Open the Pokémon World in the MC Way

Personal factors and position: To be honest, I don't like this book (Note that I am talking about me). This book looks a bit like "The Return of the Crooked Dragon King". Secondly, I don't really agree with the MC Pokémon mod (I have played related mods, but I didn't choose a good server). In the end, I just couldn't read it (It feels a bit watery and novice) Switch to Shennong's stance: 1. Directly persuade him to quit at the beginning (it is easy to think of it as the King of War system) 2. Very watery (I hope the author can improve the quality) 3. Add settings very casually (you will know after watching it) 4. The plot is a little confusing (I think it is confusing, you have to speak up if you have different opinions) 5. This kind of MC MOD writing is considered a niche among niches, and the author is probably the first to write it. It is easy to write problems 6. The mod elf writing itself is difficult to write. The author also writes this kind of advanced mod elf writing, which is easy to write. Please pay attention to control the ℃.

The big sea is all water.

Jiangjiang is here, bringing Xiao Sheng Pan-fried Buns, Fried Soybean Noodles, hot fried dumplings with scallion oil and egg custard to support her. I strongly support the great book, yeah yeah!

Some friends reported that they don't know what the level setting is. Indeed, no one read my last book. Here I will share the level setting. Newborn Pokémon that reach level 40 can be called elite Pokémon, which are also low-level Pokémon. Pokémon with levels from 40 to 60 are high-level, experienced and quasi-kings at level 70. Level 80 is what people usually call king-level. Level 90 and above are championship-level Pokémon.

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Good guy, I actually wrote about the subject that I had been thinking about. 👍

I like MC very much, and I like to play with multiple people the most, so I like to play servers, because I can't play single-player. I often play pure survival servers, electricity-generating servers, and faction war servers. As for those mod servers, I have only played Pokémon servers, but in China... Many of them are disgusting, and they either run away or run away. It just costs money to lock the synthesis of some key items. Of course, I don't feel disgusted when I say this. After all, they have to live... Having said this, I just want to complain The author has put the two worlds I like together, I am looking forward to it By the way, are there anyone who wants to play MC together? I am surrounded by people who are attracted by King and Chicken, and almost no one plays MC. I created a group and welcome cube people who also like MC to chat together. Daily chat is also possible 😁

Since it is an invincible article, either don't write about combat, or kill the opponent instantly during combat. Normally, the king can kill the quasi-king in an instant. If you follow your settings, it doesn't matter whether you have high-end combat power or not. The game is a game and the reality is reality. In the game, level five elves can hurt level 100s. In reality, can hundreds of novice elves put together a single skill and defeat the master elves directly?

It takes so much effort for a level 100 veteran to defeat the level 80 Cross Bat and the level 79 Scorpion King. That's too much waste.

The overall article is too watery, the audience itself is not wide, and those within the audience don't want to read your settings at all, and they still have trouble with the settings from time to time. The writing style is not suitable for this, it is just a popular one, and the advantages it has so far are that it updates quickly and stably.

Classic old jokes

Let me tell you, some people still don't know what to say about me after cursing someone. You said my writing is not good and I admit it, but some comments were too vicious and I deleted them and banned them permanently. I would like to make a statement here. It doesn't matter if you say my books are not good, or if you don't want to read them or delete them, please don't curse people, especially personal attacks. I hate the kind of people who think they are noble after scolding others. You can throw away the book if it doesn't look good. No one can say that, but if you curse someone if it doesn't look good, that's what I can't stand. Even if you don't blame someone, you have left bad things in my book. Writing a book is also a kind of hard work. You can say that my writing is not good, but really please don't use swear words. Anyone who reads curse words will feel uncomfortable. This will leave a bad impact on future generations, especially those who do not name people. Who knows who you are talking about.

At first I thought you were good at knocking off a Pokémon🐶

Forget the 6 starting treasures, and get a bunch of mythical beasts. Do you really think that the mythical beasts and the top management are all fools? It's too invincible, which is boring. The story of treasures is about the bond and interaction between people and treasures. Goodbye

Emmmm, let me tell you something first. I originally wrote this book casually. I originally planned to use MC to attract attention, so I used this title. In fact, I am still a bkm fan. As for what you said, I will consider it. People who have played the original module know that there is nothing interesting about the original module after getting a taste of it. I can only watch and write. Of course, I have already prepared to arrange the MC elements, but again, it depends on the results in the end. Only if I get good grades can I continue to write and the assignments can appear. If I don't get good grades, it's no use. This is also my first time trying to write this kind of book. I will open a book club in the future. Friends who have suggestions and opinions can put them forward in the group, and I will think about it carefully. I can talk as much as I want. As for what I will write about when this book is finished, whether it is unlimited fandom or individual fandom, I am still considering it.

