A Mysterious Journey Begins with Becoming a Pirate

Your title "Pirates" and "Professional Pirates" have nothing to do with pirates at all.

For now, it is a rare and good book. If you continue to write it, you may not be able to become a god with one book. It's very innovative, maybe because the story is strong and there aren't enough flaws, so there isn't much discussion. It's very well written, I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. I have been looking through the list every day to find a good book, but I can't find it. I have forgotten how I discovered this book. It is so unreasonably popular. In addition, there are a few small problems 1. The skill effect is a bit too strong. It is only level 2 or 3 now. Although the explanation is very reasonable, I am worried about whether the author's imagination can continue to write the protagonist when the level is high. 2. There are too few extraordinary creatures appearing. There are only a few types at present. Logically speaking, there should be quite a lot? After all, the first time I entered a cave, there was an extraordinary snake. I haven't encountered it after wandering at sea and in the wild for so long... The ingredients for the potion have no source 3. It seems that there is no extraordinary family at present? It stands to reason that some families should collect a lot of secret curses, which can be reused, to cultivate their combat power. Shouldn't everyone be short of secret curses? (It seems that most of the things the protagonist encounters are quite lacking) 4. The character levels are a bit disconnected. There are dozens of evil gods and gods. The sixth and seventh levels have not been described yet?

After reading the first ten chapters, I think it is not as good as what was said in the comment section. The protagonist is an ordinary person. He is not afraid when encountering pirates who plunder and kill people. Later, when he goes on a pirate ship and encounters mysterious events, he may die, and the protagonist has no fear or regret. (Of course, if the protagonist is set to be a Luffy template, I didn't say it) Moreover, the town where the protagonist is located is an important provincial capital, and the pirates are not strong. How can they have the courage to rob an empire city? Pirate attacks occurred just before. Not only did the empire still have no defenses, there was no response such as retaliation to the two attacks, which is obviously unreasonable. In addition, the protagonist can walk to the beach, which means that the pirate raiding place and the banquet are not far away. Will there always be people talking about the pirate attack afterwards? But later on, the protagonist's family had no idea that the pirates were coming, and they found out about it through the newspaper two days later.

Of these three choices, the princess is obviously the best, right? What else would you choose to be a free pirate? Is the author a minor? This is the second best, choose the worst among three choices...

From the background and setting of the novel, it can be seen that it was carefully prepared and quite innovative. The author still has strong writing skills, but his sister really felt uncomfortable watching it. We do not rule out the influence of the professional characteristics of witches. Personally, I feel that his sister has a perverse personality and is very controlling and possessive. This seems to be in line with people's perception of witches. But from the perspective of pollution and loss of control in the book, the more obvious these characteristics are, the closer it is to losing control. The male protagonist is a free pirate. As a result, all the skills he can learn are arranged, and Goldfinger doesn't have much description. The proportion of the male protagonist in the book is about the same as that of the younger sister, but in terms of importance, the younger sister has always been the one who connects and promotes the development of the plot. The male protagonist felt to me not important at all, just a tool to fill the void. So actually the younger sister is the real protagonist! I don't know how the author arranged the outline. Judging from the title of the book, it should have a pirate (male protagonist) as the protagonist. If there are two protagonists, one protagonist and one protagonist. Personally, I feel that it is better to separate the two people. Dual-line writing doubles the plot, and the middle can also complement each other. If two people are always writing together, it will feel that the hierarchical relationship between the main and secondary protagonists cannot be highlighted, and it can easily lead to one of the characters being marginalized in the process of importance and plot development (just like the male protagonist). Finally, most of the positive users in the book club have not experienced it for more than 40 days. To be honest, it is quite embarrassing. I suggest that the author should think more about the relationship between the plot and the characters, and not waste such a good setting.

Elegant woman

Diaosi travels through time and behaves like Diaosi

It can be seen that the author has made full preparations to write this novel. The road to becoming a god must be very difficult. I support the author greatly!

The beginning is not attractive at all, and no matter how good it is later, it will be in vain.

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