Yabo People in the Comic World

Your character is getting worse and worse, your status is getting lower and lower, and the more you get mixed up, the more you return, you are awesome.

It's okay at first, but what's next?

Good guy, I fell asleep listening to this novel last night, and the content of my dream was roughly similar to the novel 🤤

The excellent comment section extinguished my urge to collect... They are all good people... It's so harmful and uncomfortable.

How should I put it, there is no sense of immersion at all, and it doesn't read like a novel. I have an inexplicable feeling while reading it, and I feel irritable while reading it.

Some words about the Spider Four 30 billion years of development, that's all. Did the protagonist really live that long? Or is it that the main character is Nini from Crayon Shin-chan? So you like to play "playing house". This is the perfect start. Is it fun to be a nanny? , If you really want that woman to become an Ultraman, why don't you guide her slowly, and you have to form a spider quartet, as another book friend said - the level is getting lower and lower, the status is getting lower and lower, the more you mix, the more you go back.

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Firstly, I don't know what the Yabo people are. Can you introduce them to me? Secondly, I played Ultraman at the beginning and read more than ten chapters. I still don't understand what to write. Skip to the next few dozen pictures and suddenly you see the Hateful Spider Fighting Team. I looked confused. Isn't this Marvel? What did you write about the opening of the three golden games? I feel dizzy.

Is this a monster article? I will write about daily life every day. Who would read it without Ultraman fighting monsters?

To be honest, I am already in my old age, so I should change my name to The Evil God's Nanny Career

Generally speaking, the first few pictures are readable, but the rest are basically incomprehensible.

🌿, Whoever works for him will die.

I think it's okay. Of course, the main reason is that there are no Yabo people and there are not many people in the universe.

Mr. Author, from the beginning you were talking about being an Abo people, stealing things from so-and-so people, beasts, etc. I don't know any of these guys, should I know them? If you need to know something to understand your novel, then most readers won't have the patience. I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter.

First of all, there shouldn't be too many settings in the first chapter. No one has the patience to read that. The first chapter should be simple and clear, time, place, people, what happened. That's it. There should be as few characters as possible, so readers won't be able to remember so many. The plot should not be complicated, but simple. The protagonist should be vivid and vivid. You can slowly understand the complex setting plot and so on later. You think of yourself as a chef, just like the appetizers at a meal should be light and attractive, so that people will look forward to your writing and content.

There are too many inner dramas, the writing is in a fog, and the more I read, the more confused I become.

Is there any relationship between the Arborites and Belial?

It's been a day, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this!

After reading the second chapter, to be honest, after reading the previous settings, I felt a little sorry for not continuing to cause trouble in the Ultra World.

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

Great author, to be honest, I have read Chapter 14 and still don't understand what you are writing. Although I can understand the various details separately, but when they are put together, I feel like I can't understand anything at all. This kind of writing is quite discouraging.

The writing is okay, but mainly people who are not familiar with Ultraman will not be able to understand it. Pulling the crotch later

To understand this novel, you have to read all of Ultraman before reading it.

No, it's the eunuch again. What's your author's book?

What is the relationship between Ray and Lorraine? Why do I feel weird

Come on, big brother, I think it looks pretty good, support it.