Match any one

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that this subject matter is very good, but the writing is a bit vague and does not have much realism. There is not much interaction with the elves, and the daily life is not very attractive. It feels a bit floating. Maybe I'm too picky...

This book, for me, an old bookworm, always feels weird. Let me talk about the feeling first. From the first chapter, it feels square, not round at all, crawling,,,,, cough cough, From the beginning, the entire article has been introduced in a rigid way. Shell Dream directly talks about the data and writes about the protagonist directly. If there is no communication between the protagonist and the Pokemon, there is no communication between the protagonist and the Pokemon, or even a little emotion, and they will just fight dryly. If the protagonist cannot be expressed, If the mellow story with Pokémon is just to show off your fighting power, you might as well write MC directly. The whole chapter is full of stories and is interspersed with various explanations from the author. When reading, it always feels like hard dry bread filled with water and stuffed into your mouth. Let's talk about the MC factor. At the beginning, the entire MC ability split was one of the author's biggest failures. I have never played this module, but I have played various normal versions. If at the beginning, when the protagonist and Pokémon arrive, it would be better to rely on MC and Pokémon's various abilities to survive in the wilderness, and to write two or three chapters of various stories about getting along with them, and finally see humans entering the real new town. But when I just read the first chapter, I was confused, what is this, what is that I can't tell what it is. The fragments of MC can be modified into weapon mods, such as red matter sets, swords, etc. Then when I found Jirachi and saw that it was seriously injured, I drew my sword and slaughtered the mythical beast that bullied it. Then there are various explanations. Isn't it good for you to issue a leaflet? It has to be written in the article, and no one can understand the four different images, and the sense of instant substitution is gone. Do you know, author, why so few other people write novels with two concepts like your Pokémon and MC? First of all, let's talk about two concepts. If you want to write about two concepts, then these two concepts must be balanced. To be precise, two concepts are interspersed in the article at the same time, no more, no less. At the beginning, there was almost no MC concept, and Pokémon was dry, Then there is the concept of the world. Either replace and connect with the original protagonist, or stay farther away from the protagonist, and slowly interfere with each other through the butterfly effect. If something happens, we will meet, and if nothing happens, we will hurt the protagonist through the air. Finally, I recommend the author to read the elf novels and mc novels for a while. If you want to intersperse two concepts at the same time, the protagonist's bond with Pokémon in the elf novels and the great anti-Newton power in mc are indispensable. Of course, you can also use this article as a practice. When you fail to write, it will be the day you become a god, because after this, your foundation will allow you to write a godlike work. Thank you ——A 17-year-old bookworm who has been reading novels for six years. He is young and has low emotional intelligence, so some words may accidentally hurt you.

I often see people saying they are dissatisfied that two max-level Pokémon can't kill a king and a quasi-king when they bully one. Here I want to say something. Luo Yucun was an ordinary person in his previous life, and the situation is naturally different after time travel. After all, Pokémon are living creatures. Is it possible that you, an adult, can bully six or seven people who are almost adults and not fall over? Luo Yucun didn't have much experience at that time, brother. As the saying goes, Pokémon trainer is a profession after all. Without a deep understanding, you will be like a kid with a weapon facing an adult. I hope you can understand more. The previous chapter is locked and cannot be changed, so post it in the circle

Is he the only one who has written such a good subject? Is there anyone else? This author's writing is not very good. If you want to fight, if you don't fight, you can just spray flames. If you want to live, there will be no daily life.

This protagonist's name makes people want to read it. Old-fashioned, not as good as Li Yucun or Wang Yucun.

Author-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)

Am I the only one who thinks there is something wrong with this writing? . . After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it when two people from Team Rocket came to snatch Pokémon. First, they said that the eldest brother among the two was a quasi-king-level trainer, and then they said that only two Pokémon were released to snatch them. One of the Scorpios had not yet evolved (1, two, 2. Scorpios had not evolved. Can this be called a quasi-king?) Then in the next chapter, I was shocked. Scorpio directly turned into a Scorpion King, and then turned two pages and turned into a Scorpion again (???)

It looks very awkward, and I feel like there are a lot of things that haven't been handled well.

The attitude towards Stingy was also not good later on. Although I knew it was for its own good, I still couldn't stand it. It said that Goku could train on his own but didn't write it down. There was little interaction with the newly conquered Pokémon, which was basically nothing to watch.

What's the point of going out with 6 gods at the beginning?

Isn't this a Minecraft Pokémon mod? Dog

What you wrote is not clear to me. Some places cannot be explained clearly. It feels like you have skipped something.

The progress of your writing is too slow. There are some places that could obviously be sped up, but those places feel too slow.

The front is fine, but the back is no longer exciting.