Douluo: Heavenly Dragon from Another World

Another protagonist who can't move when he sees a woman?

This book is really rubbish, with more than two million words of at least ordinary nonsense. Is it necessary to check for plagiarism when writing a paper or something? Damn it, there is a chapter in the middle to write an evaluation of the seven elemental gods of the divine world? I have read novels for ten years and no one has done this. This book really opened my eyes. The more I read, the more I read.

This protagonist is so disgusting. He is beaten and scolded, put on a pole and scolded, and is bullied without being killed. The two little girls just show their coquettishness and get rid of it. It is disgusting and poisonous.

The slight poison in the early stage is actually harmless. The real flaw is the author's writing power and imagination. Whether the items from the higher planes extracted by the Myriad Realms system are forcibly weakened, whether it still follows the main line of the original novel after a lot of plot changes, whether the protagonist is constantly entangled for several chapters out of considerations such as "interest", "whim" and "retaining trump cards" and opponents who are weak enough to kill in an instant, all these are because the author dare not write for fear of being unable to control them. Because once it is written down and the protagonist becomes too powerful and goes berserk, all the plot will be meaningless, and there will be no water left and the main plot cannot be developed. But while giving the protagonist a big hook and adding the best soul bones and soul rings, he is coy about it, which makes the author even more incompetent. I am even sure that the author does not have an outline, an important tool for controlling the rhythm of the novel, otherwise he would not shrink to the point of being almost obscene and act completely different from the character he set. The protagonist simply "just wanted to cause trouble for someone", then ran to Huo Guaan and jumped repeatedly, and finally suddenly confronted Tang Shenwang in the Qingqing Valley and almost died. Isn't it ridiculous to write such a plot? Isn't it disgusting to use the excuse of "concentrating on cultivation" to keep being ambiguous about relationships like the dull Japanese Asashi male protagonist? Every three or five chapters, a large section of memories and retellings of the original content are required, almost taking over the main role. Doesn't this affect the perception of the fandom? Regardless of whether it is cool or not, writing novels should at least have the minimum rationality. Since it is a second creation, you should come up with something of your own, instead of clinging to the original work and not daring to take a step forward. The author's writing style is not very good, and it is already top-notch in the fantasy online literary circle. It is a bit of a pity to have such a good article.

Chapter 30 begins to release the poison. Please forgive me for my weak resistance to poison. I will withdraw the book in some places.

Rubbish, what the hell is this written about? Please take it off the shelves as soon as possible.

In fact, the first part was pretty good, but when I got to Ning Tian and Wu Feng's cuteness, I just couldn't stand it anymore, so I said goodbye.

I said, does the protagonist directly plan to stay in Douluo? As a fantasy Douluo, you obviously won the Great Master, advanced fantasy, and the cultivation method of the world of immortality. With a little bit of cultivation, you can easily crush Tang San to death, but how have you been weakened? It's similar to Tang San's martial arts skills. Even if it's the White Dragon Emperor's ability, I remember that the Red Dragon Emperor in the late Demon High School could explode into stars, but Tang San could barely do it in the fourth part. Even if all of these don't work, what if one day you get a cheat that defies the will of the gods? Like Ultraman? Do you understand if you casually blow up the world of gods? Scared Tang San, are you a Douluo?

After reading Chapter 34, I can be considered the Shennong of Douluo fans, but this one. . . I really can't stand it, it's disgusting, I can't watch it, it's poisonous to people. The main character is a loser. The elder of the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect attacked the protagonist just now. The protagonist used props to threaten and severely injure the elder, and even had the chance to kill him. But in the end, because of two words from Ning Tian and Wu Feng, he was spared? How could you let him go? Can it be seen that you, the author of Wu Feng in the previous article, wrote impure female villains, and you let them go just because of two sentences? In the previous chapter, it was said: Even if you can't keep a titled Douluo, you can let him go now. Are you here to feel sick? This book is not recommended. If you can hold back, just read it. Otherwise, don't read it. It's disgusting.

Maybe only loyal fans of Douluo can read this book. If you are not a fan of Douluo, it is simply poisonous! The purpose of weakening various items is to set off the power of Douluo Continent, and the author has made secondary settings for many things. The original things are only about 1% effective!

