Online Gaming: The Benevolent Healer

Here's a sincere piece of advice: avoid using so many "xxx dao" (a phrase from classical Chinese literature), and don't use so many "le" (another phrase from classical Chinese literature literature) at the end of sentences. It makes the writing sound very immature, and it's torture for audiobook listeners!

Just checking in. The author is truly a role model for us all; their perseverance is incredible.

In 2020, game novels not only pad their word counts with attack and defense numbers, but even items [which are bound, cannot be dropped, cannot be discarded, and can be destroyed] are being padded with word counts. Times are changing, and reading game novels will never be outdated!

Have you been misled by "Yi Yu"? He said that dialogues shouldn't always start with a prelude, and the ending should always provide that. He didn't tell you to skip the pronouns altogether. 😢😢😢 Later updates consisted of dialogue segments, but it never revealed who was speaking. At least we should know who said those words; otherwise, it's more like a series of interconnected dialogues.

The writing is quite immature; it must have been typed on a mobile phone, right? A unique error pattern of the 9-key layout is that pressing one key for three letters can easily lead to accidentally clicking the wrong character. 😄😄😄 I quite like the angle.

Looks good 👍 I especially hate it when the female supporting character's parts are dragged out.

I'm a little confused; these feelings just came out of nowhere...

The author is only 16 years old and can write such a wonderful novel, that's amazing!

Hehehe, "Don't be angry" 🙂

Wow! Senior sister, I also want to learn about games related to Traditional Chinese Medicine!