Marvel's Kamen Rider Heart

The author of this article, I am just a novice writer. I also picked up a book. But this new book allows me to understand the feelings of the majority of readers. I will continue to write. But when school starts, my updates will not be the same as now. I will update once a day. I am just a student now, and I will try my best to update at least three times a week. Thank you everyone.

A small suggestion; the author had better add the chapter number in front of the chapter name, because some people will look at the table of contents first. If there is no chapter name or chapter mark, they may think that the author is not careful enough and may be a eunuch, so they rarely click in to read. Since the chapter names have been written, it is not a problem to write out which chapter it is. Finally, the author is writing very well now. Come on, don't be a eunuch. (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)

I would like to make a suggestion, can the segments be shortened? If it is too long, it will be uncomfortable to read.

Can't you add colons and quotation marks? It looks so tiring.

The formatting persuades me to quit. Please read how other people's novels are formatted before writing a book. You have a long paragraph, and the dialogue between the characters is not separated into lines and does not need to be quoted in double quotes. It feels uncomfortable to read this book even if I have not read the paper 🤫. At least the paper does not need to distinguish which sentence is said by which character. The dialogue in your book is hidden in a large paragraph. If you don't read it carefully, you won't know who said what 🤫

Can there be more punctuation marks? It's extremely boring.

(Currently reading Chapter 2) Chinese instead of English? ! Is it possible that later translations will include translations such as witch cavalry, bastard cavalry, and imperial cavalry? ! !        ，， (Although the writing is quite good, the translation is too awkward, maybe because I read it from RX...)

I can't stand it any more. The writing is pretty good, but the translations of Hayate, Ace, and Chuangqi are really embarrassing...

I have a suggestion, brother, can you add some punctuation marks, otherwise you won't know when the protagonist is talking?

There is never a unified answer to chivalry! The spirit of every knight is unique. Find your own chivalry and burn your life to light it up! !

The main reason is that you don't use many paragraphs and only use commas and periods. It looks like a narration.

Author, please pay attention to the scheduling and segmentation. It will be very tiring to work in large groups. Also, you can separate the characters' dialogues separately. I really can't see them mixed in the sentences.

Can anything that reflects light enter the mirror world? Are you using the settings of the American version of Dragon Knight?

I haven't watched it yet, but I can accept the appearance of other knights, but I can't accept the protagonist giving Marvel a belt and transforming. If there is such a plot, please tell me and I will leave quietly

Just don't forget chivalry👍

Don't use double quotation marks when speaking, and don't break sentences into long paragraphs?

As I write this, I become obsessed with Lolita again. There are more supporting roles than the main ones. I should change the book to read Lolita in supporting roles when passing by Marvel.

This book should be an author's draft, a pilot version

I couldn't read it, a lot of words were crowded together, and there were long and long paragraphs. I suddenly lost interest in reading 😅. The numbering was messy. I think many people were persuaded to quit like this.

Author, please change the first chapter of your chapter. The punctuation marks are all confusing. Sometimes there are none when they should be there, and sometimes they are there when they shouldn't be. It makes people uncomfortable because they don't understand what you changed...

It's so miserable, it's 230 and it's not on the shelves yet…

Kamen Rider Antelope Emperor will shine in other worlds👏🏻

Overall it's pretty good, but unfortunately it's a little too sloppy in some places! The author must be a novice, he said so himself. I can't write the finale of my family at home. Well, it ended very hastily. Isn't there a version of Ultraman Light, a version of Armored Warrior, or an Ultraman you wrote yourself that can kill the opponent in seconds? Why not write it?

It feels like the finale is coming soon.

Author, let me give you an opinion. The beginning was okay. The plot becomes more confusing as it goes on. Can it be improved?

I would like to ask if you can get more Kamen Riders, because I feel a little tired of the ones I have been using. Personally, I hope the author can come back 😰

Punctuation marks really make me uncomfortable. I hope I can fix them. It really looks uncomfortable to segment them. There are many places where there should be punctuation marks but there are none. It looks uncomfortable.

Why does the author not add "" in character dialogue when writing a book? I don't know if you don't know to add it or if you don't add it on purpose, but this leads to a very poor reading experience for readers. In addition, the writing is mediocre. If these details are not done well, then this book really has little future.

To be honest, when transforming into W, it would be much more interesting to add another person. After all, they are two detectives in one. Just a whim, don't comment if you don't like it.