One Hundred Thousand Sword Master

After reading more than ten chapters, I didn't see the role of the system. The violent institution of the imperial court has no deterrent effect at all.

Author, what you are writing is fantasy, not martial arts. The protagonist has a problem. Here are some suggestions: For reference only First: You can add a setting. Every time the protagonist conquers a sword master, he can gain the sword master's combat experience and physical fitness. In this way, it is reasonable for the protagonist to become stronger. Second: The pace can be slowed down a bit. The enemies are injured when they are needed. As mentioned above, the enemies suffered a lot of damage, but the protagonist was not injured at all. It is time to practice and practice. Otherwise, you don't know why the protagonist is so strong. Anyway, you can't hit him from opening your eyes to closing them every day. The author may think that what he writes is all practical information, but readers will be tired after reading it. Third: After the protagonist got the plug-in, he didn't practice it. He used it directly to counter-kill the next day. It was a bit abrupt. There was really too little ink about the plug-in. If you are afraid of being discovered, you can practice in a place where no one is around. You can also write about daily life, which can also increase the number of words. For example, in the second chapter, you can write an introduction to the sword master and what bonuses it has. The protagonist will figure out how to summon it, and then summon the Bamboo Forest Ghost, describe its appearance, and experiment with its lethality. There is no need to fight all the time 🙏🙏🙏

He's just an ordinary gang leader in a town. You can hire a few killers from the Shihai Realm to kill people. Moreover, the person who was assassinated was a member of the imperial court's Jiuxing family. Wouldn't the imperial court care about this matter? There is something completely wrong with this writing.

The author's biggest mistake is that the imperial court is the most powerful, and Jiuxing Weique can't even control a small arena? Is the imperial court just a decoration? The Nine-Star Guard is really cowardly. Please, can the Nine-Star Guard be stronger? Isn't it as fragrant as Jin Yiwei?

It's so fake. An ordinary person takes a knife and starts killing the enemy. The protagonist is not injured at all. It's so fake.

To the author: This book is well written and is a good book. I don't know much about describing fighting scenes. To be precise, I can't write that kind of thing. Since I don't understand, can I ask you how to write it? The protagonist Zhang Jianyun works very hard. He does not use words like "three years later" to solve all counterattacks. The protagonist changes from a waste to a genius. This book is about the protagonist becoming powerful step by step from weak. For me, it is a very inspirational novel that tells us that anyone can become a strong person. The key is that we must take it one step at a time and be down-to-earth. emmmm The character's movements, demeanor, psychology, and details can be described in more detail. Appropriate use of some rhetorical techniques can make the article vivid and vivid. "I suddenly feel like I am writing Chinese?" ! If you keep reading this novel, you will learn more about this book. Finally, I wish this book will become popular as soon as possible! 🔥🔥🔥

Having a system is almost the same as not having a system.

The human guardian envoy is based on the setting of this book.

How do monsters use weapons? ? Have they transformed? I really can't figure out how the monster's claws are used to hold axes, hammers, and darts. It feels like they are fighting with people and giving them monster names 🙂

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