Second Immortal Age

Brief comment: The discovery of the pure power gave birth to the five major fields of monks' practice. Watch the magical crow show off his skills. Book title: "The Second Immortal Chronicle" Author: Fahai is here to take you in Keywords: Xianxia, cultivation civilization Commentator: I am Lily Qingyou Book review Text: Writing novels is the dream of many people, including me. However, few people succeed and many people fail. However, there are too few authors with 630,000 words for free and still updating. When I saw it in Shenpinglou, I decided to read it. Book title: The title of "The Second Immortal Chronicle" is elegant. Judging from the title alone, it's a perfect score. Introduction: The introduction is very clear. The first part introduces the world view, and the second part introduces a magic crow. It is very humorous and attractive. Opening: In the southwest of the mainland, in the ancient shady forest, young Ye Zhen began to enter the world and experienced many hardships. Chapter 1, foreshadowing, Yonghe Village, the third realm seeker. "A new game has begun." Feiyun, with blond hair and black clothes, and green eyes, is very scary. Who is the World Seeking Envoy, Feiyun or Ye Zhen? Or, they are none of them. Let the readers come and find out the answer for themselves! In the second chapter, the lost monks, the beauties from the human monastery, Liu Qingyu and Huang Shan, and the young men in brocade clothes appeared one after another. The characters appeared one after another. It is difficult to distinguish between beauty and ugliness, and it is difficult to distinguish between moral character. Chapter 3: The Legend of Wood Spirit introduces the demon clan. There are many types of monsters, known as the Hundred Clans, who practice the five elements of metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. The preciousness of the wood spirit is that the spirit of the wood spirit can refine the nine-turn elixir that brings the dead back to life. Chapter 4 Ye Zhen came into contact with a beautiful woman for the first time, which proved that beautiful girls really cannot be messed with. Chapter 5: Monster, the ancient and broken boundary formation collapsed and dissipated, leading to the "Demon Code". Plot: Three volumes have been uploaded, namely the first volume: Tsing Yi's Soldiers, the second volume: The Shadow of the Border City, and the third volume: Blood Refining of Ancient Shu. The plot of this book is twists and turns and exciting. Writing style: The writing style of this article is smooth and unpretentious. Summary: The plot of the opening story is reasonably paced, but the reason why it is not attractive is that the characters' personalities are not distinct and there is no finishing touch. The description of the male protagonist when he first appeared was too ordinary, and it was not as impressive as Feiyun's impression on me. The author worked very hard, updating 7,000 words a day, and now it has 630,000 words and is still being updated. In order to support the author, readers can give this book a try. Maybe it's not publicized enough, so many people don't know it exists.

600,000 Words have been written in vain, and my conscience aches~~ Post a book review. First of all, this is a book of fairy grass. But the author made a fatal mistake. It's just that the start is dull, the pace is too slow, and there are too few exciting points. It's hard to attract readers like this, especially when it's a new book, it's basically just a rush. This is also a taboo in online writing. This is probably the reason why there was no contract signed. After all, people who read online articles generally don't have much patience, so it's normal to abandon the book if you don't like it. Fortunately, there are no poisonous points, and the number of words is sufficient, so some patient readers can read it. After the early preparations, the plot gradually gets better in the later stages, and there are many surprises as you watch. Bloody battles with soul refiners, fights against puppet legions, massacres in Qingtang Town, the appearance of giant beasts in the sky, and climaxes one after another. The world construction is huge and complete, with rigorous logic, the entanglements of two eras, various geographical histories, and the power system. I am looking forward to the subsequent changes in power. The text description is smooth and there is some humor in the writing. If it can use the style of the introduction, maybe it will become popular, haha~~ Well, also, there are more descriptions of fighting and less descriptions of emotional scenes, so it should be considered a passionate one. Although there will be fewer female readers, there are still many male readers who look forward to the female-less mainstream. In general, the book is very good, a bit different from the mainstream, but interesting. Come on, author! Continuous article support~~

500,000 Words are still being updated, keep up the good work

Tql, 500,000 words are still being updated 😰

Come on, we will get better and better. Sometimes we may have doubted ourselves, and sometimes we want to give up, but we don't want to leave any regrets. Doing what you like is also a very happy thing. Come on, ✊✊ Brother, see you in the world, I won't come back until you get drunk, 😄

It's free prostitution again. The author's speed is awesome 😁

I believe that on the road to becoming a god, everyone has to work hard! Follow the example of you who love literature!

Boss, I want to ask if you didn't receive the contract message, or if you did, you didn't want to sign 😰

This is the funniest introduction I've ever seen