Hey hey hey

I present this picture to express my respect for the female version of Huo Gua

The character of the protagonist has fallen apart since he met Ning Tian Wu Feng. He is the type who can't walk when he meets a woman. The flirty operation of giving away soul bones later is even more speechless. Moreover, it should be a harem story, and the so-called Douluo Continent depicts them both as too beautiful. I want to know how many unattractive women there are in Douluo Continent? Farewell! See you soon.

I have never seen a novel like this. It is clear that the main character is lustful (it can be seen from the beginning that Ning Tian Wu Feng can forgive his hatred by being cute), but there is no heroine, and he is entangled with Wang Dong. He is almost awesome but is not awesome anymore and gives it away. He keeps licking Huo Yuhao. There is a long section where Huo Yuhao is pretending to be awesome. Readers will not like this. Of course, the most important issue is the heroine. Most novels need a heroine to be fun, but there are more than a thousand chapters and the heroine has not yet been determined. Finally, we have Gu Yuena. You have to be pretentious and write hostile. If you want to write about hostility, just write about hostility. If it doesn't work, just treat it like Tang Wulin. But how do you write it? When the enemy in the abyss threatens, the relationship between the two of them does not increase at all, but becomes more hostile. Author, you have to remember that the most important thing when writing a fanfic is to make readers happy, and there must be a female protagonist. This is not an invincible novel. In short, it is getting more and more poisonous. Finally, I hope the heroine will be Gu Yuena.

He was so poisonous, others were about to kill him, but the two women pretended to be pitiful and cute, so he decided not to kill him. It was so poisonous that even Shen Nong couldn't bear it.

Hello everyone, I am the author Huo Lan. The author is a student. I have a lot of courses and academic projects recently, so I don't pay much attention to the book circle. Huo Lan would like to thank the readers who commented in the book circle and the readers who recommended the author. Thank you very much. As for the question about the heroine raised by Feng Yu Yufeng book friend, Huo Lan has some ideas but has not yet written the article in detail. If you have any comments, you can leave a message in the book friend circle, and the author will make reference based on the situation. I would like to thank you all again for your support. There are no unexpected conditions in this book and it will never be eunuch. It will definitely be written to the end. The author will try his best to update it every day, and will increase the amount of daily updates after a period of time. Finally, I hope you can support me a lot. Thanks!

I couldn't stand it anymore, so when I saw the woman, I knelt down and kept licking the protagonist. Everyone knows that you have to take the resources for yourself, right? Even if you give up the first place in the competition, why do you want to find resources if you give up everything? With your broken system? The elixirs inherited and practiced by a given alchemist are at the same level as the Xuanshui elixir. Several high-level fantasy plane things can only be upgraded to a few levels. The body is stronger. Is this system useful? Why don't you write martial arts novels if you don't even use martial arts? ? ? ?

It should be renamed Douluo: Dog Lick from Another World

I was thinking about the lovesickness. You picked it off and gave it to Dong'er, but in the end, it became Huo Yuhao's?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, and summarizing what was said in the comment section, this fan has been having an affair with the heroine in the early stage, and then sent it to Huo Yuhao? I don't dare to watch this ntr plot anyway.

Wang Qiuer started to work as a wingman for Huo Yuhao. Huo Yuhao is really the biological father of the protagonist, and the real protagonist of this book is Huo Yuhao.

Come here because of your reputation, give me a gift + kneel and lick, open my eyes

The protagonist can't move when he sees a girl, and he also said that the original version of the peerless Tang Sect Huo Yuhao's Madonna, the protagonist is also a Madonna, it's only been a few chapters, someone wants to kill him, but when he sees the little Loli, he immediately forgives, kill coins

NtThe book has more than 100 chapters and the competition begins to insult the IQ.

After reading more than fifty chapters, I think everyone should read it. After all, I can't fight the poison alone.

Writing about Douluo like this is really awesome. I created my own protagonist as a supporting character to be Huo Yuhao's dog, and I gave him a daughter to have sex with him.

There are too many forced pretentious plots that are really disgusting. To force oneself to have a sense of existence, one has to give oneself the identity of a pill soul master to highlight the power of the pills, and one has to hide one's soul ring, or use one's soul or soul skills. Even though you think you are so powerful, isn't it just a child's play?

I won't complain about anything else, just the narrative technique. There are so many sentences and it's tiring to read one chapter on my phone. Look at the popular writers who write one or two sentences per chapter, and only say 2-3 sentences more.