family is like this. They not only bully and exploit the third family, but where did the Ji Xie family come from with such a big face and rely on their elders to ask others to take care of everyone and protect everyone? It's good enough if you don't beat him to pieces.

I really don't like this Mr. Ji Xie. If you have the ability to ensure the stability and unity of a large family, why don't you first get back the embezzled dowry from your deceased mother? The third room works for the emperor's grandson, and it's not like he owes him anything.

Come on, 4 recommendation votes every day,

The format is too messy, there are no paragraphs, only single sentences. The heroine's character is not stable, and she doesn't know how old she was in her previous life. She doesn't feel very mature. From the introduction, I thought she was a scheming one.

It's a sentence but not a paragraph... It's so hard to read 🥱 and the relationship between the characters is not clear. Maybe it's my problem. Now Mrs. Sun and now Mrs. Xie are the same person? For example... "The biggest advantage of a person who is full of problems is that when you want to give up, the reasons are ready. What's more, Mr. Xie is also a capable official. . Otherwise, it would not be possible to survive in the Imperial College for so many years. People know when to give some excuses to the superiors, and at the same time, they know how to protect themselves. If you are really impeached, you can only reprimand him, but you can't shake the foundation. When it comes to building a sense of existence, it's like this time, even if Xie Ruozheng's affairs are really verified, so what? It's not his name. The grandson gave his penis to the crown prince? With so many officials in the capital, which official would know everything about his own children and grandchildren? When the emperor wanted to re-employ you, he wished that your son and grandson's pigtails could be combed. It's everywhere." This paragraph, integrated: "The biggest advantage of a person who is full of problems is that when you want to give up, the reasons are ready. What's more. Besides, Mr. Xie is considered a capable official. Otherwise, he would not have been able to stand in the Imperial College for so many years. He knows when to give some excuses to the superiors, and at the same time, he knows how to protect himself. Such excuses are really insignificant. After impeachment, a few words of reprimand could not shake the foundation. Just like this time, even if Xie Ruozheng's affairs were verified, so what? There are so many officials, who knows everything about his children and grandchildren? When the emperor wants to re-appoint you, he would like your sons and grandsons to have their pigtails everywhere! " Would it be better?

The plot is too slow, too wordy, and there are too many psychological activities. Can it be more concise? If not, I have no choice but to stop pursuing it.

The character of the heroine is very simple, she is not the kind of strong woman who can handle everything, but she grows up by living with the ancients. Good.