Immortal Disciples in the Human World

The beginning is very attractive, some parts are a bit sloppy, but the key points are very exciting, the overall direction is very good, it will definitely be a good work.

You can make the protagonist a little more low-key. He is always so high-profile, which is a bit aesthetically exhausting 🙂🙂🙂 After doing the Xiangshan Gang and the Qingcheng Sword Sect, he went to the Feiliu Sword Sect 😐😐😐. If he continues like this, he is almost numb. Let's change his posture.

I didn't expect that the level distribution is quite strict. I suddenly became more interested in the Li Jian Dynasty.

Starting from one detail, the plot is summarized so cleverly, I admire it! Admire!

I'm reading a book again. Although I'm busy with work, I still won't forget to catch up on updates.

You've got a good grasp on it, come on

Come on, author! 🌹🌹

The plot is wonderful. It's rare to see a good book with such characteristics.

Recommendations for collection, please do your best, I like every character in your book, hehe~~

Ouch, ouch, faster, faster, I can't wait anymore

I beg the book friends who read this book, or the book friends who accidentally clicked on this book, to give me some suggestions on the beginning of this novel. What are the bad parts? I want to change the beginning, but I don't know how to change it. It's uncomfortable.

The writing is very fluent and the plot is touching. It is definitely the work of a master with the greatest potential!

Damn, here I come! Constant support.

I like this book. It feels very warm and enjoyable. I must recommend it!

Second female? That's it🤤

Dear author, when will the update be added?

15 Votes support! Come on, author!

Da Da's writing skills are very solid and beautiful.

Generally speaking, the protagonist's character in a novel is more prominent. In this novel, even the characters of the supporting characters are written so delicately. I like it.

(Not reading the book, but commenting first) I heard that this book is very good, let me see how good it is?

I can't remember it clearly, but it's still very exciting. You can continue.

Dear author, please work hard and update it quickly. The suspense now is getting more and more exciting, that's what it looks like.

Prostitution for nothing? 😍🤐